ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

Brilliant and amazing update,

So khushi is not insane or is that what she is thinking to herself, because she goes she would rather go to prison than stay in the facility.

She has asked the lawyer Arjun to get her information regarding Arnav and Akash, she also asked about Shyam because she thinks he believed her to be insane.

But Shyam is quite clever because he knows khushi is not insane and may be faking it.

Regarding the length of the update, I don't mind it being short as I prefer one update a day, so please don't change that.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

It's really interesting RB. I am loving it more, khushi faking the illness came as a surprise. I am ok with the length of the update. Thanks for the pm.

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

I have said this before. Khushi is scary as hell!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

RB, please don't worry about the length of the updates. I prefer frequent updates then lengthy ones.

Khushi is saner then normal and usecte Shyam. SHe doesn't know that he believed her to be sane and not mentally unstable.

Anjali too is a mystery.

You have written a complicated tale and I am judt waiting for the next update.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

At last a glimpse at the real girl behind all the acts! She is sane and took her only way out of jail. However as she said, this is a more dangerous place than jail. She needs to be prepared and is doing th wright thing by getting info of the most dangerous people in there but she forgot, dr. Malvika's. I don't think Anjali is evil, I don't know if she is related to Arnav in this one. My only guess is if they are related, she will be his source of info because of Shyam.

I like the length of your update and the frequency of it - it keeps the storyline fresh and moving faster than a once a week update. Please stay with this format if you can.

As for romance, well Hannibal Lecter was attracted to the character played byJodie Foster in a twisted way, why not if it happens, it happens. The story is more interesting the way it is progressing.

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

😲 Khushi's faking it??? Shyaam and Anji are cuties!

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

*Sorry! Mistake*😆

Edited by ShikhaKhushi - 12 years ago

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

nice one...

soo khushi is fooling the the people around...and dr. jha knows tht well...or assume...

yaar m totally fine with the updats length...its short but satisfying...and we also need the time to consume wht actually happened..comon yaar its thrill...

thnks for the PM...

continue soon...

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Lovely update. So all of that was acting by Khushi?

I can't seem to digest that.

Esp when she played chess with Arnav and when she flashed her scar to Shyam.

Anyways, Shyam always knew about this. And that gives another insight.

Btw, is Anjali knowledgeable or did she study with him?

The length of the update is alright because you do update frequently.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

= Part 6 =

Shyam and Anjali make a very sweet couple. I liked the perceptiveness of Anjali.
Shyam is a caring and loving husband.

It was surprising to read that Payal tried to commit suicide.

I liked that line where Dr. Malvika said that they couldn't take away the creativity.

Dr. Malvika is a highly layered character. I don't understand that why she was so eager to prove that Arnav provoked Payal.

Akash loses his temper at the drop of a hat.

But the instant slap was shocking.

Chess seems to be the game of Arnav and Khushi.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago