Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
one, arnav should have throttled them with his bare hands. i would have
two, he did the right thing by taking her away
three, anjali deserves to be ignored as she cried wolf once too often

four, the last daiya ho request was a masterstroke


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..epilogue was simply awesome .. enjoyed totally.. had an expel touch toit...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great end to great ff..pease start one more soon..so many FFs ending this week..it's so depressing :((

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh I am going to read it one more tine.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the updates.. Finally they are married..And the crazy family played a prank and then faced the brunt of it.. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg hahah their family are so evil but finally they did it and here Di is really in labour now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely epilogue...

what a jhalli Anjali is...just for screen space..kuchh bhi .😉 now jhello nayi daiya ho...

Hush...so finally they managed to do it right...and finally Khushi has voiced my worry reg Chotey's performance issues...so even without the aid of towel rub-a-way chotey did do a barewale kam...

Fab ending to a fab collab...a big round of appalause to all the fantastic writers who have contributed towards this successful laughter riot ..great work guys 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Juhi, trust you to turn what seemed like childbirth into a prank! Poor Arnav would never have thought his family would do that to him… he's right, they are crazy! But he had no time to pursue that worrisome train of thought, because his sister had now clambered off the bed and was approaching him with outstretched hands. He knew just what that meant, and so he backed off until he hit the wall behind him… nice tongue-in-cheek quip about Anjali's penchant for gluing her palm to Arnav's cheek! A horrified Khushi clearing her throat to stop an enraged and frustrated Arnav blurting out that he had been interrupted when he was about to consummate his marriage to Khushi was HILARIOUS, as were Arnav's plans: All he wanted to do was make love to his beautiful wife, preferably for the next few hours. Or the rest of the night, actually. Maybe even the whole of next week... 😉! Your dig about screen space was spot on! After all this time, the fact that Shyam was a doctor totally slipped my mind! "RANI SAHIBA! Agar aapke liye mera Daiyya Ho koi maine rakta hai, toh aaj raat chod dijiye Chotey ko!" LOVELY… chhod dijiye, Anjaliji ko, anyone 😆!!


Khushi giving Arnav the third degree about how he has gained his sexual 'expertise' had me in splits as did her reluctance to make love then because everyone knew what they were up to… Arnav's retort was the tops: "Be reasonable, dammit! Everyone knew what was going to happen in this room earlier too!" You slew me with Khushi's comment about performance anxiety… Poor, poor Arnav, what a unique wedding night… first his crazy family, then his crazier wife won't let him just get on with it! Boy oh boy, given Payal's and Khushi's boldness and knowledge about sexual terms and matters, the Sati Savitri image of small town girls that our serial makers are so fond of has flown out the window! Glad to note that the white fur throw made its appearance! Loved the gentleness and the sensuousness that permeated the lovemaking scene, and especially that Khushi is no slouch in bed but gives full rein to her desire for hubby dearest! Arnav is very right: as long as they love and are there for each other, needless rituals have no meaning.


Finally, Anjali was forced to do something without her Chotey, despite her constant refrain of his pet name: "Chotey! I want Chotey! I...I know why he isn't coming, he's punishing us for last night's prank!" She must be one delusional woman if she thinks so… he's happily occupied with more pressing matters! "Would it help if I sang a new version of Daiyya Ho?" Epic… what a tune to be born to! Looks like Akash and Payal were equally occupied with their amorous adventures / experiments, as there was no mention of them during the prank!


Juhi, you've seamlessly blended humor with passion to create an amazing epilogue! A heartfelt thank you to all the collaborators for entertaining us with this series!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: melonie

You can't do this 😆 😆 😆 😆 I have tears in my eyes from all the laughing. Anjali and Shyaam have become such buffoon characters in this story...my God.


Serves Anjali right. It was seriously creepy how for every little thing Anjali would keep chanting chotey...chotey. I am so happy Arnav and Khushi turned off their cell phones and are enjoying in their private heaven.

Finally away from the mad house, crazy house A and K were able to have their suhaag raat and how could Khushi even doubt that Arnav would have performance issues 😉

The last line...new tune for Daiyaa Ho...we would love that :D

Thanks to all the writers for writing such a sweet story 🤗 Thank you








you guys are awesome
please keep writing

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Posted: 12 years ago
bloody hell finally man
the moment we the readers you the writers and arhi were waiting for came forth
they finally did it
and boy was nothing coming in his way again
that was good prank they pulled though on arhi
and what was that all about with khushi
performance anxiety sweetie just dont think and go with the flow
which is what they both did eventually
though it was close call there
had he not taken her away from RM am sure this wouldnt have happened
they would never have been able to consummate their marriage
god knows what else their crazy family would have done even though shyam told them off from doing anything
plus at the farmhouse there was no one there
what can be better than that
plus it took care of the performance anxiety for sure right guys
course it did
and then in the end nothing mattered more to them than each other and being with each other
not his di not her gotas
not his work or hers
all that mattered was them and their awesome chemistry
thanx you guys for giving us this
can never forget the laughs we had over this the fun and the excitement of getting arhi together in all senses
cheers for m

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