Smitar's:Finding Khushi #6 Part 21 Pg 116 (26/4)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Awww that was so sweet of arnav
and loved the update

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Smitar you capture the innocence of Khushi so well! I loved this chapter!

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Smita I've read the past few updates...just beautiful!

I loved Khushi's forthright anguish and realisation that she and Arnav are very different, but that these are differences that they can try to overcome. Khushi's best assets are her heart and her resilience...and now Arnav's love which will be like a protective shield for her. I respected Khushi's character here so much when she spoke of needing to toughen up; Arnav is right in that she is incredibly strong - she has faced so much and never let it daunt her spirit - but she cannot remain naive against the vacuous vipers that are part and parcel of Arnav's world.

Now...she's back at her best, going about making her family's life better by being a businesswoman. Arnav of course has to help! 😆 I'm glad that he only 'suggested' that customers pay a visit to her store...😆

Wonderful updates - I eagerly look forward to them every time. Your stories are just the epitome of sweet and tender, while giving us characters that are the best of what we saw on screen in the show. I will be truly sad the day you stop writing!

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Hetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

A perfect update with cute Masti and romance.
Wise step taken by Khushi SWASTIKA MISHTAAN BHANDAAR.

A wise and adorable lover Arnav who helps her without her knowledge.

The best part of this update according to me.."I KNOW.I KNOW,ARNAVJIT THAT WHEN EVER MY STEPS FALTERS , YOU WILL BE THERE
TO CATCH ME." This line shows how much she has trust on him.

Finally two chudails are out from their life.
Smitaji, keh Doon tumhe ya chup rahoon, dil mein mere aaj kya hai?
Bina kahe nahi reh paaoongi...I love you.

Rashmi sweet heart thanks.
Take care of yourselves.

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orchids8888

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Hey dear thanks for the pm.

I loved the update.

I liked Khushi's thoughtfulness of opening a sweets shop which her parents and bua can later manage once she is married off. So they wont face any financial problems. I really loved the way Khushi is thinking about her family. She is such an adorable daughter. Arnav is also always supportive of her decisions. Perfect life partners 👏 always there for each other.

I like the way you come up with new ideas dear👍🏼

Please continue soon.

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: segad
see i like this practical side of khushi.

glad that pam and sim are finally hello hi BYE BYE 😃

are her insecurities addressed? that would be good to see how she holds up to bitch# whatever who might decide to show up. i think that is important for both of them. she has to stop being so fragile and he needs to know she can stand up for their love so that he is not always having to walk on eggshells around her. cannot have a marriage where one person is always emotionally fragile and the other is always waiting for the other shoe to fall.

they (arnav-khushi) need for her (khushi) to stand up to a "bully" may be to Lisa again for all i care but she i.e.khushi needs to stand up to her. a girl who could stand up to ASR cannot fall to pieces because of lisa

Coming, darl. All good things come to those who wait... ha... Jalebi Rani cannot be put down for long!😉

Smita

PS. My OS is determined to be an SS... Sigh!😆

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: smitar
Coming, darl. All good things come to those who wait... ha... Jalebi Rani cannot be put down for long!😉

Smita

PS. My OS is determined to be an SS... Sigh!😆

OS into a SS?!

Yayy! :D

So excited! Can't wait :)