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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Oh Afya, thanks again! Am overwhelmed ! Thank you for the dedication and that too on a part I so loved!

You are welcome, Vandana. Thanks for such a wonderful feedback yet again.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
What a deal...wow! He was so callous and heartless about it...he has totally misjudged her and her intentions...he clearly does not think that apart from money there is any other force that can compel a a persons actions...bit he does not know our heroine ... her reaction was superb...kudos !
In her eyes he has totally ridiculed not just the institution of marriage but the sentiments of the people who love them and have arranged it !

He has, Hasn't he? His world revolves around money . This is his way of getting back at the past.

He things everyone else speaks the same language too. I am happy you liked Khushi's response. I wanted her to give it back.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Loved how she thinks he is completely mad and does not care two hoots for his deal or anything else ...she is not going to get intimidated by him or his behaviour ... And just thinks he is crazy and if she had met him before she would realise how crazy...loved how she walks away much to his dislike and tells him that she will only stay to listen to him when he talks sense!
Loved how she does not give him the satisfaction of seeing her crying and hurt ...not just for misinterpreting her reasons but for breaking her dreams and for putting money and greed as her motivation ! But she remains dignified and strong!

What else can the poor girl think except that he was mad? He was making the most insane statements she had ever heard.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Loved her reaction to his taking his insulin...a mad man and a druggy ! Which is how she justifies his actions and his behaviour ...Ha ha! His insanity!

And her reaction to when she find out at breakfast what it was...ha ha!

I didn't want her all sad and upset...That's why😛

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Loved the entire breakfast scene, liked how the rest of the family more than made up for his callousness and behaviour by being more than warm and welcoming...this will help her along the way...as judging by the way she behaved with him she has no plans to walk out or away...and will need the support of the family...liked La and maybe she will become her ally!

I guess so. Lets see.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Loved how she is not surprised at his attitude and how he has the last word and gets away with almost anything...( well so far at least...) but am glad she is not afraid of him! Not surprise but shocked that he is allowed do as he feels right...!

His behaviour and attitude shocks her. In a household where there are lot of elders, She notices that he seem to hold the reigns.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
I liked her spirit and her attitude ...Loved how the gifts were opened and NK trying to get information and break the ice...loved the falling into his arms and the eye lock scene from the video ...sparks will fly whether he wants or not...

I didn't want the whole atmosphere sad and gloomy. So, NK brings in the fun quotient.😛

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Cannot wait to see what happens now...Khushi VS Arnav ...my bets are on her!

Once again Afya it was brilliant!

Thanks Vandana. I am so glad you liked it. 😊

And thanks for such an awesome feedback.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: *Sanz*
I Hope Khushi Keep Getting Stronger & Don't Back Up 😳

I hope so too😳

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: ArhiVirAnya
luved d update!!<3
Arnav thinks khushi is a gold digger!
Khushi thought he is a druggiee :D
update soon!!

You have summed it up well!

Glad you loved it.😊

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii
wow... tht was fab.. i love the firebrand khushi...and arguing couple.,..its gonna be fun!!!

Thanks dear. I hope it is😆

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
Res - will comment later tonight

EDIT:

I loved the feisty Khushi. I'm glad she told him that he is insane! Because he is. I can't believe he's trying to buy her off. He doesn't know anything about her.

I am totally loving your style of writing and flow of the story. Looking forward to Sunday!

Thanks for the PM!

Thanks Nidhi. My writing style is fairly simple, I guess. I am glad you love it.

That's true! He doesn't know anything about her...but he thinks he knows her kind.

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sri91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

nice update...
Lovely family time...
Continue soon...

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: nishaipkkdian
Awesome part. But I have two complaints. First one is it is short update compare to your previous updates. Second one is usage of Hindi in dialogs. Can you translate them in English next time.

Thanks dear. Will work on both your complaints. 😊

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: irsa
very nice update
liked khushi confidence. was not afraid of arnav
so arnav thinks low of khushi, hope his opinion changes soon

Thanks. Glad you liked Khushi's personality

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: rulama
Loved it Afya,

Had thought of writing comments at leisure for the past two updates and that never happened!
So ASR is showing with the deal that he is one without much emotions!
That was quite funny Khushi thinking LG was a druggie. Poor thing! what else could she think with him shouting at her and offering a deal of pretend marriage!
Would like to know what La does and NK seems to be extremely busy!

Waiting for your next update.

Thanks Rashmi. Nice to see you on this story.

Yep, I guess he doesn't believe in emotions. He thinks he is way too tough.

Exactly! All of a sudden, She was confronted by such shocking values of a man...who happened to be her husband.

Glad you loved it.😊

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: hira2050
Khushi is right.. He is khadoos singh raizada...
How can he say such things to khushi nd dat too on their wedding night...
Kabhi kabhi khadoospan ki hadd he par kar daita hay...
Btw dear update was super awesome:)

Thanks dear. I am glad you enjoyed it.😊

He has done no wrong in his eyes...He just doesn't understand.