ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed* - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Bhaad mein Gaya res!

Just kidding, I'll be back.



Edit:

That was one of my favorite scenes as well!

And I love the way you used that dialogue, and the 'paagal but cute' line as well.

I love your KKG, especially when she wants to be the one breaking up with him and not vice-versa!

That entire conversation was written very well, and the last line was awesome!

How will ASR reply, dammit?


Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tooo gd :) only khushi can do tht.. put arnav singh raizada in a difficult position :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, Say!!! You darling darling girl! *tackles into big squishy hug*

Saw you posted and rushed at it, till I saw the pre note 🤗 You're spoiling me, gotta post some exclusive love just for that!

Brb, before you know ((:

Edited by Philana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht was adorable
dono ne dil ki baat bol di haayeee
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing... loved it...👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yesss those were one of my fave scenes too!! ❤️ ❤️ the best part was when all his family were gaping at them! that was hilarious!! 😆

OKKK to the upstate!!

Gooddd, what do i say? I just LOVE it!!!! I laugh sooo much when reading ki my face starts hurting!! 😆

Now Arnav will have to say 'I love you' to her!! loool will he? I bet he will have to na? what will Anjali Di there! 😆 😆 Poor poor Arnav 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awe it was hilarious. What a master plan by Champu Akash. Fighting over Pakoras? And ASR needs a script for the same? 🤣

And both confessed indirectly, without even knowing hahaha.

End of the chapter was just stupendous.

I like KKG, she winked at him lol

waiting for the next part.

Thanks in adv for the pm.
I stalked!

Love
J
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃


"Bhaad main gaye aap aur bhaad main gayi aapki naukri!" ... 👍🏼 👏

Just loved the confusion created by them both on breaking up ...
they both are like little kids ...
Loved the utterly hopeless attempt at breaking up ... i doubt if they ever wanted to ... 😆


Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hillarious Update...
Both of them are stubborn...both donot want to back down...unknowingly they praise each other...and then khushi drops the bomb...
Now will Arnav say the 3 magical words...even for namesake...
Update soon...
Read ur note...the resignation scene is one of the best scenes of Khushi and Sanaya in IPK...I love that scene...I absolutely loved the furious yet confident khushi...and yes those lines exactly are my very favourite..." Hum theek hai...Aapki vajah se nahin aapke bawajood bhi hum theek hai"...and Arnav knew she meant it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
They decide a strategy for breaking up complete with dialogues. Trust Aakash to come up with a stupid breakup idea.
She can't even make bad pakoras, how will Arnav say they are bad.
Loved the way you have used some unforgettable dialogues from the serial here.
She wants him to say I Love You to her. I too wish the same.
Please update the next one soon. I hate cliffhangers.

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