You're definitely on something right now, M. Kaunsi paagalpan ki dawai kha rahe ho aap? This is seriously crazy. Everyone is crazy. This is definitely more than a roller-coaster minus the throwing-up bags. Starting from the PM you had me smiling and then laughing right till the end of the A/N. You have to start supplying tissues for your stories; if not for crying then for laughing.
The only thing missing from this chapter was the *pause..everyone looking at each other weirdly and then the bursting out laughing noise-signs* not even pause it was non-stop. NK reminds me of those elder aunties who jump to conclusions right away and think of the worst-case scenarios; and then they need someone to go spread the "knowledge" too (the double-A cups in this case) and believe they are out to "set everyone right and do good". Add the adorable face and biceps😆 and we have a perfect combo.
Oh man, I think I'm starting to have a heavy crush on Aman! Politics has never been made more interesting than this :P I want to meet, Ricci! I'd love to see Aman and Ricci's interactions. Bechaara already seems like he doesn't say much, so in front of Ricci does he go completely chup or is he pulling out his hair? Hahahaah so typical "10 years younger the idea Marriage of Convenience". Reminds me of my cousin's now-husband's "potential- 19 year old girl-bride". Everyone and everything spelled "chaos" then. I can only imagine what your "machine" will come up with. Also, Aman's family seems like a sight to see as well. His momma must be OTT.
Is Khushi's background richie rich? Arnav's self-boosting points up "owning mills and all that" had me laughing too. Is he ever going to find out her name :P Ouuu the ear-band is just *fan*. I'd list out all the lines I was laughing at and the lines I loved but I think I'll just end up writing out your whole chapter. Plus we gotta save space!
I love how you're focusing on each and every character! I really do wonder what Khushi's "antiques" are. Probably something crazy lol! I hope the double-A cups sneak in to Miss. 296-B's place to find out what holds in the box. Since, NK is the front door neighbour (I think right?), his ticket is first!
To Khushi: it's important to fall in love with your surroundings (people) around you, and you'll find yourself falling in love with your house too (what movie is that line from? HumTum I think?)
Thank you for the PM! You made my Monday morning more bearable :) And made me grinning like a teenager crushing over the opposite-party.
"...then don't waste space"😆

Went to go find a pic of a roller-coaster cake guess who's name was out there in red⭐️
Errr-it looked red now it looks orange
Edited by Shrutee7 - 12 years ago