Taarey & swaron ff 1st adventure-book of secrets

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Bubblie1490

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

This story is so interesting & obviously different. I love these kinds of stories, filled with suspense & secrets with the smartest ppl trying to fix the problem.

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Bags I love it incredible story, thank u for writing such a unique concept plz continue soon

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Arbitrator.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

It is really different... Mystery with love... A superb start dear!! I just loved the first part... U really created a lol of suspense and the precap shows some adorable scene is coming up so please update real soon!!
And about #7 thing... Itna acha update padne ke baad i read your note and muje for a sec samjh hi nahi aaya ki ye #7 hai kya... That means u totally do not deserve it'#7'... But phekne ki jagah we can gift u if U really want it... 😆
ON A SERIOUS NOTE FAB JOB DEAR!!

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Sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

loveddd it alott... =D

its so interesting! =D

excited for the next part...update soon =)

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

It's too too much intresting..
It's too too gud amazing update...
I think it's first adventure story on d3 forum..
I loved it..i know it's very hard to write adventure story but u write it very well 👏👏

and precap double intresting taani entry taarey meeting and what is in casket? Cant wait update next part soon.

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shriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

hey
sorry
abhi intro n prolouge padha
awesome tha loved it
mystery adventure my favourite gener!!!!
love detective giri a lot!!!!
moving to chap one

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shriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

u are an awesome writer mannn
n u knw wat i was sooo engrossed in ur story ki mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki mera stop peeche chut gaya n now m travelling again half n hour ka jorney back home
hhehe
fab writdr yaar
i wantd to ask u smthing
are u maharashtrian???