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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Thanks so much for all d comments...
Enjoy reading this update...

Taarey ff:Towards Love-part6

Night-
Taani n Rey were made to stay away from each other in different huts..
Rey peeks into taani's hut..
Rey-(in low voice)taani
Taani turns other side n sleeps..
Rey-taani udo..
Taani-hmm
Rey-taani udo..

Taani opens her eyes n looks at rey..
Taarey eyelock-
Taani breaks of n shouts-aaappp
Rey covers her mouth with his hand-shhh dheeree
Taarey eyelock..
Taani-hhhmhmhmm
Rey-kya(realising he had covered her mouth ,takes it off)
Taani-aap itne raat ko yahan kya karne aaye hai..
Rey-kabadi khelne ,chaloge?
Taani-itne raaat ko,kal khelnge k,gud nyt (n pulls over d bed sheet over head)
Rey-taani(n pulls d bedsheet from top of her)
Taani-maine kahana kal khelnege,ab mujhe soe deejiye...
Rey-maine khelne ki nahi bhagne keliye tumhe bhulaane aayi thi..
Taani-aap ek deide keejiye k,aapko khlene hai ya bhaaagna hai..
Rey-gggrrrbhagna hai(n hits his head with his hand)
Rey-chalo n pulls her hand but taani accidently pulls him n rey falls on her..

Taarey eyelock-
Taani blinks her eys n keeps her hand on his fcae..


Taani-koi dekhlega to,
Rey-remember technically sab keliye tum meri patni ho
Taani-ha ha ,baar baar mat yaad dilado,woh manhoos kadi..
Rey-a what?
Taai-kuch nahi chalo..

But dey vr about o leave..
Guards of the village spots them..
Guards:aap donon kahan jaa rahe ho..
Rey-woh
Taani-hava khane
Rey-ha hava khane
Guards-hava itne raat ko
Rey-kya karoon bhaai sab,yeh aurat ko ajeeb ajeeb chezzein karne ke adaat hai...
Taani stares at rey
Rey goes n puts his hand over one of guards shoulder-mere baat mano shaddi mat karna..
Taani tries to hear what rey was trying to tell...
Guards-aap dono jaaye yahan se,warna humein gaav waloon ko bhulana padenge..
Rey-nahi,cool,hum chalthe hai
Taani-ha bhaai sab,maine hava bahut khayi,ab bahut khakhe petbhi bar gayi..
Rey-he(in weird look)
Taani-chaliye prannath

Rey n taani walks-
Rey-yeh sab tumhare wajas se ho rahi hai
Taani-ha ha kyun nahi,maine gavo lo se kahi thi hum donon pati patni hai,
maine gava waloon ko humari bhagne ki katha sunayi thi,haine aur
maine raat ko kamre main aakar bhagne ki praytna ki haina.
Rey-watever

Rey goes to his hut..
Taani-oye kahan jaa rahi ho ji
Rey-kabadi khelne
Taani-kiske saath?
Rey-macharoon ke saath,tumhari tarah mere khoon chose rahi hai woh sab...
Taani laughs n goes into her hut..

Morning-
Rey n taani were sitting under a tree surrounded by d villagers.
Taani dressed in gagra n rey in kurtha n dhoti...
Elders-aaj roka hai
Rey-aachi baat hai aapne rokh di
Taani hits him with her hand-roka matlab sagaayi..
Everyone shares laugh..

One of the villagers comes n puts teeka on both of them..
Rey-yeh kya hai...?
Taani-teeka
Rey-woh kahne ki cheesze haina
Taani-hey bhaagwaan,teeka matlab teeka ,tikka nahi hai
Rey-whatever

Elders put forwards a thalli with rings on it...
Rey-yeh kya hai
Taani-iss maiin agootiyaan hai,
Rey-toh
Taani-yeh waali angooti aapko mujhe pehnani hai aur yeh waali main aapko pehnavoongi..
Rey-tihmao haath main chot aagayi hai kya
Taani-nahi toh
Rey-to khud pehnlona
Taani smiles at the elder-nahi ji yeh ek rasam hai,
yeh angootiyan iss finger main pehnathi hai kyunki,
vishwaas yeh hai ki is finger ki vein seedhi heart tak jaathi hai,
toh hum humare riste ko humesha dil main rakhenge..
Rey-what rubbish ?>
Taani -rubbhish nahi vishwaas hai..
Aap ki sach main shaadi hone waali thi kya?
Rey-nahi nahin,mera toh shauk haina ghar se bhaag jaane ka..
Elders-ab jaldi tum donon jhagda bandh karon aur angooti pehna do..
Taarey eyelock
Rey wears the ring on taani's finger n taani wears d ring on rey's finger...

By then villagers started beating dhol..
Rey-yeh pagalon ke tarah behave karna bhi rasam hai kya?
Taani-yeh khushi hai un logon ki..
Rey-kaun khushi,
Taani-iss pyaar ko kya naam dooon ki khushi.?
Rey-a what?
Taani-khuch nahi chaod do..(n drags rey in d middle of d dance n started dancing)
Rey tries to go away but all d time he tries
Taani comes infrnt of him n vilagers surrounded them dancing..
Rey sees taani dancing,her laughs,her hair flowing in d air,her hands in air andd he smiles..
Rey breaks of when taani waves her hand..
Taani-kya hua?kismain kho gayi?
Rey slips his tongue-tum main
Taani didnt hear what rey told-kya
Rey-kuch nahi...

Precap-mehindi hai rachne waali hathon main...
Kuch romance ho jaaye?

So guys,
Hope u guys liked this update..
Next update chaiye toh mujhe 7-8 pages of comments chahiye...
Silent readers comments please...

part7
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res./Unres..
OMG! Di...Fadu update...
🤣 Rey ke sawwal pe sawwal...
Maza aya!!!
Taarey nokh-jokh..
I enjoyed it a lot...
Precap!
I am *excited*
Romance?? 😲
Di...😉 Update soon ha...
Pm me! 😳
Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res/unres
nice..😊.. update soon
Edited by tharu01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 2nd...
yay...
diii
mein marr jawa...
pls updt rglrly like bfr..
and wb mitwa??
wn r u plnng 2 updt??
aapke cmmnt boundaries toh pure hogaye the..
pls updt this ff regularly..
and pls updt mitwa also..
and pls pls abhi thoda romance and thoda lovededo..
waiting fr their confession/!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
kuch kya???😕
bohot romance ki zaroort hai!!!😆
i was literally rofling!!!🤣
pls update soon!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update and thx 4 e pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
wow...
kadoos n moosibat...really its d jodi made in heaven...
rey ws just impossible...
luvd it to d core...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehe it's very funny and of course amazing update.
teeka ka tikka lol
I loved rey and taani character in this ff
so now love story ki starting precap interesting update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol Taarey are too cute...especially our Taani she is funny. Awesome update plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mehendi...hayee kabaddi khelne was too good..!!! pm me when u update...😊

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