Kriya FF : Whirlpool of Emotions - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Loved the intro n CS...

Its seems a quite interesting n different FF.
Plzzz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Hmm. . .totaly diffrnt concpt. . .bt,totaly egar to read it. .
Nice c.s. . .
Update the 1st chapy soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome CS...
loved it...
continue soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awesome concept...please continue ASAP and PM me for sure!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Honestly,m a lil confused.. But Loved d concept.. Its diff n unique indeed !
Reyaansh did something to tanmay coz of which kriya hates him.. Kriya loves Akshat n Akshat hates Reyaansh coz of wht he did to him??? Is Akshat,d football team captain??? Is thr some sorta misunderstanding????

So Akshat has a grey shade to his character.. Hun.. May b he's behind ol dis mess n Reyaansh is bein held responsible.. Omg.. M makin wild guesses.. Haha..

Looks lik its a dark story.. Not exactly dark but kinda dat only !

PS- I loved d title.. "whirpool of emotions" conpletely justifying wht I'v read till now !

Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome beginning

loved the cs

but was hell confusing

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
WOW! How did I miss this one?
K and Aro! 🤗
Update soon.
"Someone Like U"? Who's the author?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Kesha1234

WOW! How did I miss this one?

K and Aro! 🤗
Update soon.
"Someone Like U"? Who's the author?


Thanx Keshu 🤗

There are authors. Nikita singh and Durjoy Datta
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
chapter 1

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I sank down on the chair of the hospital. What the hell is happening in our life? Is it any kind of a bloody joke? For god's sake, its our life and why is everyone just bent on playing with it? It isn't that they own it. Well they never do. It's us who choose what we want' who chooses what we should dream off. I let out a chuckle. They had just made our life a big joke! A bloody joke!

Pia came and sat next to me. I didn't turned to see her knowing that a look at her face and I will be completely broken not that I'm not at present. She rested her head on my shoulder and cried silently. The tears from my eyes even started to flow again eventually. How much I try not to cry, I end up doing just the opposite. What was his fault? Oh ya, his fault were that he had a friend like Reyaansh! He is responsible for all this mess which is there in our life. If not he, we three would have now been sitting and either chatting or studying. But NO! He destroyed it all. He made Tanmay do things which tams never did! He made him addicted to alcohol. He knew, he knew that tams would drink, and then even he let him have his bike! And now, see what this had landed him into! Behind the doors, he is struggling to live. He could have died' died if the football team players had not found him at the correct time.

I let out a sigh and excused myself. I directly went to the parking lot and broke down. I just couldn't control myself. How much, just how much I tried being calm and composed, I can't. I can't help it. My very first friend whom I have here is struggling for his life and it's all because of the person whom I once had a soft corner for! Why Reyaansh? Why did you let him have it? He was your only friend and see what you had landed him into! He is dying and it's all because of you!! Only and only you!!

"Kriya?" I heard someone speaking and wiped my tears furiously recognizing the voice clearly. The hurt I had inside my heart, I put that aside as rage took over me. Even after all this he had the ability to come here? In front of me? What the hell does he think of himself? Oh he isn't one of those rich and wealthy person's son. And well if he would have been then also nothing could have stopped me to saying those hurtful words which could escape my mouth anytime. All that waits is a single word from his mouth.

"Kriya, how is'" he was speaking when I showed him my palm indicating him to be quiet and he went silent. "Kyun Rey? WHY?! He was your best friend, your only friend no? Then, then why did you did that? You knew he would be drunk, didn't you? Then even, you let him have you bike? WHY damn it!" I shouted at him. "He promised me that he won't drink and drive." He spoke out in a low voice. "He said and you agreed? For god's sake Rey this is life! It's not a game one could. Not a place where one could ever have multiple life! Do you know what his parents would have been going through? He doesn't belong to any rich family. His parents struggled so hard to send him here and see what you had led him to! Just leave Rey! Leave right now!"




Kriya left from there . Rey he was shattered . He never thought that one day he will face this situation . \Rey fell on his knees . It's started raining heavily . Tears of sorrow flowing from his eyes . He never wanted to hurt Tanmay . Today he was shattered completely in broken state . Not because of Tanmay's bad condition but because of Kriya's word he was hurt . Rey cried his heart out in heavy rain . After lots of struggle he learned that he loves Kriya . But after today's incident he lost her forever . She will never forgave him . He looked toward sky . In hope that this rain will wash his all pain .

In past one week Tanmay recovered a lot . Doctor said that he will be fine in few days then he will be able to join college once again . After one whole week Kriya realised that Rey is missing . Tanmay explained that there no mistake of Rey in this all . Kriya felt bad and guilty . She tried to find him but he is nowhere . Their life take so many turn and twist in last one week . "What happened Kriya" Akshant sat next to her . "Nothing" Kriya looked at her cell "i talk later" She was about to leave when Akshant stopped her . "Oh come on , Kriya" he made her sit next to him "Tell me what happened"

"Akshant wo R" she was about to complete the sentence when her cell rang ."Need to go ' Kriya hide her tears and ran away .

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here is chappy 1
i hope u all will enjoy this
luv u guys
K and AROMA_RUBHARU
AROAR

PM later
likes and comment please
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
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awesome update guys

loved it

first update mein hi itni badi MU

waiting for the next

and ha this one was very chotu

I want super long from next time!
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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