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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
awsumm concept loved it
thanx for da pm do it again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
1st of all kan pakar k srry 4 commenting so late... actually I was bz with my mid-term xms!!!!... nw coming on to this os it was another brilliant wrk by u... in pt-1 taayam part was really sweet...luvd this jealous sharey... nd finaly cute taarey hug... really❤️ it... pt-2 again awsome update yar... mohit is playing the role of abhi just perfect selection...luvd taarey cute scene...nw eagerly waiting 4 the nxt update... do update soon nd do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haye haye abhi...
kitana hot hai...n cute bhi...
pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome yaar plzz update soon and do pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice... pls continue soon and pls pm me tooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ chap- 1

hillarious update loved it so much 😊😊

taani's and swayam dialog make me crazy😆😆

and sharey jelousy 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ chap- 2

awesome update again loved it so much


haye mohit is abhi

thanks for the pm and do it again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
its an another amazing story 4m u yaar wonder y didnt i find it earlier jst loving abhi n natasha update d nxt part asap eagerly waiting 4 it 😊😊
Edited by tareyfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part – 3

Taani – chalo colg mein chalet hai

Abhi – nahi taani , bohot tak gaye hai , hum chaltee hai , kal aate hai….

Taani – lekin

Naro – haan taani plzz

Taani – ok

They were abt to go

Here wid gang

Vicky – arey ye log tho jaarahe hai

Nil – hum tho mile bhi nahi

Swayam – naro ne mere bare mein nahi pucha strange

Sharon(to herself)😡 – swayam ko itna kyun farak pad raha hai

Naro – taani…..

Taani – haan naro

Naro – wooh wooh

Taani – kya???

Naro – wooh swayam ???

Here wid gang

Vicky – le puchli hai teri naro ne

Nilesh pushes him

With sudden jerk swayam comes n fall on naro

naro loses control but swayam catches her

naro closes her eyes with fear

swayam smiles😊😡

swayam – naro

she open her eyes

naro – wooh I am sorry wooh

he makes her stand

swayam – sorry tho muje bolna chahiyee sorry

naro – nahi wooh

abhi – hey swayam

both hug

here wid gang

seeing de scene boys raises they hands chemistry!!!

Sharon – guys kyun push kiya tum logo ne swayam ko

Vicky – chill babes , tum itna hyper kyun horahi ho

Sharon – nahi y will I , whatever focus

Gang – yaa

Abhi n naro drove off………

Gang talk 4 sometime n also leaves

At night

Rey – arey yaar , muje taani ki bohot yaad aarahi hai , kya karun , hmmm……abh tho taani ka possessive bhai bhi hogaa , kyaa karun soch soch rey soch , arey haan

He call swayam

Rey – hello

Swayam – haan bol

Rey – kahan hai tu

Swayam – kyun???

Rey – kuch nahi yaar wooh routine ki cd Sharon ke paas hai kya uske ghar jaake lelegaa

Swayam – kal leta hun na

Rey – no abhi…..i mean plzz yaar Sharon bhul jaye gi…

Plzzz plzz

Swayam – ok jaata hun

Rey – yes…..

Swayam – kuch kahan tumne

Rey - nahi tho tu jaldi jaa

Swayam – ok hungs de call

Rey – ek kaam tho aagayaa , abh jake taani se milsaktha hun😃

Rey goes to taani's room through window silently

Taani comes out of washroom drying her hair

Taani lost in her thoughts thinking how rey became jealous n starts blushing😳

Rey hiding near de curtains

Rey – taani itna blush kyun karr rahi hai??

Jo bhi hai lekin kitna cute hai meri taani

Taani is standing near bed facing opp side of rey

Rey slowly goes n says BHOO

Taani gets scared n hugs rey

Both loose control n fall bed

Here wid swaron

Swayam goes n rings de bell

Sharon – iss wakt kon ho saktha hai

She opens de door

Look look hawa hawa

Swayam – Sharon??

Sharon – no response

Swayam – Sharon???/

Sharon – ohh haan swayam tum yahan

Swayam – haan wooh rotine ki cd's

Sharon – yaa come in???

Swayam sits

Sharon – mein abhi leke aati hun

Swayam – ok

After few mins swayam hears sharon's scream

Swayam goes running

Here Sharon comes running n hugs swayam

Swayam was like…………shocked😲😆

Swayam – Sharon kya hua

Sharon – wooh wahan

Swayam – kya hua Sharon

He want to break de hug but Sharon was too scared so she is not allowing him to break de hug

Now swayam also hugs her

Sharon feels like she is in de safest place

After few min , they broke de hug

Swayam – kya hua , y did u scream

Sharon – wooh andar koi hai

Swayam – wat???

Sharon – haan

Swayam – mein dekh taa hun

He goes n checks n finds a cat

Swayam starts laughing😆

Sharon – tum hass kyun rahe ho

Swayam – Sharon de diva ek billi ko dekh ke darr gayi……hehehee

Sharon gets angry😡 n turns another side

Swayam feels he shouldn't laugh

He stops laughing n goes to Sharon

He holds his ears n says sorry

Sharon gets lost in his brown eyes

Here with taarey

Both fall on bed

Taani on rey

Taani's wet hair fall on rey's face

Rey put taani's hair behind her ear , taani shiver by his touch closes her eyes

Rey seeing her innosense smiles n kisses her forehead

Taani open her eyes

Taani – rey app yahan kya karr rahe hai , wooh bhi iss wakt

Rey – apni gf ki yaad ayi tho aagaya milne

Taani – rey chodiye muje , agar bhai aagaye tho

Rey – uski tension tum mat lo sweetheart , meine swayam ko Sharon ke ghar beja hai

Taani – kyaa??? App naa chodiye muje

She was abt to get up but rey pulls her n turns her

Now rey is on taani

Taani – rey kyaa karr rahe hai app chodiye mujee

Wet droplets on taani's face made rey go crazy

He started kissing her cheeks

Taani closes her eyes

He kisses her neck line , shoulder sucking de water droplets

Taani moans with pleasure

Soon he comes to her lips

Rey wanted to control but water droplets on her lips made him go crazy

Soon he keeps his lips on hers

It was a soft kiss but as soon as taani started responding , it became a passionate kiss

They broke de wen felt short of breathe

Rey – I love u taani

Taani – I love u too rey…..n hugs him😳😳

Soon they hear a sound

Tauji – taani……

Taarey stand up wid ajerk

Taani – tauji , rey app jayiye yahan se

Rey - yaar iss ghar mein tho uncle bhi hai meine inhe kaise bhul gaya , saran mood spoil kardiya

Taani – rey jayiye yahan see………

Rey – ok jaraha hun , gud night sweetheart , he kisses her cheek n leaves , taani blushes

Here wid abhi n naro

Abhi – naro , kya karr rahi ho

Naro – kuch nahi bhai , books pad rahi hun

Abhi – achh padte padte kiske baaremein soch rahi hai

Naro – app bhi naa

Abhi – itna yaad aaraha hai tho call karke baat karr usse

Naro – kisse bhai (innocently)

Abhi – acha kisse , abh batata hun

He takes naro's phone n dails swayam's number

Here wid swaron

phone rings

Swaron broke de eyelock

Swayam picks de call

As soon as he picks de call , abhi gives phone to naro

Swayam – hello

Naro – hmm he…hell…hello

Swayam – naro kya hua , tum tikh tho hona

Listening dis Sharon expression changes😡

Naro – apko kaise pata chala ki mein hun

Swayam – isme badi baat kya hai , tumari voice itni sweet hai ki crowd mein bhi pehchan lungaa

Naro smiles😊

Swayam – kyun phone kiyaa

Naro – wooh sorry wooh bhai wooh mein nahi I mean

Swayam – ohh whoo ohh chill itna darr kyun rahi ho

Naro – hmm wooh

Swayam – naro kya hua

Naro – wooh muje na ek book chahiye tha , as yaha sab naya hai so

Swayam – samaj gaya , kal mein tume apna colg leke jaatha hun , hamari library mein bohot books hai , tumari bohot kaam ayegi ok

Naro – thnks swayam

Swayam – mention not

Naro – ok bye gud night

Swayam – gud night

He hungs de call

Sharon (angry) – kiska phone hai

Swayam – wooh naro ka , kitni innocent hai , sweet bhi n smiles

Sharon fuming wid anger😡😡

Swayam – ok Sharon mein chalta hun , byee

He leaves

Sharon – innocent , sweet my foot

Ye swayam ko hua kya hai , jab bhi naro ke leke matter aati hai thi itna smile kartha hai ki pucho mat lekin sharo tum itna hyper kyun horahi ho , offcourse hovungi na pyaar karrthi hun ,agar wooh kisi aur ke bare mein soche tho gussa tho aayegaa na

She sleeps with swayam's memories n some angry(jealousy)

PRECAP – abhi , naro , swayam , taani in a restaurant

Rey n Sharon spying on them


abh jaldi se like aur comment karo , i know ki bohot late hogaya hai sorry😭😭 , lekin agar ache se likes aur comments milenge tho jaldi jaldi update kardungi pakka...

agar aage ki story developement ke liye kuch ideas hai tho feel free to share😃😃

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