A Little Secret (LAST UPDATE pg 37, Part NINE) COMPLETE

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Heartbreaking :( PLEASHHH Let Khushi Conceive Normally .

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Its completely khushi's fault I would say...she should have trusted arnav... I don't blame him for screaming at her after not being allowed to be intimate with his own wife for so long...

U write beautifully 😊
But I'll honestly say that I loved the light hearted side of this FF more, like it was in the beginning...
I thought that he'd somehow come to know of the pregnancy, and we'd see a different light hearted track altogether.. I wasnt expecting a tragic dramatic turn or that this FF wud turn emotional, especially when they were on their honeymoon...
Anyway I trust ur excellent writing skills and hope things turn out well for arnav and Khushi😊

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Thank you so much for the honest comment! 😃 Like always, I assure you there will be a happy ending 😉 Thanks again!

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
Its completely khushi's fault I would say...she should have trusted arnav... I don't blame him for screaming at her after not being allowed to be intimate with his own wife for so long...

U write beautifully 😊
But I'll honestly say that I loved the light hearted side of this FF more, like it was in the beginning...
I thought that he'd somehow come to know of the pregnancy, and we'd see a different light hearted track altogether.. I wasnt expecting a tragic dramatic turn or that this FF wud turn emotional, especially when they were on their honeymoon...
Anyway I trust ur excellent writing skills and hope things turn out well for arnav and Khushi😊

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Some secrets can cause a lot of harm. .
U wrote it beautifully.
Are u going to cntinue this? Then pls pm me. .

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

update was heart-wrenching 😭

feeling really bad for Arshi...

do continue soon

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Hawa

@AsYa_KaBhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

ouchchhh...That was soo painfull...I wish they had atleast stayed with their child...now the guilty feeling plus the loss of the child plus the news of her conceiving going to be difficult is going to haunt them for a very long time...By the way are u going to continue or chapter six will be the last?? Plz PM me if u continue :)

And I just read all the parts and I would like to let u know that U r a beautiful writer and I am seriously becoming a big fan of ur work...looking through ur index and I appreciate all that I saw and read...u r amazing...wonderful and Fab...glad to see u and ur amazing talent...I appreciate all the time u dedicated towards all this and I got to see how u love ArHi and Sarun...I was just diagnosed with the ArHi fever and I am trying to stop myself from crying over my bad fate that let me miss this wonderful and mesmerizing jodi and IPKKND...u r feeling sorry for me na..??? I knw any1 will coz even I sometimes cry coz I missed ArHi...I am like asking myself which world was I in 2011/2012...😭😭😭😭!!