ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed] - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi is a much more smart individual thn malvika.
malvika intends to play with khushi but it looks like it would be malvika getting played.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is little scary but I think she is right for Malvika! So Shyam have some idea about malvika? Khushi character is yet
To know fully!
Shyam seems to share a nice relationship with Anjali!
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Posted: 12 years ago
well whts the past of malvika...
nice update...
shyam is unable to put up the dots...
but looks like khushi has put the dots up and searched the past of malvika...
thnks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Khushi – they are trying to open her up and she seems like a pandoras box. Malvika on the other hand – she is selfish and cunning. Dangerous. I guess Shyam now has an idea what he is dealing with when working with Malvika, treating patients is the least of her interests.

Whats that childhood game? You are venturing into Stephen King territory here. I am so freaking scared..

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Posted: 12 years ago
😃 ... of course you were missed ... but we wanted to give you a breather ...


"Of course if she steps out of line and uses me in some way like her track record suggests,
I will destroy her career." She replied looking at Dr. Jha. This time Dr. Jha stared blatantly
at Khushi and the threat... Khushi means business ...

"Down the rabbit hole..." Khushi said... what kind of a game would K and her sister play ???

"1997, 2004." ... wonder what happened then with Malavika ... K seems to have done her homework ... thanks to Arjun ...

What does ECT stand for ? and why does Malvika want to perform that on K ???

Waiting ... Waiting ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update...Khushi is a smart a** ...It is very smart of her to get that court order regarding the medications...Malvika is not to be trusted...Khushi's issues have something to do with her father...Dr. Malvika does sound fishy...She has a bad record which she wants to set straight...I think she wants to prove herself and get fame by catching the Punisher and as Khushi is the only survivor she has doubled interest in her...
What does khushi mean by she is not alone in the facility? Is some insider helping her out?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't like Malvika..there's something off about her...

Very very intriguing update.



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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant and amazing update, written brilliantly.

Loved the way Khushi asked Shyam whether Malvika was in the session personally or legally and then threatened her that if she uses her in anyway she will destroy her.

I'm loving Shyam he is quite patient and calm and knows how to question khushi regarding her past, eager to read more about what occurred between khushi and her sister.

Wow loved the last part that was quite intense and khushi told Malvika that she knows what she has done in the past and that got Malvika scared and she even called khushi evil, I'm loving khushi she is strong and knows how to pull the strings towards the people she knows are a threat to her.

Regarding missing you over the past two days, I honestly thought you had taken the route of just updating twice week therefore did not request for an update.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
I absolutely loved the characterization of Khushi.

Her answers were spot-on.

Dr. Shyam seems to have good intentions, unlike Dr. Malvika.

It was a pleasure to read how Dr. Malvika's cat is finally out of the bag.

I just loved how Khushi intimidated Dr. Malvika.

"Down the rabbit hole.." makes me think a lot.

Thanks for the PM.

P.s. - I missed you in these two days.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god i cant stop reading this story
and about missing u i thought eveywriter need one week to write one update
but happy u are fast writer
hmm love this khushi i want to see the face of malvika muhaa haa haa

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