Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4)

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Megha

@MarriedLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

nice...

but i hate some vamps entering the story...

pls keep pure and simple love story...

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

RES
STALKING HELPS. 😆

AWWWSOME UPDATE... That Lisa is going to get hunted... 😆

Will be bck subha with special effects... 😉

Thanks for the update Smita and Rashmi... 😃

Goood Night..

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

why did that feel so short?

I can never get enough of your chapters!!!

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Smitaaa 🤗get well soon dear...

loved this part... Khushiii and Arnav almost making it official going to the party as couple...

Khushi ji confess kabbb karegii...😳

Smitajii can you add a little more interaction between Buajii and Aranvbabuaa??? i sooo sooo miss thr interaction... specially the way Arnav babua tries to maoo buajii during khushi ka birthday track😭

Song Dedication :

Chaaha tohh bahoott naa chayee tuzhee...

Chahat pai magar koie jorr nahi...

Dill hi tohh haine tum par aaa hii gayaa...

Dill ka koie kasoor nahii...

Edited by sayali_d23 - 12 years ago

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Nice update!!

You have included almost all important events from our IPK land & molded them into your story very appropriately. Nothing looks out of place or forced.

Their story has progressed so beautifully..

Is khushi going to take 6 months to say yes for the wedding?

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Edited by Frida - 12 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Arnav should now sing for Khushi:

Main toh bas teri chaahat mein chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri kurbat mein chahoon rehna sada
Saaya bhi tera main, hone na doon juda
Maine tay kar liya
Tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe, tere jism pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera...

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

great update dear
and lets see what will lisa do now
continue soon

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divvk

@divvk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

wow! very nice update. waiting to see what lisa is gonna face from arnav 😆

take care of your health, smita.
one quick q.. have you changed ur blog? i don't see any updates after march 2013. anyways, take care. get well soon

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Lisa is in for a surprise.

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#520

read all chapters on this thread together..

and loved how Arnav couldn't be away from Khushi..

their time in Lucknow was written so beautifully.. you have magic in you Smita.. you write beautiful stories.

You have a perfect balance of Traditionality and modernity.. positivity & negativity.. It creates wonderfully balanced emotional as well as deeply beautiful story. Hats off to you.

It was so good how Arnav wasn't reluctant to come to Lucknow.. Khushi indeed helped him to come out of those horrified memories.. and made his past much easier to remember.

Their kissed shared are so tender & gives the whole new amazing meaning to desire they feel for each other.

so, KKG is Arnav's khajoor.. and Lady Lisa is all furious for the barso purana coat.. 😕 I see her getting some real peace of ASR's mind.. bring it on. She needs some.. 😉😆😆

Thanks Smita for writing so amazingly beautiful stories.. and thanks Rulama for PMs.😃

Edited by SuperstarSanaya - 12 years ago