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Posted: 12 years ago
Aayesha ko 'waqt' chahiye? 😕
Poor Sam!

Plz bechare ko aur mat tadpana! Jaldi jaldi se haan nikalvaana! 😳

Awesome update! Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i loved it😃
Ofcource she had to ask for more time😛...aeise dhamka ke koi i love u bolega to koi bhi ladki time maange gi hi😛
But on a serious note i just hope she makes her decision soon..poor rathod had such a tough time voicing out all that!
i loved the way you showed rathod as a teenage love struck boy who was thinking of all sort of possibilities 😛
superb vidya...u know its kind of difficult imagining rathod romancing...😆...toh it will be fun to see him do that😃
Continue soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
1 of my fav song vidya
loved the whole episode
muaah sam
u did it man
finally
phew
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello...back with a new part...hope u like it...

thanks to all you liked, commented and did commentary as well on this OS...

really really glad to read all ur comments!

Part7:

Love indeed drives people crazy….he had slowly begun to realize it now…..

He had taunted several times about people being crazily in love….he remembered his own statement once during a case

"premi aur paagal kabhi kabhi ek hi jagah dhoosra shabd isthemaal kiya jaatha hai…aur aise log apne dimaag se nahi dil se sochte hai!"…..

He chuckled at his own state now! It was no better in those moments because his heart longed to hear Aisha's yes….it longed to see her once again….it longed to hold her close to himself once!!

He kept smacking himself for the crazy thoughts "dammit Rathod!, pehle usske jawaab jaanlo….phir inn sab baatein sochna!"

************

Aisha's state was a bit different….she knew this was going to come up sometime and she would need to decide and reply to him but then when it finally came from him in the most sudden unexpected manner, she was really shocked and numbed for a while…..

She wasn't sure of what to do or how to react….and when she eventually came out of the shock, her logical side took over her heart and asked him for some time to think over……

She knew that he wasn't that very happy with her demand for time but at that moment, she couldn't think of anything else……She needed time though she wasn't going to think and decide if it was a Yes or No……She just had to think and decide when she would be ready to say Yes to him……because, whenever she replied to him, it would only be a Yes…..never a NO…..that much she had already decided….

Hadn't she heard him confess his love to her long time back?? Not once but many times….even before he finally abruptly voiced it out today!

She lay back on her bed and kept thinking about the evening……He had looked cute when he seemed to have regretted telling that to her in such a furious manner! His care, his protectiveness over her….his concern….everything reflected in his eyes and in those angry words…..She was indeed lucky to have got him….she smacked herself "got him? Get a grip girl….you haven't managed to get him yet…..tell yes to him first and then….." her words trailed off and she blushed

She smiled…..she took her phone from the side table…."he must have reached home by now.." she said to herself….."Call karke poochum??" she wondered!

Her conflicting thoughts took over her logical mind…..the debate started off on whether to call or not!

"No, itne raat mein call… kya sochenge?"

Kya sochenge?? Aur waise bhi, cant I call up and check if he reached home safely?

Zaroor kar sakthi ho….agar GF hoti toh…..par tumne abi tak haan nahi kaha Aisha….aur aise raat ko yeh baat keliye call karogi toh unne lagega ke tum bas nakhre kar rahi thi…..aur aisa bhi lagega ke kuch bhi bahaana dhoond rahi ho unnse baat karne keliye…..

Lagne dho…kya farq padtha hai…..anyways main Haan hi bolne waali hoom….

She blushed at her own thoughts…..For the first time, she had confessed to herself that she loved him too! So long, her logical mind never let her heart rule or take decisions…..but tonight, her heart ruled and spoke its honest feelings out, atleast to herself! And her mind didn't seem to create any hurdles in that!

She dialed his number without a second's delay….he spoke up in the first ring…."Hello"

*****************************

He had just freshened up and was surfing the news channels….that was his daily routine before retiring to bed…..but today, his fingers pressed the remote button mindlessly, his eyes were seeing something else, his mind and heart were somewhere else….his thoughts were about someone special and we know who it was!….

So his regular sleep time seemed to have gone for a toss or rather he wasn't aware of the passing time…..neither was sleep conquering him……

Kho Gaya Main Khayalon Mein
Ab Neend Nahin Aankhon Mein
Karvate Bas Badalta Hoon
Ab Jaagta Hoon Main Raaton Mein
Ab Doori Na Sehni Har Lamha Kehta Hain
Na Jaane Haal Mera Aisa Kyon Rehta Hain
Main Deewana Tera Bangaya Jaane Jaana
Main Fasana Tera Bangaya Jaane Jaana
Haseena Gori Gori Churaye Chori Chori
Churaye Dil Chori Chori Chori Chori Chori
Dilko Tumse Pyaar Hua Pehli Baar Hua
Tumse Pyaar Hua Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua
Pehli Baar Hua Tumse Pyaar Hua

His phone rang snapping him out of his thoughts…..Aisha's name flashed on the screen and obviously, he was happy seeing that name…..perhaps, this was the first ever unofficial or informal call from her side….usually she only called for giving him details for some case..

Though he wasn't sure why she was calling now, he was able to guess that it wasn't related to any case…..he picked it almost instantly….

Aisha: hello….its me Aisha….

Of course he knew that…he smiled to himself hearing her voice so soft from the other side!

Sameer: [the boss in him never leaves him….so in the same formal tone, he replies] haan Aisha bolo….kuch kaam tha?? I mean itne raat ko…

Aisha: [wondered what to tell him now] nahi…koyi kaam nahi…..bas aise hi…..I mean aap ghar paunch gaye kya?

Sameer grinned silently seeing her searching for words or rather reasons for having called him so late…..and also looked at the clock to check the time….it was almost one and half hour before that he had dropped her off and it was hardly 20 minutes drive to his place from hers owing to the low traffic during the late hours…so there was no chance of him not having reached home by this time….And he was sure that she knew it as well…..So her question or rather the reason was just a pretence to call!

He chose to ignore all that and just asked back "soyi nahi ab tak?? Its quite late!"

Aisha didn't have an answer for that as well….but she couldn't give up, "aap bhi nahi soye…..i mean pehle ring mein phone utaa liya?"

Sameer chuckled at her tit for tat reply….he replied "well I have my reasons par tum?? Tumaare jaagne ka koyi special wajah?

She felt as if caught off guard…..the presence of mind in her seemed to have vanished all of a sudden…..she could have told numerous reasons for her being awake but nothing came out of her mouth at that moment……Words seemed to betray her suddenly! Many things were betraying her logical self off late!

There was a silence at both ends….

He spoke up sensing silence from her end "Aisha…tum aur kuch kehna chahthi ho??"

Aisha spoke up after a second's thought "nahi…kuch khaas nahi!"

Sameer's heart voice, "tumaari harr baat mere liye ab khaas hi hogi…..so speak up something Aisha!"

Aisha's mind voice, "OMG, innke romantic baatein bhi case briefing jaisa hi hai….Why cant he speak something nice and sweet to me? Aisa lagtha hai ke agar maine kuch nahi bola toh yeh call cut kardenge…."

As she predicted, Sameer waited for a long moment for her to speak something and then replied "ok….phir kal office mein milthe hai…."

She had no choice but nod and cut the call…but he said something very cute and romantic which touched her yet again…"Aisha….main tumaare haan ka intezaar mein hoom….dont keep me waiting for too long! [pauses for a second] Bye….gud night"

She nodded "Gud night!"

Aarzoo Hain Mere Sapnon Ki
Baitha Rahoon Teri Baahon Mein
Sirf Tu Mujhe Chaahe Ab
Itna Asar Ho Meri Aahon Mein
Tu Keh De Haske To Tod Dooon Main Rasmon Ko
Marke Bhi Na Bhoolon Main Teri Kasmon Ko
Main To Aaya Hoon Yahan Pe Bas Tere Liye
Tera Tan Man Sab Hain Mere Liye
Kya Haseena Zara Sama Hai Pyaara Pyaara
Gale Lagale Yaara Yaara Yaara Yaara Yaara
Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua
Pehli Baar Hua Tumse Pyaar Hua
Chaayi Hain Betaabi Meri Jaan Kahon Main Kya Karoon
Chaayi Hain Betaabi Meri Jaan Kahon Main Kya Karoon

************************************

Days move on……Aisha wasn't able to get the right moment yet to tell him what her heart felt for him….though their eyes and heart did talk with each other, words always fell short between them…..

He didn't want to press her for a reply….he didn't want to influence her decision in any way……so he gave her the time and space she required……

Even in their casual friendly encounters, case details never stopped peeping in….So it were always cases and only cases!

******************************************

Once again, Aisha was made a target in the ETF team's fun time…..

Shree started off "So Aisha, kya chal raha hai?"

Aisha looked up and guessed what his intentions were…so she mocked him "kya chal raha hai matlab….[looking at the ceiling] fan chal raha hai…lights bhi chal rahi hai…..aur tumaara woh toota phoota laptop bhi chal raha hoga…..

Shree sported a funny face, "very funny…aaj kal Aisha madam bhi bohat mazaag karne lagi hai…."

Chotu spoke up supporting him "Aisha madam bhi ka kya matlab Shree?? Aur kaun mazaag karne lage hai???"

Shree replied mockingly while Aisha lend her ears for that curiously "aur kaun humaare Rathod sir ki baat kar raha hoom…..[grinning and looking at Aisha's reactions] shaayad propose karne ke baadh kisi ko impress karne ke khoshish mein hai!"

Aisha responded almost immediately "Shree, tumhe kaise patha???? Sacch bolo…..Kahi tum humaare phone tap toh nahi kar rahe ho na??"

Shree hi 5's Chotu and then mindlessly also Liza, then instantly rubs his hand realizing his mistake but then ignores her and gets back to the topic…."teer nishaane pe laga…dekha maine kaise sacch ko baahar nikhaala….maano ya na maano, main ek genius hoom!" [Collars up his shirt]

Liza mocks "haan haan….inn sab baaton mein toh tum genius hi ho…"

Shree stares at her…….while Aisha realizes her mistake and that she is caught in their plan and tries to slip from there when Shree stops her "aise nahi bacch sakthi Aisha…ab toh tumhe poori baat kehni hogi…ek ek detail mein…..bolo bolo!"

Though Aisha tried her best to escape, she had to give up and tell them what happened….

Shree: so madam ne waqt maanga sir se, huh??

Aisha nods……"haan…I told him that I will think it over!"

Shree taunted her "yeh sab soch ke decision lene keliye waqt hai tumaare paas, huh??

Aisha enquires "kya matlab?"

Liza took over, "ETF mein kisi ko bhi waqt nahi hai apne personal baaton keliye….so chup chaap haan bolo aur jo bhi waqt miltha hai unn ke saath romance karo…..[Winks at Shree and adds] agar BF bhi ETF se ho toh aur kya chahiye Aisha??

Aisha stares at her logic and then couldn't control her laugh…..a light blush also creeps into her cheeks…..

"Well Liza and Shree did have a point…." She thought to herself and the rest of the conversation between the other three, and the constant bickering between Shree and Liza fell into her deaf ears……

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Later that evening……….

Aisha walked into Arjun's cabin with a file "sir yeh rahi uss case file…..[he looked up at her and then at the file she held out…she guessed that he was a bit annoyed due to the delay] sorry sir, thodi dher hogayi details collect karne mein!"

Arjun took the file from her hands and as she turned to leave, he called her "Aisha…."

She turned to him and voiced out, "yes sir.."

Arjun: waqt aur haalaat kisi keliye nahi rukhtha…..

Aisha looked at him trying to understand what he meant by that….was he taunting her for the delay of the case file or was he indirectly trying to say something else…

Sensing her confusions, he got up from his chair and walked up to her and added

"Zindagi mein sahi decisions lena zaroori hai…..par usse bhi zyaadha zaroori hota hai sahi waqt pe sahi decisions lena…….aisa na ho ke sahi aur galat ki soch mein hi waqt aur zindagi nikhal jaaye….[stops and looks at her and adds in his trademark style] samjhi ya samjhaavum?"

Aisha understood what he was pointing to….well he was indeed a friend in need…..even if it was a lost friendship!

She smiled and replied back "samajh gayi Sir…"

Saying that she walked to the door….he went back to his chair……she looked to his direction once and spoke up

"yahi baat main aap se aur Sameer sir se kehna chaahthi hoom…..sahi kaun aur galat kaun sochthe sochthe waqt aur ek accha friendship kho na jaaye Sir!"

He didn't reply…neither did she want a reply from him….she went away closing the door behind her….

But she had left him in a deep thought…..perhaps she was right but there was nothing much he could do, or could he???

On the other side, she had made her decision…..yes the team and especially Arjun's words did have its impact on her……She was all set to talk to Sameer….

Usne Baath Ki Kuch Aise Dang Se
Sapne De Gaya Hazaaron Rang Ke
Rah Jaau Jaise Mein Haar Ke..
Aur Choome Vo Mujhe Pyaar Se

Pehla Nasha...Pehla Hummar
Naya Pyaar Hai...Naya Intezaar

[To be continued]

So how was it??

pls do reply...

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Posted: 12 years ago
haila so sweet and cute di ur mindblowing 👏👏👏
loved the confusion ,excitement,eagerness with which ayesha was gng thru


few lines describing ayesha's state of mind

suraj hua madham chand jalne aasmaan ye haaye
kyu pighalne laga main thehri rahi zameen chalne lagi
dhadka ye dil saans thamne lagi ho
kya ye mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
hw cutely she was talking to herself abt him and blushing😊...our strong cop has turned into a sweet girl who is madly in luv 😳
and finally after much arguement betweeen brain and heart... heart won😳

and sameer state of mind was nt different
he was also thinking of her..

rathore realised that she called her to know abt him ...and he was happy bt rathod k andar ka chief god😆
bt ayesha was at a loss of words kya baat hai ayesha 😆


omg rathod to sach mein romantic ho gaya yaar call mein last mein he stole my heart by saying
main tumhaare haan k intezaar mein hun😳dont keep me waiting fr long wow

jaane kab kaha kaise tere ho gaye kaise
hum to sochte hi reh gaye aur pyar ho gaya
mere khwab dil saanse milke ho gaye aise
tujhke dekhke aisa to kayi baar ho gaya
tu kahe dil ye tera hi rahe
aur kya kahu khabar nahi khabar nahi


omg hw did shree know abt them😲
jo bhi ho all wat he said was ryt😃

convo between ayesha-arjun was amazing ...arjun indirectly told her wat she shud do..and he was absolutely ryt... i hope arjun will think over her advice too...
so nw she wil confess her love wow😛


update soon🤗love u di


waiting to know hw will she tell him abt her feeling😳

to be honest pehle maine bhi pehla nasha wali line likhi thi(i told u hamare khayal kitne milte julte hai😆)
bt ur choice fr songs is always perfect😊



Edited by shona14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update. Shree's so cute! He found out the truth so cleverly😆
Sameer is giving Aisha her time and that's good. Loved Arjun-Aisha conversation too.

Do continue soon.
Edited by Hermione1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read the last two parts...
sorry for the late comment...😳
its becoming my habbit now...😆
both the updates are superb...
lol sam ke proposal se aisha shocked... 😆 ab dammit ke sath propose karega to yai hoga na...
aisha's feeling and reactions were beautifully portrayed...
so madam ne time manga hai...

challo glad ki uski side se bhi yes hai... yayy yupiee...
dono ke dil ka haal same hai...jo haal dil ka idhar ho rha hai wai haal dil ka udhar bhi ho rha hai... cool...
aur aisha ka conflict whether to call or not was lovely... finally call kar hi diya...
love the way everyone was teasing her and telling her to say yes... lol shree ke trap mai fass gyi... 😆
arjun's words to her about waqt were very beautiful...
finally she's gonna say yes... yayyy...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
shree is indeed a genius
aise mamlon me to hamesha hi uska dimag tez bhagta h.. 😊
raesha moment was cute.. loved their conversation on phone..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely !!
Shree ka trick bilkul dasu tha ...
Ayesha ji finally confess kar hi dengi 😉😆
Di please kiss ki time moochein ...ka ek fun part ..plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
yahoo di
awesum update
beautiful express
shree udi baba lol
arjun bhaiya company effects wow
lovely
waqt just heart touching
ab to rani me to raja lol
lovely
amazing di
love u
tc
hugs..!

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