A Little Secret (LAST UPDATE pg 37, Part NINE) COMPLETE - Page 27

khushi 's little secret created havoc in her peaceful life . Had she informed Arnav about her pregnancy lot of heart aches could have been avoided . The little relief she got in her dark life is in the form of Tara , an angel who brought old khushi back . In all this fiasco Arnav is the worst sufferer , their was nobody who could have calmed his soul . Life gave them another chance for happiness in form of twins Parth and Dev ,khushi and Arnav became proud parents of twin boys . Life is nothing but blissful for ASR with khushi and his three kids .

Such an emotional and heart-wrenching story! It brought tears to my eyes...i have always loved the stories in which Arnav is a father...and needless to mention i loved this one too... :')
thanks for coming up with this story...

OMG WHAT A WONDERFUL STORY. Tears are still rolling down my eyes

Their argument and her walkig out, being knocked down, still clutching to her child. Arnavs meeting with his child was when the tears started. Her following depression and almost vegetative state, Arnav having to look after her for even the most basic tasks as having a bath.
How she came out of that state as he could no longer take it, but their love brought them together, the one thing she had denied him before she lost her child and all hope of becoming a mother.

Tara just the name started me off agsin, then the explanation, and her bringing fatherly love in thier lives, how she held his finger and all the stresses of the day washed away.
Then the pregnancy, and eventually the birth of twins. Her family becoming complete . But most of all the tiny star that settled itself between their parents in the night sky and Arnavs confession of love for him.


Amazing story . I have to say I love your writing. The stories are do oriinalnweel done. Muuwh

Awesome story
loved it :)

Just read your story

Beautiful beyond words .I loved every bit of it. ..

Hey there..I just finished reading the story.

Ok.. Nice concept.. Read in one go..
I loved this whole concept excpt some points.. And that are my POV.. And it is necessary evryne think same..

Story start from Khushi's pregancy.. She hid it from Arnav.. The love of her lyf.. The miscarriage and yet Arnav is blaming himself... What the.. Why he is blaming himself.. Reason of miscariage is totaly Khushi..
There are so many houses where fights occured bt and this word is even common in friends get lost from my sight or whatevr.. Bt it doesn't mean do something stupidity and give reason to blame ur partner for that crime which u did.. I js thought repentence should b from Khushi's side damn nt Arnav's side..
Taara Aanand i lyk those names..

Comment is totaly personal.. I m nt bashing u nor i m saying u wrote wrong.. It was js my thinking..

Tk cr.. Sty blessed
Rest was good..