Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II THREAD 3

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narcy24

@narcy24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Sorry for the late comment.
He is now friend with Khushi...first step had been made...
Wonderful birthday surprise...
Keep going with good work.

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

Nice update
Love Khushi n her Chachu bonding specially candles cake part.
Arnav likes Khushi's effort n accept her friendship offer.
Thanks for update n update soon.

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

Dear, you never fail to leave me speechless with your updates every single time...

Hmm, now where to start!!!

Okay first of all, I want to take this moment to say how much I have come to love KARAN!!! Even though he is Khushi's chachu, an uncle by relation, he seems so much more of an elder bro or the type of person you would look to for advice or in times of need!! I absolutely loved his character so kudos to you for that!!

Secondly a surprise within a surprise with our dear Laddoo making a surpirse birthday plan for the BIRTHDAY BOY!!! I liked how it was totally low key and it was solely full of undying love, (even if ArShi's love has not yet blossomed but there was still love..;) ) for Arnie and it seemed like he enjoyed it too!!

Awwh, bless dear Khushi in this Story for being the bigger person and trying to be the one to initiate peace between them both. I love how she takes feelings of the heart into consideration and is actually and genuinenly trying to be nice to Arnie on his big day! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! :)) :)) :))

(LOOOLL, SORRY I HAD TO SAY IT!!!)

Khushi's surprise was wonderful and so very Khushi like! Staying up until 12, making a cake that would collapse ANY moment, a sugar free one not to mention!, singing happy birthday really loudly, lighting the candles and then MY PERSONAL FAVOURITE, Arnav noticing Khushi's beauty by the glow of the candles on his cake. Who would have thought candles would be the first reason to notice beauty?!?!?

Awesome update dear, love you continue soon!!

Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

thanks for the pm

nice update

would love to c arnav falling for kushi soon

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

Loved iittt...
Khushi n Karan's bonding is sooo adorable...Would love to read more of two..
Thannnxxx GOD Arnav liked the almost surprise...the scene was epic where he came n they were fussing over candles...Hahahhahaa...
I can well imagine the scene...Well the mention of Harrapa I have been there...😃
I m cursing the moment i decided to not res my spot as When i Saw the update The last page was 114 n now its 153...😔
Khaiiirrr Leave it...I loved the update...Upate ssoonniisshhh...thannnxxx alloott for pm dear...

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Asvati

@Asvati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

😳
omg!!!!
hes fallin in luv

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3484492&PID=78172189&&loggedin=1

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fleurs

@fleurs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

Fabulous update & thanks for the PM ...loved the update a lot 😊

ARNAV

The little fight between Karan & Khushi over mere 30 candles to be fit onto a crumbling cake was fun to read

'Yes Titatliyaaa... Where are your manners? Say sorry to me. Right now'

'OOO.. a human offering on Arnav's birthday. WOW. And I thought you guys wanted it to be a low-key affair' Karan chuckled. 😆 😆 😆

How long can he behave kiddish with this kid? 😃

Khushi overwhelmed that she had all the love in the world from her Bade papa, Buaji & her Chachu, also friends like Lavanya Di & Rishabh who saw the human in her rather than just throwing pitiful glances on her like the rest of the world & moreover the fact that Arnav never had a drop of pity shown in his eyes but treated her normally & genuinely fought with her over her having taken over his dad's heart was well framed 👏

A mere discussion over cool & sweet nicknames irking ASR was 😆 😆 😆

Khushi pondering over the chances of having another soul to talk to in her house & deciding to extend a friendly hand to Arnav on his birthday beyond their childish fights was so thoughtful

Woah, Arnav's sudden appearance amidst the heated-candle-argument shocking the birthday planners was a 👍🏼 entry...Khushi handling the situation with advance wishes followed by everyone wishing the birthday boy & then Arnav & Karan getting easily with each other was nice to read

'How is he going to survive under the same roof as motor-mouth Laddoo?' Karan wondered for a minute. 'His fate. What can I do?' 😆 😉

Arnav being dragged into a pact of friendship on his birthday which indeed turned out to be a genuine one rather than the facade they had to put up infront of Sumer & Khushi's birthday arrangements having pleased him was lovely to read

Eager to read more

Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago