ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#941

interesting update...continue soon..😊

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

Is Shyaam a sicko too???

And Payal's past is horrible!!! And I have my dobts on Akaash...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#943

omg poor arjun and anji...can't believe they are dead...fantastic story getting more complexed as it progresses...continue soon...

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molten-aqua

@molten-aqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#944

is shyam suffering from split personality disorder with anjali as his alter ego??? coz in prev chapter it was told that his wife was dead and in this chapter he was talking about her and responding to malavika's ques in her name!! Is he getting close to malavika to punish her for the mistake committed by her a few years back??

so many questions to be answered!! my brain works over drive as soon as i read your updates RB!!😊

thanks for pm!! great update

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#945

It is getting complicated! So many interesting characters and so much going on. Layer after layer after layer!!! A very intelligent storyline and I hope you unravel it just as well as you are building it! Who is the punisher? My money at the moment is on Shyam!

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susanbones

@susanbones

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

In my opinion Shyam suffers from multiple personality disorder . I think he s the punisher. He s a psychiatrist...so knows well about the working of the mind...he s a chameleon and has effectively bluffed malvika about the presence of his wife...I think anjali died in a car accident which had all 4 of them involved somehow. I think Akash s wife and Tara might had had a feud over bumping Tara s car...in the hit and run case Tara killed anjali but was saved by arjun. So shyam the punisher killed both of them...I think Akash suspected Shyam s illness being his friend so Shyam played a mind game and instigated other people to kill his family and Akash understood a bit of this pattern about the intense mind game and walked in the trap layed for him into the facility for his quest for punisher. He suspected arnav behind it coz arnav was narcissistic and a brilliant manipulator so Shyam decides to play another game...he plays the same old trick and gets arnav in the facility. When he realises the equation between Tara and khushi she too gets sucked in this vortex. Arnav and Akash have figured out the punisher s pattern of killing. Arnav s innocent and in simply an admirer of his mental prowess and wants to imitate him so brainwashing khushi but then he figures out another way.

I have a tiny feeling the Shyam s manipulating Payal mentally to do those heinous crimes

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#947

i cant believe that payal was able to do that! she seems so innocent and sweet! there it proves that looks can be deceiving!

as for akash theory im not sure about it!

very interesting update!

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#948

Everyone in this one is because they want know the Punisher.

Most likely Shyam lost his wife to the Punisher and he is in here to know how that happened and who did it.

Although it is creepy that he is pretending that she is alive, it was sad to read that. Terribly sad.

Poor Payal. Emotional trauma and abuse is as horrible as physical abuses. Wonder how she deals with the everyday horrors.

Arnav the narcissistic being. He has his own amusement park in his head. He controls the roller-coasters too. Wonder why Akash's family though. Was it because he felt his father was responsible for his mother's death? And since he was being treated by Aakash's family? Or was it something else?

Many revelations in this update.

Thanks for PM.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#949

Hey RB when I read your updates my heart beats at double the speed!!!!. It keeps me on the edge all the time. What is Shyam playing at? Oh god cannot wait to read further, thanks for the pm.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#950

Wow amazing and fantastic updates, just read both chapters 14 and 15 together, both parts were brilliant.

This story is just getting so interesting and exciting by each update,

I can't believe poor Arjun has been murdered and Khushi is thinking it is the punisher, the death has left khushi quite distraught.

Poor Payal's back ground was quite heart breaking, she was emotionally tortured and when she could not take it anymore she had killed her in laws and her husband.

So Akash told khushi what Arnav is really like, he tells people to murder and also may know the punisher, he even admitted Arnav knows who killed his family, Arnav sounds so Scary.

Also Akash mentioned to khushi he had seen her before and also because of Akash, Arnav was put in the facility, very interesting.

I don't why I'm getting the feeling Arnav might know the punisher,

Quite shocking regarding Anjali, she is dead but according to Shyam he has still kept her alive and Malvika has been chatting to her online, so it must be Shyam pretending to be Anjali, very weird and spooky.

Loved the updates, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx