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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

😛

So the cool and collected Khushi brought this dark side of Tara to the surface ... 😲

what a game to play ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

loved both the updates

But I must say that this particular update is my fav till now

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

that was some strange games they played! this part was totally unexpected! khushi for sure was the one with darker character and who knows maybe tara would have had another fate if their parents had not got married! i incident can change the whole life!

super interesting update

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thesis

@thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

I get the chills wen i read this its like freddy n jason there is is no grey its jus plain black ur just an absolutly exceptional wrirer cos u have the ability to make ur readers react involuntarily either cos we get chills or we r rendered speechless

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Khushi has so much control over her actions and reactions. It is quite unexpected for a young child. She never accepted her step father and her mother's remarriage. More than often the root cause of all adulthood problems is a troubled childhood. Khushi had grown rebellious and distanced herself from everyone else. But what amazes me is Tara - how can a girl who is normal to the world have such dark side hidden in her. Khushi successfully unleashed her dark and mean side which was hidden beneath layers of an obedient and normal child. You haven't yet revealed about Khushi's step father much. Both her sister and father are involved.
A very dark update.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

I feel like Khushi knowingly/unknowingly provoked Tara to lose her cool and embark on their dangerous game.

I suppose that was their game of "Down the rabbit hole".

The major fault in Tara was that , she got too much affected by Khushi's behaviour. She gave in to her inner demons that could have been dormant always.
The quest for a happy family living together must have aggravated the problem.

The last line is cryptic.

Thanks for the PM.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Oh my God, what was that RB

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Holy mother of god.

What is this?

Oh shit.

Did Tara...listen, this is...way beyond what I could have imagined.

They were in their teens when they had started challenging the other? That means that they must have had SOME amount of inkling what could have happened..?

This is too dark.

That means Tara...she DARED Khushi to do that to her? But..WHY would she? Didn't she know she would freaking DIE?

And what's the fun in THAT?

And...I really want to know what happened to make Tara that way? She had always wanted a mother..so she got one.. I can understand though why Khushi could have become like that... no father...and her mother re-married and all..I get it..

But Tara?

This is freaking creepy.

I don't want to jump at conclusions but I can't help but deduce that Khushi killed Tara..?

But..for some very weird reason..Khushi seems Saner than Tara.. then WHY would she?

Its mind boggling. Its CRAZY. And its Awesome.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

ohk, tht was unexpected yet very interesting i must say.

did khushi brought this out in tara? i dnt think so, if you are evil and dark from inside you just needs a catalyst and its all out there, its not the fault of the catalyst i think.

wht do she think she was wrong about?

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Umm... so Khushi wasn't lying about Tara.

Tara and Khushi... I don't get it. What is the source of their anti-social behaviour? Sure they come from tragic childhoods but there doesn't seem to be any obvious sense of trauma...

I think children officially terrify me more than most adults.