Pehli Bar Mohobbat ki hai- thread2 ARshi n Taarey) *ON HOLD*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Awesome update, loved the train part

Quote

Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

This story is ossum, both ArShi and TaaRey Rocks!😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Indu

@redroses123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

andy... shorryyy for the late reply... i just finished reading ch 6 .. starting was a firecracker !!! i so enjoyed a firecracker khushi!! was missing her all these days.. i so love it and give evil giggles when khushi irritates arnav ji!! lol !! its so fun!!!.. and KKG was in full mast mode eating samosa's poor poor ASR.. I so loved that part..

coming to taarey portion , start was so funny .. man rey is worse than kids .. he wrapped all those creatures in that box n gifted her😆 😆.. but end became emotional... poor taarey.. their meet after such a long time .. it was so beautifully written ...a beautiful chapter andy... now me gonna read next chapter

Quote

Indu

@redroses123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

e arnavji bi na😭.. khadus!!! akdu!!! he shouted at taani!!! hmm😭..i hate him at times.. but what to do i love him.. so bad !!! in midst !!!..

coming to update taarey part was so so so so beautiful!! loved the entire train scene .. aww like i could clearly see it in front of my eyes andy!! it was damn beautiful.. taarey standing close together in the train and rey banging on her back and then that fat lady ..but rey gave her good answers!! and that locket scene was so so so beautiful andy😳 😳.. i loveee the way u write .. muahh muahh .. i love u...and the precap taarey scene .. he was smiling!! that means we are gonna get a lovely dovey taarey track with some spice.. aww i love u andy!! i love u

now coming to arshi!! aww my poor khushi is stuck in bw files !! hai devi mayya !! lagta hai sankadevi is damn frightened !! pata nahi kya karegi e ladki!! she is so crazy at times !! i really fear for her and arnavji!!😡 he shouted on taani but i am sure he will go for searching her in the next part!! he is mad.. ha .. he is mad!! mad man!! mad in love!! ..and khushiji bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!.. but i love these two mad people but i love you more for writing such a lovely story🤗

Quote

priyal_TaaRey

@priyal_TaaRey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

😊...amazing update dear...😊

Quote

Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

diii... 🤗
pehle toh... im sooo sorrryyy...

i was packed up wid exams...so missed all d updates... 😭

coming to chapter 6:

it was so sadd...

felt so bad for rey...

and den d mask was up...dere was his taani in frnt of him...

his dialogues to sharon clearly reflected his pain... 😭

and d precap seems really interesting...

hope things get a bit better after that... *fingers crossed*

gona catch up wid d rest asap =)

and wid d other one too... 😳

and as always...amazingg updatee di =)

Quote

aishapie

@aishapie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

I really really luv dis story...pls pls continue soon.

Quote

Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

chap 7

omg omg omg!!

i jus lovedd this updatee soo muchh...

rey...hayyeee...

this update jus made my day...

loved the taarey moment...

esp the thoughts of rey was so touching...

he stil cares...after all that hapnd, sum where he knws that taani wasnt at fault...he still loves her <3

awww...jus soo happyy...

and now he is following her too...heheheh =D

im jus loving this now...less of pain...

biut khushi ko kya hua? =(

Quote

Andria

@Andy_Dynamite

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: Ish_taarey
Res/Unres...
Heyo!!
Wow..Loved it dear...Awesome update as usuall...
Aranav..He knows very well..How to handle..The superfast express...Khushi! 😆
Poor Khushi..Had to do over work! Oh..God..She is stuck in office only..Hope she is fine! Hmm..
Arnav barked at Taani...But, he will find out Khushi...I know and I am damn sure. 😛

With Taarey,
Wow! Rey gave fadu answer to that lady! Hehehehehe..
Aww... Locket scene.. 😳
Loved it yarr...
Beautifully written...I enjoyed it. Really! 🤗
Precap seems more interesting...
Update soon!
Pm me! 😊

m so happy u liked d update!! thank u so much dear!! it really encouraged me 2 write more!! God bless u for that!!!

yea yea u knw Arnav very well...😆

yea i will update soon..promise!!

Quote

Andria

@Andy_Dynamite

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA
res/unres
yay!!am d second one tlo comment..
nw cuming to ur UPDATES am really vry sry cuz me aapke last update read ni kar payi..
so pehle i vud comment on 6th chappy..

yippe!!so rey has cum to noe dat d teacher is taani..yay!!!loved dt scene...esp wer rey was thinkin abt her..
nd abt Arshi evn dey wer good..i mean unka jhagda was wah re wah!!dey r olso cutees..
Nd den cums d heart touching scene wen taani strtd to cry..nd grasshopper nd cockroach wala part was damn hillarious..hehehe..

7th chappy-
Omg!!rey nd taani in d same train..nd y is rey behavin so rudely??huh???nd uski dialogue to dat fat lady..lol..
Am just roblin...par at last us idiot rey ko samajh toh aaya dt still taani cares fo rey!!hmmm..nd ye kya??khyshi is in d office nly??par arnav us der to rescue ger.so no worries!!

Precap seems damn intresting...esp abt taarey..so jaldi update karo..plzz-5

thank u sooo much for reading both the updates!! god bless u for that..it really means a lot to me!!!

Yea now Rey knows it that shez Taani!! aur suspense rakhti toh tum log mera khoon kar dete!!!😆

Yea yea jaldi update karungi...pakka!!!