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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful story dear
taarey are so sweet in ur story
love it awesome work
do cont soon
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A very very cute update !! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Loved badmaash Rey to the core but he is also so caring.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tumse milke

Part 29

Girls finished their dance and they came to Taani and all the girls hugged Her. Taani abhi Bhi Sharma rahi thi and girls usko tease kar rahi thi Rey ka naam le-2 kar... Woh sab apni masti mein busy thi ke achanak se Taani ke Naanu wahan aa jaate hain... Sab log chup ho jaate hain and naana ji ko dekhne lagte hain ... Nana g Taani ke pass aate hain and

Naanu- Taani Kya tum mere sath stage pe gaogi...???

Everyone was shocked and surprised after hearing from naana g...

Naanu- hmm bolo Taani ?

Taani surprisingly - Kya kaha aapne Naanu ... Aap mere sath gayeinge ? Sach mein !!!!

Naanu- haan Lekin agar tum gaana chaho tou ... Main Bhi iss charity event ka part banna Chahta hoon... Kya tum meri yeh ichha poori karne mein meri help karogi ...

Taani hairan ho ke sab ki Orr dekhti hai ... Baaki sab Bhi Bahut hairan the and they were looked at Naana g with open mouthes ... Naana g Bhi unn sab ko dekhte hain...

Naanu - hmm samjh giya tum logon ne mujhe ab tak maaf nahi kiya ... Hai na?

Taani went near to him - nahi Naanu aisi koi baat nahi hai... Aapne aisa kuchh Bhi nahi kiya ke hum aapse naraz hon...

Swayam- haan Daadu Taani bilkul sahi keh rahi hai ... Aisi koi baat nahi hai... Hum sab tou iss liye hairan hain ke humne yeh expect nahi kiya tha...

Sab log- haanji Swayam is right ...

Taani- Naanu main gaongi aapke sath ... Mere liye yeh Bahut badi baat hogi Sach mein... And she hugged her naana g...

Sharon to naana g and Taani - ok daada g and Taani Kya main announce karon jaake aap logon ki performance ke baare mein ... Lekin Kya aap logon ne song decide kiya kaunsa gaana hai?

Taani- Naanu Kya hum woh gaana ga sakte hain jo aap mujhe sikhaya karte the...??

Naanu- haan wohi theek rahega ... Sharon tum jao beta announce karo jaake...

Sharon - ji Daadu ... Then to Rey - hey Rey tum Bhi chalo na mere Saath hum dono stage pe jaake announcement karte hain...

Rey- aww Maine aaj takk yeh kabhi kiya nahi I mean stage conduct ... But chalo I can try ...

Rey turns towards naana ji and touched his feet - Daanu Plz mujhe aashirbad dein ke main yeh achhe se kar paon... Mujhe Bahut darr lag raha hai ...

Naana ji held Rey from one of his ear- Bahut shaitan ho tum ... Nautanki ... Bachpan se jaanta hoon tujhe ... Darr Orr tu kabhi Bhi nahi ...

Sab log hasste hain ke naana ji ne Rey ke kaan pakde ...

Rey smiled - Daanu mere Bachpan se ya aapke Bachpan se... !!!!

Naana ji Rey ki Orr apni stick uthate hain- tum nahi sudhroge... Jaate ho ya nahi...

Rey laughed and he ran away towards stage... Taani Bhi yeh dekhke khush ho rahi thi...

Rey and Sharon was on the stage now...

Sharon- so ladies and gentlemen we hope ke aap sab iss event ko and iss evening ko enjoy kar rahe honge...

Audience was hooting and clapping...

Rey- thank you all of you for your wonderful response and we promise you that we have much more for you lovely people ... And you will get more entertainment.

Sharon- now we are going to present our next performance and that is ...

Isse pehle ke Sharon naana g and Taani ke performance ke baare mein bolti Rey beech mein bolta hai...

Rey- aww-2 hold on Sharon ... Kuchh tou surprise Rehne do yaar... We have a surprise for you guys... We have a famous classical singer jinho ne aaj se almost 25 saal pehle gaana Chhod diya tha... Woh aaj phir se aap logon ke saamne aane ja rahe hain... Bas thoda intzar karna hoga aap sab ko ... Lekin iss intzar ka phal Bahut meetha hoga or yeh hum aapko promise karte hain ... Aap log really enjoy karoge ... Orr unka sath dene yahan pe aane waali hain meri I mean hum sab ki pyari Taani ... And a smile come on his face automatically ...

Sharon- ji haan tou bas kijiye thoda intzar ...

Both left the stage and after some time naana g and Taani both were on the stage... They sat on the floor and start the song... (this song is from the movie Arakshan and it's really matching up with the situation I hope you all will like)

Everyone from Taani and Swayam family was so surprised to see naana g on the stage with Taani ... Taani's mom has tears in her eyes ... She was emotional to see all this... Baaki audience mein se Bhi Bahut saare log Taani ke naana g ke baare mein jaante the ke woh kisi zamane mein Ek achhe singer huya karte the and they were happy to see him back as a singer.

Naana g started the song and then Taani follow him...

Naana g-Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Taani-Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Naana g-Kaun Si Dor Kheeche, Kaun Si Kaate Re Kaate Re
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli

Taani-Kaun Si Dor Kheeche, Kaun Si Kaate Re Kaate Re
Saans Albeli Kahe Kaahe Mohe Baante Re Baante Re
Naana g-Kaun Si Dor Kheeche, Kaun Si Kaate Re Kaate Re

Naana g-Mann Jungle Mein Aandhi Hulchal
Patte Bhichdan Lagey
Taani-Lehar Lehar Utpaat Nadi Mein
Hridya Jwaar Sa Jaage

Naana g- Jeevan Shor Aaye Aur Jaaye
Jeevan Shor Aaye Aur Jaaye
Shaaswat Bus Sannaate Re
Shaaswat Bus Sannaate Re

Taani-Kaun Si Dor Kheeche, Kaun Si Kaate Re Kaate Re
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli

Naana g- Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli

Taani-Badey Jatan Se Fasal Lagaye, Chun Chun Beej Rachaye
Naana g -Baandh Taki Taki Ki Rakhwari, Dabiyan Kur Muskaaye
Taani-Bhaag Chirayia Badi Nithoor Hai
Naana g-Bhaag Chirayia Badi Nithoor Hai
Kaun Jo Usko Daante Re
Taani-Kaun Jo Usko Daante Re, Daante Re

Naana g-Kaun Si Dor Kheeche, Kaun Si Kaate Re Kaate Re
Both-Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli
Saans Albeli, Saans Albeli


They finished the song and everyone from the audience was feeling so emotional so they forgot to clap ... But after sometime everyone gave them a standing ovation ... And started clapping ...

Naana g and Taani dono khade hote hain and sab ko thanks bolte hain and then they left the stage... Both reached at the back of the stage... Saare unko congratulate karte hain but Rey was not there ... Taani ki aankhain usko hi Doondh rahi thi but woh kahin Bhi Nazar nahi aa raha tha... She asked from Swayam ...

Taani - bhai woh Rey kahan hain... ?

Swayam- arre abhi tou yahin tha woh pata nahi kahan chala giya ...shayad apni mom ke paas giya hoga... Waise Taani tumne or Daadu ne tou kamal hi kar Di ... You sang really very well ... Hmm mujhe nahi pata tha ke meri behan Itni achhi singer hai...

Taani - thanks bhai ... Agar Naanu sath nahi hote tou main Bhi itna achhe se na ga paati ... Achha bhai abhi aapki or Sharon Bhabi ki turn hai na... All the very best ... And she smiled...

Swayam - haan mujhe tou darr lag raha hai ... Gharwalon ke saamne Pehli baar Sharon ke sath dance kar raha hoon...

Taani- hmm koi baat nahi bhai sab theek hoga... Aap kaho tou gharwalon se baat karon main aapki or unki...

Swayam - arre nahi-2 abhi nahi ... Humare gharwalon ko tou pehle se ho doubt hai hum dono pe... Unki problem nahi ... Woh tou maan ho jayeinge but Sharon ko abhi thoda time chahiye apne dad ko convince karne ke liye...

Taani- ok bhai theek hai... Lekin kitna achha hota na agar aapki shadi Bhi hoti tou... Lekin koi baat nahi ...

Itne mein Sharon wahan aa jaati hai and woh Swayam ko ready hone bolti hai... Both left for their performance ... They started their dance on the song Ishq Shava... They were dancing but Taani was still looking for Rey ... Woh usko doondte-2 corridor mein chali jaati hai ... Rey was standing near a pole and was looking towards the sky and stars... He was looking bit sad... Taani reached there and put her hand on Rey's shoulder ... Rey turned back and saw Taani ... And try to wiped out his tears... But Taani dekh Leti hai...

Taani- Rey aap Ro rahe ho???

Rey put an artificial smile on his face- nahi tou main kion rone laga ...

Taani cupped his face- hmm jhooth Bol rahe ho aap? Mujhe pata hai aap Ro rahe the ...

Rey hugged Taani so tightly - Taani promise me tum mujhe kabhi Bhi Chhod ke nahi jaogi... Dad ke jaise...

Taani hugged him back- nahi jaongi Rey ... Bahut yaad aa rahi hai dad ki?

Rey- haan Taani ... Pata nahi kion ... Lekin Bahut yaad aa rahi hai... Sach mein...

Taani- Rey aapka poora right hai unko yaad karne ka... Orr main aapko kahin Bhi Chhod ke nahi jaane wali... Now come on cheer up... Aapko pata aapke best friends perform kar rahe hain unko cheer up karne nahi aaoge aap... Chaliye ...

Rey broke the hug- hmm Sharon and Swayam perform kar rahe hain... Aaj tou giya miyan majhnu tumhara bhai Taani ... Gabbar ko tou pehle hi dono ke Uper doubt tha aaj tou confirm ho jayega... Fass giya Swayam ... Tum dekhna aaj uski class lagegi...

Taani- aap khush ho rahe ho Rey ? Bad haan... Aapke best friends hain wo dono...

Rey- haan tou maine kab kaha ke nahi hain... Maine kitni baar kaha ke bata do ghar pe ... Perr dono maane tab na...

Taani- haan Maine Bhi yehi bola tha bhai ko...

Rey- chhodo Taani jab unko bolna hoga Bol denge...hum kion tension lein... Humko agar kisi help ke liye kaheinge hum tou unke sath hi hain...

They were busy with their talks and Adi came there...

Adi- hey love birds ... Sorry to disturb you but Rey Tumhari performance aane waali hai... So I think aap logon ko wahan aana chahiye...

Rey- ya Adi ... Thanks yaar ... Achha yaad dilaya... He turned to Taani - Taani tum aa jaana main jaake ready hota hoon ... Back stage milte hain... And he kissed her on her forehead ... Taani smiled. Rey left that place and Taani and Adi was alone there but they were walking towards the stage and they were talking...

Adi- Taani I m so happy for you... Rey is really very nice person and he loves you so much...

Taani- haan Adi tum theek keh rahe ho... I m so lucky to have Rey in my life... But kabhi-2 darr lagta hai ke agar mujhe kuchh ho giya tou ... Rey tou toot jayeinge bilkul... Abhi Bhi thodi der pehle apne dad ko yaad kar rahe the...

Adi- apne dad ko???

Taani- haan Adi Rey ke dad ko Bhi cancer tha... And she becomes sad...

Adi- oh really... That's so sad actually ...

Taani- ya... You know Adi Rey ke dad Bhi Bahut achhe singer the... Maine sune hain unke kuchh songs...

Adi- oh that's cool...mujhe Bhi dena main Bhi sunoga...

Taani - jaroor...

Yahi baatein karte-2 woh dono stage ke pass pahunch jaate hain... Yahan pe abhi-2 Swayam and Sharon ne apna performance khatam kiya tha... Rey ka naam announce ho raha tha... Rey came out from the green room and he reached near Taani and hugged her ...

Rey- I love you Taani or meri yeh performance sirf tumhare liye hai...

Taani hugged him back- I love you too Rey ...

Sabhi unko dekh rahe the and sab smile Bhi kar rahe the... Rey broke the hug and walked towards the stage ... He started his dance on the song Tum hi ho from the movie Ashqi2 ...( sorry guys can't write the movements of his dance coz I have a zero knowledge about that so you can imagine him on the song)

Rey's performance was about to finished Taani was so touched with his performance and she has tears in her eyes... Rey finished his dance ... Audience was so happy with his dance and they were hooting and clapping... Rey say thanks to them and come to the back stage ... He hugged everyone and saw that Taani has tears in her eyes ... He went close to her and Taani hugged him so tightly... Sab gang members clap kar rahe the dono ke liye...

Sharon- wow Rey you done really well ... Chha Gaye boss...

All- bilkul Rey Sharon is right ... You danced really well man...

Rey- thanks guys ... All because of Taani ... I was thinking about her when I was at the stage... And he looked at Taani ...

All- aww... That's so sweet of you...

Taani was blushing and she hide her face in Rey's chest ... Rey was smiling...

Swayam jo ke thoda awkward feel kar raha tha(you know a possessive Bhi ) topic change karta hai ...

Swayam - guys humari last performance hai so we have to get ready for that... Let's go to the green room...

Lekin Taani beech mein bolti hai... She wants to say something ...

Taani- bhai mujhe kuchh kehna hai...

Swayam - haan bolo Taani ...

Taani- Kya aapki performance ke pehle main apna Ek last gaana ga sakti hoon... Plz bhai... Bahut important hai ...

Sab log hairan the ke pehle tou unko iske baare mein kuchh pata nahi tha ... Firr achanak se Taani ko gaana gana hai...

Swayam - ok Taani you can...

Taani- thanks bhai... Kya main stage pe jaon... Adi Kya main tumhara guitar le sakti hoon...

Adi- haan kion nahi Taani ... Ofcourse Le sakti ho...

Taani- thanks Adi ... She took guitar from Adi and she reached at the stage ... She looked at Rey first and then she looked at Rey's mom jo ke chief guest ke sath baithi huyi thi... Then she took the mike and started speaking...

Taani- sorry kehna chahti hoon main aap sab ko jo bina notice ke gaane aa gayi hoon... I hope aap mujhe maaf kar doge... Main yahan iss liye hoon Kionki I want to sing for that man,.. Jinki wajah se ye hospital hai and jinke naam se yeh charity hai... Jo ke Bahut achhe insaan the ,Bahut achhe pati the (she looked at Rey's mom and unki aankhon mein aansoo the), Jo ke Bahut achhe dad the(now she looked at Rey again he also has tears in his eyes ) and Bahut hi achhe singer Bhi the... Aaj main yeh gaana jo ke unho ne hi gaaya huya hai unke liye hi gaana chahti hoon... I want to say sorry to Mom and Rey ... Main jaanti hoon ke aap log dad ko Bahut miss karte ho... Lekin mera Yakeen maane aap ...woh yahan Bhi honge Bahut khush honge aap dono ke liye... I really love both of you... She starts play the guitar... Rey and uski mom dono Bahut emotional ho rahe the... But they were very happy ke Taani ne ye sab socha...

Taani starts singing the song...

Taani-

(Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe Kal
Kal Yaad Aayenge Yeh Pal
Pal, Yeh Hain Pyaar Ke Pal
Chal, Aa Mere Sang Chal
Chal, Soche Kya
Chhoti Si Hai Zindagi
Kal Mil Jaaye To Hogi Khushnaseebi
Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe, Yaad Aayenge Yeh Pal) - 2
Shaam Ka Aanchal Odhke Aayi
Dekho Voh Raat Suhaani
Aa Likh De Hum Donon Milke
Apni Yeh Prem Kahaani
Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe, Yaad Aayenge Yeh Pal
Aane Waali Subha Jaane
Rang Kya Laaye Deewaani
Meri Chaahat Ko Rakh Lena
Jaise Koi Nishaani
Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe, Yaad Aayenge Yeh Pal
Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe Kal
Kal Yaad Aayenge Yeh Pal
Pal, Yeh Hain Pyaar Ke Pal
Chal, Aa Mere Sang Chal
Chal, Soche Kya
Chhoti Si Hai Zindagi
Kal Mil Jaaye To Hogi Khushnaseebi
Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe, Yaad Aayenge Yeh Pal - 2

Taani finished the song ... Everyone has tears in their eyes... They again stood up from their respective seats and were clapping ... Taani looked at Rey ... Rey's mom came up the stage and she hugged Taani ... And say thanks to her... Rey also come there and the trio has the group hug...

Taani to Rey and his mom- Sorry mom sorry Rey aap logon se bina poochhe Maine dad ka song gaya...

Rey's mom- nahi Taani sorry mat kaho bache... Bahut achha kiya tumne... I m so happy ... Ke tumne apne dad ko yaad kiya... Thanks beta...

Rey- haan Taani thanks...

Woh teeno back stage aate hain and sabhi Taani ko thanks bolte hain...

Rey's mom- hmmm mujhe lagta hai ke abhi last performance rehti hai bas... You guys done really well ... Mr. Chief guest Bhi Bahut khush ho rahe the and audience ka tou tum log response dekh hi chuke ho... I m proud of you guys ... Thanks beta aap sab ka...

Sharon- nahi Aunty aap thanks mat kahiye... Hum logon ko Bhi Bahut maza aaya and we feel really very gud ke humne aisa kuchh kiya hai...

Baaki sab- ji Aunty ...

Rey's mom- chalo theek hai tum log apna last performance ki tyari karo ... Main neeche jaati hoon... Event ke baad milte hain... Bye

Sab Ek sath - bye Aunty .. ...

Sab log last performance ke liye ready ho ke aate hain... And they all went on the stage and start dancing on the song Dewaangi-2 from the movie Om Shani Om... They finished it and again Sab log hooting and clapping karte hain... Chief guest gave a lecture and he was praising them and he gave a cheque of Rs. 10 Lakh for the charity ... All they were very happy... And the event finished on a happy note...

Precap- Taani's treatment and Taarey Engagement :)


Sorry sweeties for a very late update... As all of you know that I m busy with my exams ... So kaan pakad ke sorry ... Plz do like and comment on it:)

Love you all

Nicky:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it sooo much...
nd thanx 4 updating atleast nw!!!
nd ab toh jaldi update karo...
m tired of asking ppl!!!
pls...
Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was mind blowing ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
song which taani sing is one of my fav song and suits to taani's situation perfectly ๐Ÿ˜Š
awesome update ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
TaaRey engagement ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
waiting for their engagement ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part niki.
Egarly waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
the update was really nice loved it so much and most loving part was taani rey's conversation regarding rey's dad and taani's song loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ish_taarey

Res/Unres...
Nikky..Nikky..Really sorry sweetie.. Mujhe yaad hi nhi aya that I didn't unres yarr..really sorry!!
Read 27th chapter...
Awww... Humako man ki shakti dena...๐Ÿ˜‰ Nice song!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Baad me.. Rey is damn naughty ha.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Swayam toh kabbab me haddi hi hain..๐Ÿ˜† But, still love him!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
And.. Starting me Rey and Tamna ka convo...๐Ÿ˜†
Chidiya and Tota!! Hehehehe..Nice one...๐Ÿ˜›
Loved the update..

Don't say Sorry Ishq ... Thank you for your comment dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update yarr..Loved it!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Sorrry for chotu comment...
Will update soon!
Will give bada wala comment..๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
loved it a lot...
taarey emotional convo ws so nice..
n taani singing song for rey's dad ws really gud...
update soon

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