Finding Love #4: COMPLETED - Page 57

Thanks, started counting the hours.

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Sunday...😆

lovely update.accidently found this one...

Beautiful update.
Loved it sooo much.

Why is Khushi's dad gave that particular look to her, what does he think she has done wrong?
Poor Khushi chasing Arnav and him being so busy, I am sure like us she also wanted to know what happened in the meeting with her father.
The outfit was very lovely and as Arnav designed it himself made it extra special and he colour co ordinated their outfits that is so sweet of him, he wants to let every one know that they are couple.
The towel and the kiss was very hot and you have written it very well... It was almost visual. Loved the whole scene.
Should we prepare ourselves to witness a jealous Arnav? If that happens that will be great, I have always loved a possessive and jealous Arnav.
Can't wait for them to go Bostan together that will be awesome.
Beautifully written as always. will wait eagerly for the next update.
Thank you for the PM.

Originally posted by: tanurocks

lovely update.accidently found this one...

a beautiful love story..u created this one with a touch of reality...

its really amazing to read how a relationship develops between 2 people...

attraction, jealousy,insecurities, flirting,teasing ,affection,care love ..i can read all those emotions in this story..good work..

i would love to receive a pm for this story

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

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ch23 :

Wowwiee ! That was an amazing update Nidhi !

OK, my fav part has to be about the perfect male species ! And the fact that Khushi didnt faint there and then was suprising ! Cause like she said, when just Arnav in clothes makes my heart tap dance, an Arnav with towel, had my heart doing tango in full speed !

And the kiss they share afterwards, inspite of the heat between them, it was so tender, it makes me float ! And yippee, I knew they'd be colour co-ordinated ! Trust Arnav to get Khushi used to being a couple :D

But just one nagging worrying part, is about Khushi's dad. Why has he been giving her "the look" ??
And must say, amazing setup you've found for the sangeet ! It looks so splendid !

Thanks for the mail !
Love Shobhana

PS: sorry for missing so long, had exams !

CHAPTER 24 :
I hadnt realised id get to the nedxt pg ! Yipee ! so res for 24 too !
*edited*

*sigh*
I really need to tell you this, before anything else you make me fall in love with arnav and Khushi over and over again deeper than before !
As for this update, I simply love it ! An overprotective jealous Arnav is fun to watch and read ! But still, the thing about Shashi giving Khushi the looks is nagging in my brain !

And the part were my eyes popped out, has to be where Arnav asks Rohan to call Khushi bhabhi ! I was so shocked, I though Id probably misread it, and read it two times, pinched myself and finally I was just in awe of the way you made Arnav say that ! Loved it, it was just something so spontaneous of your Arnav to do !

And the end ! The locatio of the pool and the ambience you'd wanted us to visualise was done so well ! I loved that picture ! And finally, Arnav did fulfil her wish, cause somewhere deep down I was sure he would ! And the song you'd selected it ! I love it !
Also a spl mention to Khushi over here, the maturity she displays once she realises that maybe she's just demanding a tad bit too much from him and goes around looking for him was just an amazing scene too !

An amazing update yet again Nidhi ! Loved it !

Awww, where was the proposal??? I was waiting for Arnav to propose to Khushi... Guess, we'll have to wait some more... 😔