ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Brilliant and fantastic update, wow this story just keeps on getting more and more interesting by each update.

So poor Payal had slit her wrists and Malvika told shyam that she is suspecting Arnav to have helped her and shyam thinks he may be innocent.

Wow Akash is so scary he slapped khushi and told her she was cheating and arnav told her he needs to stop provoking or agitating him.

Arnav is quite a scary and manipulating character, he asked khushi to show him her scar and also mentioned about Payal never doing anything right.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Im spooked too.

Whats this? A manipulator and liar?

Akash's story was really horrific. I feel sorry for him.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Oh my...Too much happening... What's in Arnav's mind...

Very interesting story...

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Well!!!...I am lost at words!!!!

Is Arnav analyzing the situation as a master or manipulator!!!

He was calm while telling that to Khushi!!!!

Why he wanted to know that Khushi killed her sister or not??😕

It's like he is fully sane... but does not want to show that to others!!!

He is considering the facility as his own work area as well as home also...I don't think so he want to leave that place!!!

I guess Khushi is a beautiful liar who just don't want to show her hidden feelings or her weakness to others at the fear of being manipulated!!!

Why she said "maybe"...????😕😕...🤢

There is something more to the story and you just want to reveal it at the end by giving us all the hints for numerous stories that can be pulled out from our visions... the story's end is already calculated by you and you are just beating around the bush... but no offence because you are the writer!!!!😊

So...just update soon...and bring us more miseries!!!😉😉

I am waiting for you to give more hints Arnav and Khushi's characters!!!😊

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varshapan

@varshapan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

i've seen a mean arnav, a shrewd arnav, a morose arnav but never a scary, horrific arnav. you scored here... there's something singularly sinister about him

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dhruvilove

@dhruvilove

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

different good story n interesting characters

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

OMG! The tension is building!!loving it!! Thanks for the pm.

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

I started reading this today and I must say this is mind blowing...

Actually every character in this story makes me feel uneasy...

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underdsky

@underdsky

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#339

poor Akaash ! his story is totally messed up. Is this the same killer who attacked Khushi .. is so then who will be the next victim ? want to know more about Malvika's past.

thanks for the update

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#340

part 5:

i dnt have words to explain about aakash. wht an irony of fate cruel very cruel indeed.
loss combined with guilt tch tch. i dnt know with which emotion the blames lies more loss or guilt. i guess loss initiated it and thts why he nursed tht individual only to torment him and thn guilt took care of whtever was left of his sanity.