Swaron Os: Our flame of love will keep us alive ❤️ - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update 😊
Beautifully penned Sharon's belief made Swayam come back to his life n fulfill his promise
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOWWW...
that was filmy but very vute!
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Towards the end, it almost made me cry! But beautiful update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...👏
Edited by trisha19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunvad278

Thank you sooo much for all your comments, made my day happier 😆 and phew you guys are active and not silent readers 😛 its irritating when the forum is filled with silent readers. Ok so here's part2. If you guys want i'll write an epilogue or 2...If you all want. Which means comments and likes 😉

Nagpur Cancer Institute
"Sharon...mujhe bohot dard ho raha hai" Swayam murmered in his half consious state. "Dont worry Swayam, you'll be fine" "i shouldn't have left you, i hurt you, now I'm dying and all i care about is you" "Dr. What do we do now?" Swayam's mom asked meghana..."I think he can have a recovery he has lots of chances, but he is mentally affected...he is worried about someone...he cares deeply for..he is pinning away for her"
"Swayam..." , Sharon entered with tears streaming down her cheeks..."Swayam dont worry I'm here, your Sharon is here...we'll fight this diesease out together...I'm always there by your side."
"Who are you?" both Swayam's mom and Dr asked together. "Aunty, Dr.meghana we'll tell you all about it, please don't ask her anything...she's completely broken, and please dont hurt her more by seperating them please" Rey and Simmi requested them. The four of them left the room leaving the couple alone. While Rey and Simmi told them introduced themselves...A miracle had started to occur
Sharon kept consoling him. "Sharon...sach mein tum ho...I'm sorry for hurting you...i really didn't want you to know aboit it..." he mumbled in his state..."Ssh Swayam abhi mein yahan hoon...kuch nai hoga tumhe" "I didn't want to leave sanju, i didn't have a choice..and now i'm gonn di..." "ssh dont you dare say that! I'm here right by your side..we'll overcome this together" she said putting her finger in his lips and holding one of his hands. As his hands felt her touch, his heart instantly picked up its beats...his heart rate increased rapidly."Doctor...Doctor!!!" a panicked Sharon screamed... Panicked by her screams they rushed into the room. The doctor saw the IV meter and smiled in relief. "Don't worry, its good news, he's responding to us finaaally...now we can do the surgery...but its still risky at this stage." "Do anything but save him! I want my Swayam back!" Sharon yelled.
"Ok, but please dont cry around him, he'll get more depressed...be strong for him" doctor requested. Sharon wiped her tears and gulping down sobs said,"I will stay strong and positive for him...for our love."
"ok then, ma'am please co.e with me, you need to sign a few papers for the surgery" saying that Meghana takes Swayam's mom away from the room.
8 hours later,
The light in the operation theatre went of, while Sharon Rey and Simmi stood in different corners of the hall praying for Swayam. As doctor emerged from the OT, Rey and Simmi rushed to ask about Swayam, while his mom and Sharon waited for her answer, she looked directly at Sharon and said, "I'm sorry but, it didn't work, its bad news, Swayam is has succumbed to his diesease." Sharon crumpled to the floor broken while Swayam's mom fainted, Rey Simmi and meghana rushed to her aid while Sharon sat down, broken, trying to digest the news. Tears started flowing down her cheeks and she didn't blink the world stood still, frozen with time. Her mind cried out loud for her lost love. When out of the blue she got a flare, a flame so bright so warm, that coursed through her veins. Her heart spoke, he can't do this, he has to be alive he can't leave you here, he would never ever do that. Her mind wept more harder asking her heart to shut up, no hope was left. Her heart replied strongly, I believe in my love, our love, if it was TRUE, he still will survive. As the battle got stronger, Sharon ran into the OT where he lay, motionless. Still and quiet yet handsome as though he was in a beautiful slumber. There was a hush of silence, as Sharon decided whom she wanted to listen to. "No..." she spoke the flame burned brighter. "You can't leave me here alone, I can't and I won't live without you. You hear me?! You get back here right this instant! I told you i'll be with you, by your side, you promised you'll fight! You broke your promise! You said you'll come back, you told me to keep my heart safe! How can I, when you took my heart away with you?! You gave me your heart, I gave you mine! You told me to keep it safe! I did, look Swayam! I did! You stole my heart leaving me lifeless!" she spoke like a mad person to the corpse of her lover, showing it the golden heart he'd given her. "I love you Swayam! Please come back!" she cried. Keeping her ear against his lifeless heart, entwininig their hands, she wept into his chest which was still warm. Her mind said,"Let go Sharon, he's no more, move on please" her heart whispered,"Give it one last try, all hope isn't lost" as the new flame of hope and love coursed through her, she felt a hand gently rubbing her back, a familiar hand holding her hand entwining their fingers properly, a weak voice gurgling her name. Scared she looked up and saw his eyes open she kept her ear back on his chest, and heard his heart beat her name. The machines came alive indicating he hadn't broken his promise, and in between their palms rested their golden heart of love. She smiled a huge watery smile and he beamed back. "We made it through, we overcame it Sharon, I kept our promise, because I love you Sharon" he said his eyes shone with wonderment at first and then gently turned softer radiating pure love for the girl who bought him back to life. "I missed you so much, I hate you for leaving me, but I love you more for coming back to me Swayam" She said smiling a watery smile through her tears. "Come here" he called she went and kissed his forehead in relief and he kissed hers. "I love you" she said. "As I love you" he replied. As she drew closer towards him, the machine beeped louder, and his heart ran, making the machine go wild, and as her lips pressed onto his, gently and smoothly at first, it stopped for a minute before returning back to normally, as their kiss deepened so did their passion and love for each other.
Kaisa laga?? Please read the note above and comment 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow i luv it...iska ek aur part hoga na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow i t was really nice part...
it was a filmy one
but last main it was emotional...

nyc one
thnk u for the pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
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When are you updating? :')
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved d os... sharon belief n trust got back swayam.. even though filmy i loved it... swayam kept his promise to always b next to her was cute n nice.. loved it a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww awesome os:-):-) plz continue...

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