ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed] - Page 31

chapter 5: what an update!
akash...his inablity to save his family and thirst for revenge lead to him being a monster..to the burglar who didn't commit the sin Akash believed he did!! save the guy first and then torture him to death...only to find that guy was not guilty for the crime he was punished for...No wonder he crashed.

arnav :indeed an enigma...he's being a good boy here.i guess..possibly horrible childhood...i don't really sure whether he is mad or is a simple drug addict..if he was, then he should be in an rehab..not an asylum...what happened that he was shifted here? did he really the reason for overdosing and causing relapse for his inmates in rehab?
lot of questions regarding arnav and waiting for you give those answers.

khushi: she is something...i liked her attitude . But if Malavika is out to tame her, then she is in trouble. And she survived THE PUNISHER!
Why did the serial killer left her ?Did he/she realized that khushi didn't kill her sister or realized that Khushi really is insane ?
We have to wait for that too...

chapter 6
Manic depressive Payal tried to kill herself and Malavika thinks arnav caused it and she is disappointed that shyam thinks arnav is innocent.But the question here is ,IS ARNAV really innocent or mad enough to be so antisocial that he loves to trouble others ?

and khushi intentionally bullied Akash...hated her for that.But it was a payback i guess..I don't think she is mad in this update.she knew akash will be agitated and he did.And only arnav caught her in her act.
Khushi is afraid of arnav?.

hmmm...one hell of a story you have got here...
to be truthful I hate to comment and I simply don't like when people say I will not update if you don't comment or 300+ likes like that... But your updates make me comment by its depth and beauty of writing.Good to see some real writing other than the mushy romantic ones.
And usually in FF's Arnav super bad guy torturing poor innocent khushi. But in your stories you have given them a new light.
Reasons I love Dante's :
Great story
Good language and the way you unravel each character is marvelous!
AND YOUR FREQUENT UPDATES!
You'll leave us a point with a skipped heart beat and thankfully dont make us wait.
Continue soon and hope your doing after your fall.

That was the longest comment I ever gave, I believe. 😃

Yea I'm scared of arnav too.

Originally posted by: sisgeo

That was the longest comment I ever gave, I believe. 😃

Good for you and most awesome for me :=)

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

I have always been scared of you!

I have no idea how to respond to this...

I think I am with Shyam in this one - do not assume Arnav's guilty before verifying. I am more fearful of Malvika's. where did Arnav get all this info on Kushi? Someone on the medical team must have passed it on to him. This is what unnerved Kushi initially in their conversation. But being the quick thinker, she was able to not answer his questions. Arnav is a manipulator, I am sure he has something to do with Akash behaviour towards Kushi but pushing Payal over the edge? Not so sure of that. Maybe there is a bigger manipulator above him at the facility.

Can't stop myself from sayin that Arnav scares me too. Nice update. Hope you are fine now. Take care :)

i dont think khushi killes her sister
i think khushi doesnt get love and attention from her familie
like her mother and stepfather
like u told that khushi stole a barbie bcz her dad wouldnot buy it for her
i know childeren do things like that
and also i think she did it to get maybe more attention (dont undertstand myself why)
and maybe her mother doesnot love her and also her stepfather doesnt love her and her halfsister or stepsister would be bitchy and bulling her around and did get more attention and she doesnt
and when the killer killed her sister she just felt nothing (not happy or not sad) maybe she is in schok and just not thinking that her sister is dead
and then killer want to kill her but could not bcz she was not afraid of dieing
and i dont think she is mentaly so much disorientated that she show her chest to docter why did she do that
(i have a feeling i dont not like she was sexuel abused and thats why dont care to show her self to a man)??
and then we come to arnav i know their is something in hs familie
his father not having time and mother dead but this is not the reason why is he here and why is he behaving like that
their is something else and very grave
and i will wait and read till we know the whole truth
and then their is akash
he is sorry and and is schoked what he did to that man
but if that man was really the killer would he be hier in mental ward
and then payal whats her story

and then shayam is very intelligent docter and i like him hier

and docter malvika is so greedy woman she really want to use her patient to get publicity
really start hating her
love your story plz answer mine pm
when u have time
love y

I'm speechless!!!

Originally posted by: Raila1014

I think I am with Shyam in this one - do not assume Arnav's guilty before verifying. I am more fearful of Malvika's. where did Arnav get all this info on Kushi? Someone on the medical team must have passed it on to him. This is what unnerved Kushi initially in their conversation. But being the quick thinker, she was able to not answer his questions. Arnav is a manipulator, I am sure he has something to do with Akash behaviour towards Kushi but pushing Payal over the edge? Not so sure of that. Maybe there is a bigger manipulator above him at the facility.

Who is sane or who is not?

hey i think dr maldiv is the one who told payal and gave her idea
like she gave khushi idea what she can do with a book dont u think
i dont like that woman
she is playing her game on all of them
maybe she wants throuw arnav out of ward and dont wanne make arnav khushi friend
so that their is no one khushi can talk to bcz arnav is very manipulative and can get to know everything about khushi someday
like bringing her target to alone place so that she can attack her target without anyproblem
what say