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Originally posted by: hal96

Nice ... loved it
I was alreadii a fan of daya so enjoyin the story
Love Arjun
Update sooon
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thank you so much for liking it..and will update soon...
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I just loved the CS...so many new faces..
banner is just amazing!!

shree and yash as brothers...interesting!!

I loved the plan and how their DIL's supporting them to find a girl for sameer..

and best part was like the girl herself don't know about it..

oh god its gonna blast...great start...
i hope you bring out the best...


Thank you so much for liking Banner..i hope and wish that also i just bring out it beautifully..finger crossed!!😛
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Originally posted by: shona14

moumi awesum prologue
book wali and bakbakwali 😊 sakshi,riya,ayesha are gud
continue karo

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Hey nice ff.
Such me hi golmal hai.
So ayesha and rathore are going to be married and they dont now.
Plss in this ff ariya will be together arjun or riya ki jodi bana.
Do continue soon.
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sorry dr 4 late rply
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it is outstanding update
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Hey friends i am back with my bakar bakar [a new update]..hope you all liked it...😳
Chapter 1b

Riya baas abhi abhi apni nind se uthi hain..use nindse uthte huye dekh Aiesha bolta hain Nind pura huya??

Riya: Di..pura toh huya paar inti garmi main sone ki wajah se ser main dard ho raha hain…

Sakshi: main apki ser daba doon??

Riya [chillake]: Nehi bilkul nehi..teri ser dabane se dard aur barta hain..mere ser ka dard aise hi apne app kaam ho jayegi thori der main…tujhey kuch karne ki jarurat nehi hain…

Sakshi: apne toh aise chillaya jaise maine appe goli chalayii hoo..mera koyii kadar nehi hain na aapko??jis din main nehi rahungi na uss din samaj ayegi aapdono ko??

Aiesha: Abb maine kiya kiya tere saath?

Sakshi: abhi appne kuch nehi kiya paar Chotdi itna jorse chillaya aur apne kuch nehi kaha..main chali jaungi aaplogoko chodke dekhlena..

Riya: kaha jayegii?? Apne Ssural??? Fixed hain tere Shadi???

Sakshi: Kyun sasural hi jana hain??aur bhi toh …

Paar Riya uski bich se hi bol parda hain..Dii Mamma aapki shadi karwana chahte hain ..paar mujhey lagta hain ki chutki ko shadi ki jiyada jaldi hain..toh hum uske liuye koi ladka kyun nehi dekhte!!!!!!!

Aiesha: haan..Mamma ko Sakshi ki shadi ke bare main hi soch na chahiye..use bohot jaldi hain humain chorke jane kii….

Sakshi: diii..main kahi nehi jaa rahi hoo..aur jaungii bhi toh sasural jane ke alwava bhi bohot sare jagah hain janeko…

Riya: Kiya??Kitne fasa rakkhi hain tune??

Sakshi: Maine kisko fasaya??

Aiesha: wo bhi hum bataye…

Sakshi: eye bohot buri baat hain..applog mere bare main galat bolrahe hain…Maine kisiko nehi fasaya…

Sakshi ki baat sunke Aiesha aur Riya haas parda hain..aur un donoko haste dekh Sakshi bhi haas parda hain…

Aur tabhi train unki destination main pouhoch jati hain..Pipli gao main koyi Station nehi.. Pipligao se 100 ya 120km pehle ek station Nilavnagar ..wo teeno Nilavnagar pohoch gayii…

Nilavnagar main unke liye jeep liye Ramukaka aur chadni wait kar raha hain..Ramu kaka aur chandin mukharjee family main Caretaker hain…station se utarte hii wo log jeep se Unki ghar unkii gao pohochegiii….

Nilavnagar bhi Unlogoki liye bohot apna hain jaise Pipligao..

Aiesha apna bags lete huye: Riya tera bag kaha hain??

Riya: Waha hain upar…main leke aati hoon app dono utariye…

Sakshi: di tum mera bag lo main tumhara bag leke aati hoo…

Riya: nehi main le aati hoon….

Eye bolne ke baat Aiesha aur Sakshi train se utar jata hain..aur station main utarne ke baat Sakshi Aiesha ko station main ya uske aspaas koyii jeep nehi dekhai deti…wo log wo hii Riya ki intezer karte hain…

kuch der main Riya aa jati hain..pher wo log station ki es taraf se uss taraf tehelne lagte hain tabhi station ki bahar ek multistore ke paas unlogoko ek jeep dikhaidete hain..wo log dourke uha jaate hain..paar uha jaake dekhte hain uha baas wo jeep khare huye hain..jeep ke aaspaas koyii nehi….

Aiesha: Eye Ramu kaka aur chandni kaha hain..wo log dekhai nehi de rahi…Mamma ne toh kaha tha wo dono ko bhejraha hain..aur unke saath driver bhi toh hoga..kaha hain wo log???

Sakshi aas paas dekhte hain aur bolta hain Dii eha toh dikhai nehi de rahi..shayed Train ke aaspaas ho main jake check karti hoo…

Riya: Assa tu jake dekh..main washroom hoke aati hoo..Paar dii iss station ka washroom kis taraf hain??

Aiesha: wo us taraf hain…Paar eye bags ka kiya karenge…

Riya: di k kaam karte hain eye bags jeep main rakhdete hain..

Sakshi: paar di agar Hamare janese koyi ise Chura liya toh…

Riya: kaise churayega di toh ehii hain…aur raaste main itne saman ke saat di kaise khari rahegiii..

Pher teeno milke unki bags jeep main rakhdeti hain..iske baad Sakshi train ki paas Ramukaka aur chandni ko dundne jate hain aur Riya washroom chali jati hain..

Riya ki jane ke baad Aiesha ko Pani ki pias lagti hain aur wo dekhti hain unlogoke paas jo paani bottle thi uski paani khatam ho gayii hain..toh wo store se paani ki ek bottle kkarid te hain..karid ke ate waqt dorti huye ek admise takra jati hain aur wo gir jata hain aur use chot lag jate hain..aur wo dard se chillaparta hain…

Aiesha: Ahhh….

Uski chillanese asspaas se kuch log age aa jate hain aur puchte hain kiya huya..

Aiesha: wo kisike…

Aise waqt main Aiesha ki baato ke bich pichese koyiii bol parda hain..

Man: Meri saath dakhka lagi hain..Maine janbujke kuch nehi kiya…meri vai ko chot lagi hain main baas thora jaldi main tha..aur bich main eye aa gayii..main manta hoo meri galti hain maine ineh nehi dekha..par eye..inki akhon ko kaha chor aye the main itni bari insan eneh nehi dika..

Aiesha uska chehra nehi dekh pata uske samne kuch admi kahre hone ki wajase…

Paar Aiesha kuch kehne lagte hain..dekhiye aap…

Paar wo insan phir uske bato ki bich bol parda hain..main jaanta hoo app jaise ladkiyo ko dusro paar injaam lagana assa lagta hain..ek toh koyii ladka dekha nehi uske upar gir paro..pher us ladke ko hii phasao…

Uss insane ki baat sunke Aiesha ko baas gussa aa raha hain..paar gir jane ki wajah se use pith main itna dard ho raha ki wo kuch keh nehi pa rahi…

Public: aap aise kaise keh sakti hain…

Man: dekhiye aaplog..i am sorry..paar iss waqt mera jana bohot jaruri hain…

Public: par abb ineh apne ghar koun chorega..eye toh ekele khare bhi nehi ho paraha hain…

Man: Dekhiye…

Isbaar Aiesha uss insaan ki bich bolparda hain…Dekhiye aap sab mujhey iss insaan se koyi madad nehi chahiye..jo insane dusro ki kadar nehi karte..waise choriye eha meri behen hain wo log baas ate hii hogi…

Aiesha ki baat sunke uss insane ko aur gussa ata hain paar apne vai ke bare main soch kar wo kuch kahe bina uha se chale jate hain…

Public: paar aap eha ekele kaise..

Pher Aiesha kuch kehne lagte hain tabhi pichese kisike awaj ate hain Are didimoni kiya huya tumeh???

Aiesha mudke uss insane ko dekhte hain aur bolta hain kuch nehi Ramu kaka..baas gir gayii thi…

Aiesha to public: aaplogoki bohot bohot shukriya paar abhi aaplog jaiye..Abhi mera chinta karneki jarurat nehi…

Ramu kaka: Chandni Didimoni ki madad kar uthne main…

Chandni: haan Kaka..

Jaab Riya washroom se bahar ate waqt samne se Blue Shirt pehne huye kisi admi ko dorke jane dekhte hain…kiya hain eye aise koyi dorta hain kiya..abhi main gir jati…Pher wo jab dusre taraf age badte hain taab dekhte haib chadni Aiesha ki madad kar raha hain niche se upar uthne main aur Aiesha ko dard bhi ho raha hain…

Eye dekhke Riya chilla parta hain..Kiya huya dii???!!!

Aiesha: wo ek Non-Human se takra gayii thi..backside pe pain ho rahi hain…

Riya bhi uski madad karte hain uthne main..aur bolta hain dii mere paas dawa hain bags main..app chaliye main appko jeep main dawa de dungi..kuch der main aap thik ho jayoge…….

Aur other side Sakshi ko Ramukaka aur chadni nehi milte toh isliye wo jeep ki paas wapas chali jate hain..aur waha jake wo shoked ho jate hain..wha joo jeep khari thi wo nehi hain…

Sakshi: Are hamare jeep kaha gayii…Aur eye BarDi Kaha gaye!! Bardi ekele jeep ke saaath kaha chale gaye!!!!! ChotDi toh washroom main gayii thi!!!meri pehle aagayii kiya???itni jaldi agayii??? paar dono vi mujhey eha ekele chorke jeep lekar kaha jayegi???Ajeeb baat hain kaha gaye dono!!!!!!!!

Sakshi eye saab soch raha hoti hain taab uha uski samse se koyi jata hain toh wo uss insanse puchleta hain vai sahab ehape ek jeep khare huye thii..Apne dekha??

Admi:haan dekhe toh the..

Sakshi: toh aap bolsakte hain wo jeep kaha gaye..aur uss jeep ki ..matlab uss jeep main joo log the wo abhi kaha hain???

Admi: Uss jeep toh chale gaye..aur wo log bhi….

Sakshi: kiya???

Admi: haan wo log toh kehrahe the ki wo log bohot jaldimain hain..wo undono ke vai ko kucha ho gaya hain..shayed unke vai ko bohot bari chot lagi hain..isiliye wo log jaldi main likal gaye…

Sakshi: Vaia ko kiya huya???Paar unlogone mera intezer kyun nehi kiya..abb main kiya karoon...wo log mujhey chorke aise kaise jaa sakte hain!!!!! Vaisahab wo jinko cho aye wo mera vai hain..app exactly bol sakte hain uneh kiya huya???

Admi: wo toh nehi bolsakti didi…

Sakshi: Assa thik hain…abb main kiya karoon..

Admi Sakshi ko ekele baat karte huye dekh uske taraf ajeeb nigahose dekhte hain..wo admi uski taraf aise dekhrahe samajhke wo bolta hain vaisahab appka bohot bohot dhannebad..abhi app jaa sakte hainn..Meri madad karne ki shurukiya..mera matlab shukriya….

Sakshi se surukiya sunne ki baa two admi uhase chale jate hain aur sakshi..

Sakshi: Dii applog mera thorasa intezer nehi kiya??applog aise kaise kar sakte hain..abb dada ko kiya huya??uneh kaise chot ayii??Abb main kiya karoon???phone!! haa di ko phone karta hoon..

Paar phone bahar ate hii sakshi dekhte hain ki mobile pe network nehii…aur eye dekkkhe wo aur dar jata hain..Aur man hi man bone lagte hain..Abb main kiya karoon???


To Be Continued...

Precap: Girls reached Pipli gao..
So todays update is complete..i hope you all are enjoy this one..Friends waiting for your most adorable coments dear...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
brilliant update :) loved it
awww riya scolded sakshi and she was angry with her
love they way aisha and riya were teasing sakshi
love the bonding between sisters :)
omg girls left their bag in that jeep
aisha got hurt :(
that guy didn't even give aisha the chance to speak
i think that guy was sameer
sakshi thinking that riya and aisha left her alone
hope they get back their luggage
can't wait to read more
continue soon

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