SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19) - Page 83

Originally posted by: Sharaa

Beautifully written Dear...

My heart goes for Arnav & Khushi's helplessness...

you r graft perfect with each update... 🤗

You r not my type... So, this is all confused Arnav able to put on...

Poor Khushi, 💔 shattering to the core...

still, she finds he care for her...

i love this Khushi, seeing positivity in every her hard times...

Loved ur portray of Devi Maiyya in their life...

Cant wait for next part dear...

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Ok Ms. Penguin!

Really loved reading your comments. 😊

How can you kiss someone so passionately and then tell them they are not your type. Yeah! I know! Only Arnav Singh Raizada can do it! What was it many used to call him in the old days?? Bipolar? 😛😆

Awwh! Did I really make you teary? I consider myself as a visual writer .. as in I write what I see and want the readers to see too. No wonder my story progresses rather slow .. .. but as long as it is ok with you, I will keep writing my super-slow stories. 😆

It was good to know the rampwalk worked for you .. I was a bit apprehensive if so much resemblance was ok with the readers. 😳 That statement has shattered her self esteem .. Bang on Sweetie. This is what happens when the person you so love and want to love you in return says something out of the line. Even if you try to rationalize, you fail.

Thank you so much for being such a sweetheart and keeping me inspired. 😊🤗

Originally posted by: vqwerty

The way u wrote abt the emotions playing in their face and in their mind was fantastic Farah di 👏🤗

Originally posted by: vqwerty

Res..

Unres...

I Loved Loved this update Farah di🤗🤗
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Sooo is anjali getting suspicious

after reading it i felt like calling arnav and asking him to hug me, poor bacha is so tensed and worried. jannu patanu.

Originally posted by: anjs

that was an awesome update...m glad that Arnav said that she isnt his type...so now if Khushi saying yes to the proposal doesnt mean a betrayal from her side...

so, is Devi maiya planning Aman to get close to Khushi, so that Arnav feels J, that would be fun to read...

ur each update, makes us want to read more, you are talented to make us fall in love with ur story and thats why we are so in tune with it, that we realize what might happen...

thank you for writing it...both ur ff's are awesome

Originally posted by: anjs

that was an awesome update...so unpredictable...and lovely...Arnav was bang on, with handling the mess...but in the process hurt khushi...but i think Arnav wanted to dress her up as the bride next and show the audience what a difference AR outfits can make...but khushi took it all wrong, and its but natural, with what he said earlier and with what she is feeling for her and her insecurity...

very eager to see what they talk bt next...update soon

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

after reading it i felt like calling arnav and asking him to hug me, poor bacha is so tensed and worried. jannu patanu.

just want to read as quickly as i can...

Originally posted by: cool_tweety

loved the update!! life isnt easy for Arnav and khushi!! i could jus think of the way khushi cried in her room after diwali!! that is the only thing that came to my mind wen i read ur update!! true, tears do have the power to make u feel a bit lighter. Loved the update Omara!! u left us in cliff hanger ofcourse😛, but this isnt a easy love story is it??If it was like any other love story it wouldn't have been this special. The fact that Arnav doesn't even know how to voice out his feelings is wat makes it more special, Arnav has to be pushed some more for him to realize how special he feels about khushi. So we are all in for it😃 But integar karna padega..aur hum karengae.😃 provide a long update next time, that is something that i will always ask for😃

Originally posted by: cool_tweety

loved loved the update. I would defi want Arnav to ask khushi what deo/perfume does she use before the story ends😆😆

I felt it was too short😭, but happy that u will be updating on Wed. I am going on a vacation hence wont be able to check it. Will see it on sunday n will comment on it.

So it was all Maddy's plan??😲
"Gloating fool," Devi Maiya exclaimed, "You are only a tool when I do the master plan."🤣🤣🤣
I love the role of Devi mayya!! 😆
She shifted her attention from Maddy to the crazy duo. If Arnav was the king of screw-ups, Khushi was no less. With these two together, it was impossible to relax.
So very true n thats wat makes it even more special!!
Felt bad after reading that this SS is ending soon. Give us some good romance before ending it😃. Bye for now.

Originally posted by: .sakshi.

Wow! It was such an emotional update..and you expressed all there emotions so beautifully!😊 Conflicts, confusions, understanding...

Originally posted by: .sakshi.

Haila! You posted precap for the next chapter and I realized that I still haven't commented on the last one..

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And the precap..Anjali!..Is she going to play cupid for these two crazy people? ;)