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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG this chapter was tooo good! Arnav is khushi kaa baap in these matters!! And khushi doesn't even know and he is in love with her! Oh dear cannot wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know why you did not want us in his mind / everyone is making assumptions about him and his feelings. But he is a very important piece of the pie as they are one as a team having already assess the population of the asylum and recognizing who their main competitor is. Of course you want an alliance with your foe if only to know what they are up to and let them think you ate on their side. They are both playing the game and the one with the less emotion involved will win. He should remember this especially since his trauma was caused by his mother's death. A bit creepy though that he had a sinister plan in place for her. Let us see who will excel at their game now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply speechless !!!
Hats off to u for such an amazing chapter!!!
I fell in love with the story all over again!!!
Arnav and khushi are alike each other in so many ways...both are individuals with extraordinary intelligence...are utterly cunning...have conniving ways...are rich and powerful...manipulative ...twisted psyche...
Both of them are drawn toward each other by their similarities and fascination for each other.
Another thing which becomes clear after this update is that arnav s not the punisher but is fascinated by him.
The revelations about arnav s stalkerish borderline creepy fascination for khushi before she entered the facility is shocking...don't know if khushi knows about arnav involvement in her case or not coz he has a lot of sources and frankly I don't think that them becoming friends and now allies is simply due to arnav s fascination for khushi. Khushi is an enigma in herself...she is a sociopath and her friendship with arnav must have some ulterior motive.
Malvika s interaction with arnav shows that she s hell bent in finding the punisher...I think she has some scores to settle as she desperation is not limited to achieving professional acknowledgement...she s playing a deeper game. She s ruthless and already paving way into Shyam s life coz she knows that Shyam maybe her weakest link coz khushi knows her game and arnav s too intelligent and manipulative for her own good. I think malvika s connected to Akash in some way. I think Akash s just pretending to be insane...he s an exceptional psychiatrist and he knows all the rules of the game. His quest for punisher has only a single link that is khushi.
I think Akash has figured out the connection between arnav and khushi and wants a sneak peak in her personality by manipulating this link.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The anomaly of Arnav! Well, that was the best chapter yet! Wait, have I already said that before??? Ha, ha - you are just a brilliant writer, this story is getting more and more complicated and I am loving it. Two crazies in the looney bin together!
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Posted: 12 years ago
About arnav s feelings about khushi...I m a bit doubtful about that.
Arnav has deep admiration and fascination about khushi...her extraordinary IQ...her twisted ways.
Earlier he simply viewed khushi as a challenge...an intelligent manipulative girl and wished to manipulate her to extent where she undergoes a personality switch. Arnav was bored and simply fascinated about the punisher and wanted to use khushi as a bait to lure the punisher just for kicks
When khushi enters the facilty for the first time...he realises that there's more to her. Khushi s pale unresponsive face sets him thinking that maybe he had analysed her all wrong...she wasn't simply a psychotic twisted killer but there was more to her. I think when she got attacked by the punisher he realises that he won't be successful in his game of using khushi as a bait...as she herself was on a quest for the punisher. He then starts getting attracted to her seeing similarities in their personalities...and opens up a bit. He lets go of some of his inhibitions about letting people close to him and enjoys it for the first time. Arnav is a loner who loves to view the world as a spectator and loves to manipulate others and observe the changes. He s done this so many times dat he s adept at reading people. He realises that it's not easy to manipulate khushi according to his whims as she has 1 personality trait which is an antithesis of his own...she s a chameleon...she switches her personality...enters the game and manipulates people.
It's then he realises that she ll make an excellent ally...like yin and yan...the conspirator and the chameleon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so damn..unexpected! I really enjoy these chapters, the ones written to explain the characters. Pretty awesome. I wonder what Khushi will do once she comes to know of this "love"
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Posted: 12 years ago
this arnav truly gives me the creeps! he sounds so dark with an evil and very complicated mind! its like toying with people give him a sadistic pleasure!

loved this unveiling of this side of arnav's character! just awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was a brilliant and awesome update, absolutely loved it.

Loved reading the update from Arnav's point of view, it was fantastic.

A very unexpected but amazing twist he actually loves her and made sure she was sent to the same facility as him.

It's quite nice that he actually believes her that she did not murder her sister,

I don't know if I have got this right, he wants to turn her into the punisher but only to find out who the real punisher is, very twisted.

Awww love his definition of love that he allows Khushi within 5 feet radius of him.

Eager to read more,

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow.. Tis is so intriguing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally got to know something from Arnav's perspective. It was indeed very interesting and brilliant piece of mind work. Kudos to you for writing so many complicated & intriguing characters. Looking forward for to read next... Thanks for the PM.

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