Dear Zara, you are just too good! You've done it again girl! 👍🏼
Both updates (13, 14) were HOT HOT HOTT!!!! (Note that I am using CAPITALS TO TRY AND EMPHASISE THE FEELINGS I HAVE FOR THIS AWESOME STORY... DON'T KNOW IF IT WORKED THOUGH ;D )
Chapter 13 was a great one! Such a great achievement for Arnav to be a second champion in the tournament alongside Aman! Go him! I think (well, more like hoping) that this will be the turning point for Arnav and Aman's relationship to really hit heights and a chance for them to get to know each other well. Maybe know we can get used to seeing the Arnav-Aman brotherly duo that we were so accustomed to seeing!
So, the reason between Shakthi's separation from the Gupta's has been revealed...
Girl, you definitely have got something on here! What did you eat before you wrote this?!? As horrible as it was to know that Shashi retired out of the guilt of not listening to Garima and Shakhti losing respect for his father, it was phenomenally described and I could feel Khushi's pain. Literally. Description at its best!
And Chapter 14 just made it better and better! It was definitely something that you would call a MAHA UPDATEE!!!
I did even think that Arnav and Anjili would know each other, let alone be friends! Believe me, I was just as shocked as Khushi was!
Bless her, it was only natural to feel jealous upon seeing how smoothly Arnav and Anjili spoke to each other. But on the other hand, I was fuming too! Arnav! You have a perfectly beautiful girlfriend! GO LOVE HER AND SAY BYE TO ANJILI!! 😡 Trust me Khushi, girl, we both sail the same boat! I was like:
The ending part of the Maha Update were my favourites by far.. for the most obvious reasons 😉 😛.
Khushi is one feisty girl! I loved how Arnav was shown to have the decency to be able to respect Khushi in the vulnerability of her state whether she was drunk or freshly showered, he truly is one hell of an awesome guy!
Cannot wait for your next update! I await Arnav readily teasing Khushi like HELL for the sweet, sinful torture she made him go through! Poor guy, how much could he take!!
Kudos to you for your awesome writing! Love it to bits hun, update soon! :)) xxx
Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago
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