Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Beautiful and amazing update, awww loved khushi trying to tease and tickle Arnav that was so adorable, but the kiss was so passionate and khushi did not want it to end, but poor Arnav had to control himself. Awww Arnav has changed so much and has even agreed to come back to Lucknow and visit sheesh mahal. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

I'm kind of getting slow in catching your updates,nevertheless I would like to say the last few chapters where amazing specially the last two updates. Arnav coming all the way to Lucknow and getting lost in their own world given to the fact that they don't have any disturbances in the form off their families😊Khushi was reluctant to let go of Arnav after their make out session on the hand Arnav was trying hard to control himself, Khushi doesn't even know what she is getting herself in to I'm sure in future she will be really surprised😃 it was nice to see that Arnav been able to replace his bad memories with pleasant ones and even willing to step in to his old property with out any hesitation.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Belated Vishu Greetings to you both, Smita and Rashmi... May this New Year bring you and your families Good Health, Happiness, Peace and Prosperity!

a gamut of emotions displayed, rangingg from shyness to childlike innocence and joy followed by rampant desire reined in so that a trust isn't betrayed and a love is proteced! heart-warming to see khushi and arnav laughing with childlike abandon, forgetting all the heartache of the past and just enjoying the moment to the fullest... reminded me of the unbridled joy and laughter that surrounded them when, in the show, arnav tackled khushi to get at the photo and int he process broke their bed! khushi is so comfortable with him that she is as playful with as she is with her sister... nice to see arnav being so free and unfettered, with happiness just bubbling out of him...

desire and passion lurks just below the surface and sparks fly when these two are in close proximity! How could such a simple touch make her so weak, so needy, so... so... clearly reveals khushi's innocence... making the most of the opportunity that had fallen to them to share a few moments in privacy without any of their family members summoning them... can understand arnav's and khushi's plight as they are both in demand and never get a chance to spend some time with each other... at shantivan, arnav's room is like a thoroughfare with anyone walking in as he/she pleases and at the guptas, they are watched by the eagle-eyed buaji among others.

loved your vivid description of arnav battling his desire to protect their love and the trust their families have in them... the most moving part was he fighting to save her not only from his needs but hers too: And Khushi... She didn't have an ounce of self preservation in her. He had to look after her interests... no truer words have been spoken... khushi is someone who'll willingly give up her own happiness for that of others... khushi, in the throes of passion, wants to give in to the pleasant, and previously unknown, sensations arnav is raising in her... arnav having to douse the flames of desire is the height of irony! a disappointed khushi flouncing away in a huff is adorable... the shoe used to be on the other foot... what a change!

the last part was again poignant and moving, with their love giving arnav the strength to ignore his nightmarish past, igniting in him the hope to build happier memories with khushi when they revisit Lucknow and sheesh mahal with their family

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

arnav is such a gentleman now.
sweet update.

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Awesome.. now 6 months seems too long..

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Arnav has proved himself worthy by being a true gentleman when Khushi herself was all willing. It ain't gonna be 6 months anymore. it seems so far away for both of them. Nice update

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Awesome update...I loved Arnav's protective feelings towards Khushi...he really does love her and cares for her unconditionally!!!! 👏👏👏👏

Hope Khushi agrees for the wedding soon...