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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello Shello guys...!!! See at last I updated this part I hope u'll all like it. I took out my time to write it. And ya I hope that everyone will understand why I'm not updating soon. If not then I request u all to keep urself in my shoes and understand how difficult it is to write after losing confidence and also with a busy schedule. Anyways here is the update hope that u all will like it. So here's the update.

Part 18

Everyone stopped their warm up as soon as they heard Vishaka. All turned to the entrance and saw her standing there by folding her hands and looking at all of them with smirk on her face. Everyone from team were confused on her expression. No one knows what is she up to..!? More confused were Sharon, Taani, Swayam and Rey. Vishaka looked at everyone. Then she caught sight of Taani. Her smirk grew more. Taani saw it and became more confused. She don't know what is going to happen. Vishaka made her way towards her. Now all got more confused..

Soon Vishaka was face to face with Taani, looking straight in her eyes. Taani too looked at her. Her eyes portrayed disgust, hatred, anger, and also her eyes were challenging for her. Taani dint get the meaning of these mixed feelings. But Swayam and Rey understood what she is upto when she moved towards Taani. Swayam took a step forward to be there with Taani and stop Vishaka from saying or doing non sense. But as he stepped forward Vishaka started "Swayam tum abhi se ready ho jao insult hone k liye...!!!" She said looking at Taani

. Swayam stopped at his position and got confused about what she said. Vishaka gave a last smirk to Taani and turned on her heels to look at confused Swayam. As she saw Swayam confused, she left an evil smirk. "Haha...!! Tumhe samjh nai aaya what do I mean.. Oh come on Swayam, I know tum itne bhi dumb ho nai ki tumhe itni si baat samjh na aaye. Acha chalo main hi samjha deti hun.." She said and moved towards Swayam. She came in front of him and said "Voh kya hai na, kuch hi dino me FOOTLOOSE competition hai. Aur iss team me Taani hai. So I'm damn sure Yeh team haarne wali hai. Aur Taani tumhari behen hai. So I guess u understood what I mean...!!" She said while smirking.

After a few seconds of thought he understood that she was throwing tantrum on him. This even made him shocked. She had been friends with him for so long. They all supported each other in every way possible in every time being. But suddenly she changed. She changed to a bitch. She changed from a friend and trying to be enemy of him. And that too just because Taani is in this team and that too replacing Kriya. Never thought she would become so bitter for anything like this. He thought she will welcome Taani open handedly after seeing her friendly with everyone even though she had been rude in past. But now she herself proved it wrong. Now he hates her. He is hating her just cause she is trying to bully Taani. His only sister. His only loved sister whom he loved more than anything in this world. He cant take her tantrums anymore. From the first day he stood quite, but now it's enough. Rage was growing in him.

"Look Vishaka I don't know what is ur problem with Taani, but let me clear u one thing... If I hear a single word of tantrum from u again them u won't believe what I can do." He said clenching his teeth as he moved close to her with throwing daggers at her and pointing a finger towards her. Vishaka still kept herself strong. She is still being with her words and not backing off or scared from Swayam's words. "Bhai control...!!!" Taani said while pulling Swayam away from Vishaka. Only few days are left for the competition and she don't want any problem to be created because of her.

She backed Swayam and turned to Vishaka. Vishaka turned her gaze to Taani. "Ohk listen Vishaka, tumhe mujhse koi bhi problem hai I don't care. But hum yeh sub tantrums pe time waste krne se acha hai lets start our rehearsals as we have less time to practice." Taani said while controlling herself before she can speak anything wrong. "Oh listen u r none to tell me what to do and what not to do...!! Vaise bhi ab tum log apna rehearsals khud krna as I'm leaving the team..." She informed making everyone shocked. Vishaka saw everyone ones face and smirked. "I wish u all good luck for the competition." She said and turned to leave. She looked at everyone's face once again and left the hall with a smirk on her face.

Everyone looked at each other after she left. Taani broke the silence "I told u bhai she can leave the team. U should have controlled urself at least till the competition was over. Now see we lost a member from our team." She was worried now. "Taani there no big deal u know. Vishaka k team chodne se bhi koi farak nai padta. As I told u before that we can manage it without her, 11 members can participate." Sharon said assuring her."Of course Taani. Vaise bhi voh hoti toh bhi humara practice utne ache se nai ho pata. Team me har ek member ko ek dusre pe trust hona chahiye. If someone throws tantrum on others then it doesn't work at all. Team chahe jitna bhi mehnat krle tab, koi matlb nai rehta uska." Rey said making her understand.

"Taani tum kyun itna tension leti ho yr. She don't desrve it after what she has been doing to u." Swayam said as he draped his hand around her shoulder and said the last line with anger. "Bhai, woh kuch nai kr rahi thi mere saath. She just thought that I'm replacing her best friend's place. She just misunderstood it. Now anyone would be unhappy if someone replaces their best friend's place." She said putting her point forward. "Taani will u plzz stop defending her. Log tumhari tarah ache nai hote. Ok now leave it lets start our rehearsals, vaise bhi hume new routine fix krna hai." Swayam said making everyone come back to dance. They all started making new routine. They were mixing up their routine very well.

But they don't know that someone has heard their convo. "U think that u r star, right Taani. But I'll make sure that u'll fall off the bridge of this star very soon. U have made the whole team against me. They have not even stopped me before I left the room. Its all because of u Taani. Ab dekho main kaise tumse aur iss team se badla leti hun." Vishaka said to herself as a wicked idea formed in her mind.



"Hey bhai... Mujhe kuch groceries kharidni hai... Will u plzzz stop near a grocery shop..??" Taani requested as they took off from the college. "Of course Taani. Actually I have to also buy some materials, so I'll stop at a mini-mart, u can buy ur grocery and I'll go in my direction for my materials." Swayam said as he turned the car in the direction of the mart.

They soon arrived there. Swayam parked the car in the parking lot. Before they could get down Swayam said "Ya Taani agar tumhara shopping complete ho jaye toh come here only I'll be here and if not then wait for me here." Taani agreed and they went inside the mart. They separated in their own directions.



"Hello Taani" Swayam said as Taani picked up the call while taking the things she need. "Ya bhai. Kya hua aap toh yehi pe ho call kyun kiya..??" She asked confused. "Actually Taani I have got a call from my friend he asked me to come over soon as he got some problem so I have to leave. So main yeh keh raha tha ki tum apne se ghar chli ja skti ho kya mujhe abhi nikalna hai...??" He asked her. She heard some ruffling noises from the other side while meant he was hurrying up. "Of course bhai. U go as I guess it's important. I'll manage. But ya be at home soon." She said as she kept her last thing in the trolley and heard the car start from the other side of the call. "Ok Taani. And ya u too be careful. Raat ho gai hai so direct ghar jana aur kahi nai." Swayam ordered leaving the mart. Taani smiled and said " Of course bhai. Aur vaise bhi main ab choti bachi nai hun. Now u r driving so don't talk while driving. So bye see u at night." "Ok bye." And they hung up.

Taani went to the cash counter and stood in the line. She waited till her turn came. She paid the cash for her things and left the mart. She waited at the front of the mart for any rickshaw but she dint get any for a long time. She thought to walk as her home was only 15 minutes away from there. She started walking. It was a deserted road. No one lives there nor people walked from there. But it was a shortcut to get home so she chose this path.

Ok so here I complete it. Hope now everyone is happy as I updated it. I hope that no one will say it's a short update. As I feel it's enough for this part. Next part I'll try to update soon. But for that I want many likes and big comments from u all encouraging me. Untill then ba-bye.


P.S. : Do read the note in below post its really very important

Edited by PRASSI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys..!!!
I know I'm very irregular in updating.
And I'm really very sorry for that.
I hope that u read my note before the story written.
Then u'll understand why I'm not.
Ok so here what I'm going to say is really very very important and I know some people will not like it but its very important if u want to read my stories.
I have thought that I'll complete the stories one at a time.
This means that
I'll complete this story first and then I'll write "Who Are You..??" and after that one is complete I'll write other. I'll complete stories simultaneously.
Plzzz try and understand its not easy to handle college works and stories at a same time. Thats why I came to a conclusion of this.
I want u all to respect my decision. At least by this u all will get to read my stories with interest. U all will not get confused with the stories too. Hence I'm keeping other stories on hold and I'll complete this story ASAP.
Many more chaps are left in this but I promise to complete soon.
I'll give 1-2 updates every week. I'll try to give 2 updates but it depends on ur response but 1 update is for sure.
And this thing will keep me on track too.
So I hope u all will respect my decision.
Thank u all...!!!
Edited by PRASSI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Super prt V is out from team wow
Luv tht gang was with taani n luv tht
Swayam said something to tht girl she
Is disgusting yaar ohhh v is upto something
Hope nthing bad happen taayam are cute
Taani alone I hope nthing happen plzz thanks
For PM n update swty n I did not like ur idea :(
I want to read who are you stry :(
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
taani is still sweet and caring about the team
and what is vishaka going to do with taani
hope nothing happens to taani
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Vishaka is so rude she mu tani
N tani being angry on her is she defending her so swt of her
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Posted: 11 years ago
don't kno why u r underestimate yrself again n again by saying ki lost yr confidence in writing as u r giving awesome updates well m no more going to repeat it , awesome update vshakha is upto something againsttaani , now already taani is on lonely road m scared plz update soon n regarding stories n updates , u can do what u feel is right m wth u
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
luv that how reyam support taani
feeling scared as vishaka is always ready to hurt taani
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
Vishaka is so rude she mu tani
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
vishakha was so rude..
but like the way gang reyam support her..
now wats in vishakha evil mind..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome update
vishakha is so rude
i think now T's dream will come true
update soon
pm me
Edited by skfirdous - 11 years ago

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