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SARA

@saara76

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

I love your update but the end was so sudden and unexpected...

Best of luck and take care

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

I only wish you had time to complete the redemption sequence as well...but I'll imagine Arrnav using all his ASR tricks to not let her go at the end of the 2 weeks... Thanks for not leaving the story halfway😊 U did your best and for that I'm glad😊 All the best for your future

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

A perfect end, loved the update.

So Arnav has 14 days hope he does woo her back.

This story has been a fantastic read,

Thanks for the PM xx

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Marvellous!!

I like stories with less number of characters and it was just the two of them here. Very sensible version of the show and quite well written. Just stumbled upon it and so glad that I did :)

Loved so many things but two parts which I want to mention are:

"Khushi what is done ... well it's done. Lets just save the sarcasm for a time when we have money and mobile network, alright?"

and

"Because I'd promised that I'd complete the six months, no matter what. After fourteen days, you can do all that and set me free. I don't want any pending thing tied down with that place and you"

"Okay"

Khushi looked away with a feeling of dissatisfaction at the way the conversation had turned out. She had expected that he would beg and grovel. And when that had not happened, she wanted to cry. But she had no idea why, for this was exactly what she had wanted. A fresh start. Then why did it feel so ... bad?

Arnav glanced at her troubled face and looked away. He had been lying when he said he would willingly let her go away. They had 14 days, there was still time.

Kudos :)

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

rather abrupt ending..but i can understand...

Take care & will Miss Ur stories!!

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momb24

@momb24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

nice and short story,well written, leaves me wanting more but i understand,good luck with everything you do.

Edited by momb24 - 12 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Loved the ending that you gave Vee...so much hope.

14 days still left and each of us can spin the tale as we deem it to fit aptly.

This story has been fun and thank you for giving a closure, its always nice to read the closing lines from the author's point of view.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

I loved the fact that you kept an open end to this story and let the readers go ahead with their own imagination.

Would have loved a fixed end but nevertheless the way you ended things promised hope...and that's all that matters.😊

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

thank you...the ending is beautiful...14 days...a long time...so we can hope for the best...thanks for the pm...

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

The goodbye note left me misty-eyed, Vee...trust me when I say this, I truly despise them...but, I am sure, we will meet...soon.., and, wish you abundant happiness, peace and prosperity !!!

Coming to the update, I loved the inner conflict that both A&K were experiencing...and, Mr.Raizada was lying about letting go...he has my support in this arduous endeavor...I am glad, that you left the denouement open for readers' to contemplate about what ensued..later..

Thank you Vee, for penning down some really wonderful stories...stories which will be treasured for long...and, for that I must thank IPK and its protagonists for inspiring readers like yourself to concoct something unconventional...and, bring it to the fore...and, thank you for dropping the Pm..much appreciated 😊