ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

im really sorry for the late comment and i super liked both chapter 2 and 3:)

its really interesting how the patients in this psychiatric institution are coping and how everyone are different from one another!

i have a feeling that khushi may have not done for wat she is there but with these people its very difficult to understand wat they are thinking and wat their next set of action is going!

this Dr Jha seems to be very interesting!

im really looking forward to the next update:)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Wonderful part
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Wow 2 updates in one go
Chapter two - wow here was i thinkin payal was khushis sister oh well wrong again
This is getting more mysterious by the second
I'm starting to wonder if khushi wanted to be in there for protection against the guy who slashed her cause she doesn't seem insane
Chapter 3 - liked the chess game between Arnav n khushi shows how smart they r
Funny Arnav too doesn't seem to act crazy both r good at reading people looks like this goes a lot deeper
Can't wait for pieces to unravel
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n update soon

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Gawwd!!! This is the most interesting angle from which Arshi has ever been viewed!!! I'm gripped yaar! And yeah, I won't make any suppositions this time like for escape velocity😆 varna hum to pagal hi hojaayenge!😆

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Hey! :) I recently started reading your work and its fabulous! I love this story and the way you build up suspense is amazing! :) Keep it up!

--Garima

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

For Arnav and Khushi in this type of a facility they are highly intelligent, your note was truly appreciated at the end of chapter 2..as I was wondering who they really were.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

This is just fascinating...how do you do it? Get under the skin of a character so well, even one that's outside of societal norms?

Khushi's character is portrayed in every nuance and yet there are massive pieces missing so I cannot conjour her personality in my mind: I feel completely like Dr Jha in deciphering both her and Arnav. They're both a mystery and yet...drawn to each other.

I love We the People: I may be confusticated by the plot sometimes but I am drawn to that Khushi and Arnav; yet another undecipherable pair!

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Sandhya

@cindistan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

someone rightly commented, bless your bus journey...and a long one at that...i hope u keep gng for long trips and then mesmerize us with ur lovely stories...

waiting eagerly for the next update.

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Sandhya

@cindistan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

quite an interesting update...and shyam is a nice guy for a change...😉

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Very interesting...thx so much for making me aware about this story ...first time reading a totally new dimension of Arshi...it seems very intriguing ...

Excited,...very excited...