SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

fark padta h..qki baat 'tumhaari' h isliye fark padta h,,kisi aur ki hoti toh nai padta,,!!haye re..!wt a btfl updte..:)Khushi was w8in 4 him at d mandir..chahti toh jaa b skati thi,,bt her heart wntd d answers..she waited..n he came,.n he was ol calm..quest ans round shuru hua..bt Khushi was in no mood 2 ans him..seriously..she's answerble 2 her imm.superior..nt Mr.Raizada..:DArnav ne aaj pakka diabetes k jageh patience ki medicine li hogi..he tuk her 2 a secluded place..aaj toh dil k saare raaz kholne the..saare ans paane the..bt Khushi too was determined..dt she wont shw her tru feelings..he askd her y she left,,she wasnt ryt,,he askd her dint she no dt d JHOLA was 4 her..she dint nohe askd her..dint she no it was 4m himshe dint nohe askd her La told her sumthin..she dint no..nooo actually here she dint wnt 2 think abt it..haye..!!he went on 2 dates wid LA..bt nt wid Khshi..dt myt b d prob.she was angry..Arnav kissed her..n she was lyk OMG!!a new feeling..

she's sumtyms too naive..or tries 2 b..
date pe koi kisi ko le jaa ra toh may b dey r couples..or wud turn in future..
her ques..abt d break up part..:D

he tuk La out juz coz of Khushi?to nt let his mind think abt Khushi..?to nt actually feel nethin abt her..abi toh shuruat hai ji..aage aage dekhe hota h kya..:Dshe has 2 accpt d JHOLA..nai chahye toh..mjhe parcel kr de..haan nai toh..lollovely updte..:)thnx.:)n congrts..:)

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sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Superb update...
so many 'farak padthas''...
Both of them grilling words from the other...

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iritz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

"I asked Lavanya out because of you, Dammit !!!"

Are we heading to a full fledged confession... as usual, awesome update... and you save the best for last... your last dialogs keep readers asking for more !!!

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Beautiful update !! So Intense.

I liked the way Khushi held her ground to make Arnav confess. So finally Arnav will say what he feels.

Thanks for the update. Was waiting for it desperately.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

He cared enough o o clear the air but has to answer to the "kyun Farak padta hain? Question. Good girl for not giving in - he needs to realize why she matters so much to him. He shut her up the only way he knew - at least he is quicker than ASR on the show - no miss kiss here. Please continue soon.

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praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

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That was so soothing update...No other word suits here to describe about this update. It's like a cool zephyr at hot summer evening announcing arrival of blissful rain...exciting, overwhelming...just Soothing...⭐️

Like how Khushi did not waft away with her inner turmoil or pricking emotions...she hold her fort strongly till Arnav declared 'farak Padata Hai'...Lovted it.

Arnav true to his nature tried to make her play on his own tunes..but if he is Arnav Singh Raizada then she is Khushi Kumari Gupta...an equally competent apponenet ...he has to let his attitude washed out ...after all 'Ye Dil kisi ki sunata ha bhala'..Ohhh..what a way to make her shut up...I enetered my dreamland...

Over all it was very heartwhelming, cute , romantic update...Plz update soon...

Kyoki Hume Farak Padata Hai Damn it!!!!!!!!!!!😛

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Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Ah finally I have a good doze of my absolute favourite story till date! This chapter was so intense, gripping and so full of emotions! I couldn't help but feel, feel the frustration and internal thoughts of both sides. Visualize every single expression, the way you express feelings is out of this world. It is like a very gradual and real process. My favourite character DM made an appearance again "Just Say it Dammit"...I was so with her there. Brilliant portrayal of Khushi's thought process here she acted so maturely when she told him about a woman's heart being very fragile and it hurts more than he can see. This gave him an indication of her heartbreak too! Can I just say I love the fact that u always focus on these two and write all the conversations so beautifully that make us all imagine ourselves somewhere there in the background witnessing the whole scene!

Fantastic work please continue soon!👏

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago