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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏Nice Promo..!
Described Brillantly ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NIDHI1414

👏Nice Promo..!
Described Brillantly ⭐️
Please Pm Me if Yu Contunie this

Sure!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a black night, a jail in a distance is seen in the dim moon light, a soft hearted widowed woman is crying and screaming to the core, as she couldn't bare the pain, minutes later she gave birth to a baby boy, the jailor said, " U had given birth to a baby boy, sushmita"

Sushmita glanced at the baby near her and kissed him in his forehead!!

The story goes for a flashback!!!

Long long ago, a beautiful girl who was named sushmita was heading to the college by car was followed by a handsome hunk named aditya!!

Sushmita know him very well as he was his neighbor, but she disliked him because he followed him in the name of love!!

She asked the driver to stop the vehicle right there, and she came out, he also stopped on seeing her.

"What is your problem?" asked sushmita.

Nothing, I was just going by my way, said aditya

But, you were following me??

Listen, this road is meant for everyone!!

Nonsense!!

Thank you!!

You were rightly called nonsense, sushmita moved from there.

Hey sushmi, stop. I want you to say something.

What?

Your love!!

Nonsense!! I don't love you!!

I know you love me!!

Stop your day dreams and develop some useful spirit!

My love is true!!

Shut up and get lost!!

Sushmita moved from there. She started complaining about him to her friend riya.

I was fed up

Actually that was your mistake!

What I did??

Who told you to get out of the car?

He was following me, that's why I got out..

Don't blabber. You have a soft corner on him. I know!!

Nothing like that!!

Numerous boys proposed you, but you know what you have never minded them, but whenever you see him you'll start talking about him. You slowly started falling for him!!

Shut up!!

Hmmm... I'll shut up now. But the truth wont!! Your eyes shows...

Will you keep quiet??

Okay!! Don't get tensed. Lets go to class!

The classes got over. Sushmita was coming home!! She was trapped by her hero.

Hey sushmi...

What??

I have to say a story!

Story?? Now??

Not now!

Then?

I'll meet you by midnight!

What?? I am going. Leave me!!

Hey...stop...okay go...but I'll surely meet you!!

Nonsense

Aditya smiled!

As he said he reached sushmi's home and he was standing in her balcony!!

Sushmita got shocked!!

What the hell??

Heaven sushmi!!

How did you come here??

By flight!!

Stop kidding!!

I told I'll say you a story midnight!!

Pagal hein kya??

Haan...on you...!!

Oh god!! If someone see you??

Don't worry!! No one will see me!!

Go home!!

Then hear my story!!

What will I do now?

Sushmita looked around and she was so tensed!

What do you want??

I want you to hear my story!!

Okay!! Say and go!!

Not here!!

Then where??

I'll say you, come with me!!

Aditya lead her to the terrace!

What?? Say!!

Wait, close your eyes!!

Why should I do what you say?

I don't know about all those!!

What am I doing??

You re gonna hear my story my love!!

Stop those stupid stuffs!!

Let it be!!

Okay, now close your eyes!!

Okay closed!!

That's fine! Just listen to the sound of the wind blowing, I am going to narrate the story of an angel who came to earth on this beautiful day years back!!

Sushmita smiled!

She was named sushmita and gave fortune to everyone who crossed her life!!

Oh??

Hmmm...open your eyes now!!

Look at the moon which admires your elegance and beauty, look at the stars which dances at your eyes' attraction! Feel the breeze!!

Look at me!! Happy birthday my love!!

Today is a great day, I wish the angel should be mine!!

I love you!!

Aditya gave a bouquet of red roses, sushmita accepted it. But she doesn't answer him!

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Keep guessing Sushmi's response!!

Edited by Jananivjc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awesome 😃
Edited by kodhai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Thank u!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

amazing

like is not working...

Thats ok!!
Thank u!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Wow...its so awesome 😃

Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Wow...its so awesome 😃


Continue soon 😳

Sure!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
lovely start waiting for next update😊

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