ARSHI FF: ~PAWN~(BFTW3)# 6 Ch14 Pg122 25/04 EXT

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

Fate had been too hard on Arnav and he was way too hard on his wife! Dunno if he is actually looking for redemption or not, cuz even for now for his wife, he is the love of her life! And till she doesn't counts him guilty, he can't achieve the atonement!
Arnav did to khushi, wat gazal did to him! Difference being, arnav learnt there and then that world is cruel and he became a part of that cruel world!. For khushi, is still naive and innocent!

Knwing the truth arnav realised that he was always staring at truth from long yet ignoring it!

He still has the chance to be the Arnavji . That khushi loves!

For all the beastly things he did can't be pardoned.., but those moments can be filled in wid new and loved ones..!

He's started on his way , but it wud him, khushi needs most!:)

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Shaintini

@Shaintini

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

Finally arnav knew that khushi is pure and innocent.and he is now repenting.but what he has done with her that can not be cured so easily but he can by only with his love which khushi needed the most. Lets see what happens next.eagerly waiting for the next one.

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crizal

@crizal

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

Arnav is making his wife comfortable ...aww 😳

n thanx god Khushi is nt dull after knwing everything ...she is as cheerful as she was before 😛

Wow Pari ,i love tat name 😉

Bauji entry soon 😊

I liked those two brotherly figures ❤️

n ya I off course hate Anjali in it 😡 😆

N sm one the lines were soo beautifully written ...forgot to quote 😔

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

So we finally get to see some redemption here.

Arnav deserves it.

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kaulpriyanka

@kaulpriyanka

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

Loved the update. Pls give access to your blog attraction on my mail kaulpriyanka2003@gmail.com

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Arshidrishti

@Arshidrishti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

awesome update , continue soon 😉

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shona136

@shona136

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

Hi appy, i am commenting after a long time...i usually read pawn in your restricted blog that you invited me to...but after the last two chapters couldnt hold myself from letting you know how much i adore this story...and how much i respect you as a writer and as a human being...!!!!!👏

could the last two chapters get any better than this...?? i guess no...it was written to perfection and presition...the emotions portrayed out perfectly, each word chosen with great care to express the essence of the happenings...!!!! all i have to say is...you are the best, always have and always will be...my first and one of my most favourite...!!!

i literally cried for ten minutes reading the poem by aashi12...😭 i have never been emotional to this extent reading anything...the poem fully showed the entire story in just a few simple lines, but had the greatest effect on us... my heartiest gratitude and best wishes to her, for dedicating such a wonderful, touchy and moving piece of work to PAWN...!!!!! no matter how many good FF's i read on IF, ONS2 was always been on top of the list, but i guess now its slowly sharing its position with pawn...!!!!!

coming back to the updates, i have nothing to say about the things that our little khushi has had to face, because of arnav's monstrosity...!!! words wont do justice for what she has gone through...one never understands until she is in that position, i can only imagine...therefore my heartfelt love, support, encouragement, warmth, hugs and kisses to khushi and lots others like her out there in the world who go through the same type of situation...!!

but being a die hard arnav fan, i always felt truly sad and ashamed at his anger and his treatment towards khushi, and also his unfaithful acts... though i have always been a bit ARNAV biased, despite his evil deeds, monstrosity, beastly attitude towards khushi, i always have been optimistic and looked forward to the time when he would realize what had he done...i never thought it would be this soon😲😲... i truly want to smack his head for not realizing it earlier that khushi was a virgin...how could he not have understood...??? 😡😡😡 always blinded by that stupid anger and hot headedness... but i feel relieved that he didnot even hear out anjali and her vile accusations on khushi...and believed his heart, which was unconsciously khushi's...!!

his hesitance now to go near khushi, i understandable... i only feel only he can mend his mistakes, he can cure our bruised and wounded khushi, with his love affection and warmth, because we know he is capable of giving immense love, warmth and care to khushi, as we had previously seen glimpses of it...!!! khushi also wants him to be by her side...!!!

khushi's unconscious mumbles, about not wanting arnav to touch her, and expressing her pain, and seeking her father, tore my heart...it was difficult to go through those lines...!!!!😭

shyam, has truly won my heart in this story and so has akaash...he proved to be a true and great human being by supporting khushi... how could he even marry anjali in the first place...???😡😡 and also arnav giving it back to anjali, by reminding her of status in this house was superb...she deserves more like this...

nani was surprising, and for the first time comforting to read...i guess it was anjali who had brainwashed her, and filled ears against khushi, but the woman in her came to the child's rescue, and i am glad she repeimanded arnav for what he had done to khushi...i hope nani remains this way beside arnav and khushi now, and support them to bring down anjali...!!!!

i have lots to say but dnt have enough words to express them...just that want to salute you and give you a standing ovation... i am writing the next line by standing up, to your concept and thoughts to have conceived and move forward with this story...!!!! HATS OFF TO YOU DEAR...!!!!!

MY RESPECT, LOVE, GRATITUDE, INSPIRATION AND SUPPORT TO YOU...!!!!!

bravo...!!!👏

cheers...

p.s.- sorry if i have written a bit too much...and had you bored...but couldnt help it...you have made us feel so much this story that it somehow automatically came out like this...😊😊