Arhi ff : HEarts Of StOne.chap 7!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

HEART BREAKING UPDATE POOR ARNVA HE IS COMPLETELY BROKEN AND ANJALI PISSES HIM OF AND KHUSHI IS MOVING UP IN THE WORLD SHE IS GETTING HER LIFE SORTED HOPE SHE FINDS OUT ABOUT HIM SOON THANKS FOR HE PM

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Poor Khushi and Arnav are suffering so much!!!!!!!

Arghhh I hate that Anjali!!😡

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Poor Arnav suffering so much and Khushi being a strong girl moving on in life.Super update👍🏼

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Khushi is really lucky to have met Deeps and get the right help! I can't imagine if she had got some wrong person pretending to help her.
Hope Arnav gets some news of Khushi soon! Feeling mighty bad for him...

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Archana

@Archu61

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

I read all three updates ,and the concept is good ,but you needed to elaborate the background of why the rest of the fly is not supporting Arnav and why he is not using his money and wealth to kick out Shyam and anjalie ,unless your going to delve into it later .you can make Arnav strong and not mean think on it ,just some tips to help you along

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Irene

@payalpencil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Archu61
I read all three updates ,and the concept is good ,but you needed to elaborate the background of why the rest of the fly is not supporting Arnav and why he is not using his money and wealth to kick out Shyam and anjalie ,unless your going to delve into it later .you can make Arnav strong and not mean think on it ,just some tips to help you along

thankyou for reading😃 and thankyou for the advice too!!!😳 well the true situation of that day will be revealed l8r so rite now its just here and there you know?😊 the types!! i don thnk arnav will kick out anjali even if this track was in the show😲 cuz even if she hurt khushi arnav knows that anjali is her sis and he owes alot to herr sooo... but thanks alot really helped!!😃 i will work on such aspects 😊