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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello I'm back with the update. I had written it yesterday only but didn't get time to post. Sowiee hetu to keep you waiting and sorry to the others too who wanted next part very soon.


PART 2:


The next day kriya was a little gloomy. It was her birthday and everyone had wished her. Like her every birthday her mother had cooked her favorite carrot halwa. She even took few hours leave to spend some with the orphanage kids. Every year on her birthday she did this and it would even make her happy. But this year, she felt incomplete. She wasn't contented. She sighed!! Because she pretty well knew the reason. He hadn't wished her yet. More than half of the day was finished and still he didn't seem to remember anything. She had dropped in many indirect hints buy still no sign of him wishing. Oh! How she wished she could just smash his head off. He even remembered all the unnecessary events related to her but he forgot such a special day of hers. She often shot draggers at him.

Rey smirked with out her seeing. Whenever she glared at him he pretened to be an innocent person concentrating on his work. He loved to irritate her. He wanted her to open up her feelings. Knowing that she was stubborn like a child he had other plans in his mind. All he could do was aww at her when her lips curved into an angry pout. She's way too adorable for him. Putting back his innocent mask he called her.
"Kriya, where's Gupta constructions' file??"
"On your table sir" she replied while concentrating seriously on her work.
"But I can't find it"
"Its on the right corner of your table" she said grtting her teeth.
"I still can't find it...you mind handing it over to me"
"Sure sir" she said controlling herself. This guy has the guts to test her patience. In case if she lost her patience then she would burst up like a volcanic erruption.

While walking towards him, she tripped over some one thing and fell straight on rey who was sitting on his chair trying to supress his smile on seeing her agitated. In this process she ended up landing on his lap. His hands around her waist and her's on his chest. They were having a passionate eye lock, drowned in the ocean like eyes of the other. Kriya was the one to recover first. She tried getting up. But the more she tried the more tight became his grip on her waist.
"The far you go away...the closer I'll pull you towards me" he whispered in her ears. She stopped trying. Her eyes roamed everywhere but not him.
"Look at me" he whispered.
Like a snake gets hypnotised to the tunes played by snake catchers, his voice had the power to hypnotise her eyes. She looked at him and all she found was pure love in his eyes. Even her eyes conveyed all her feelings but still he wanted it to hear from her.

It was 10 PM in the night and kriya was about to leave the office and suddenly she got a call from rey. She was confused why did he call at this hour of the day.
"Hello"
"Hey, kriya...can you please bring the Gupta constructions file..I actually forgot it at my table and the meeting is still on"
Meeting...she wondered. It was scheduled for 7 in the evening and should have been completed by now.
"Hello...hello...kriya...you there" rey's voice brought her back to present.
"Yeah sir I'll bring it"
"Okay, get it to Hotel Spice Avenue room no.402 " saying this he cut the call.
Hotel Spice avenue she wondered because as per her knowledge it was supposed to be held at Mr.Gupta's private conference hall and why in the room?? All her questions will be answered once she reaches there.

After 30 minutes of travelling she reached there. She was standing outside the room confused whether to go inside or not. Setting her confusions aside she rang the bell, but to her surprise the door was already open. She stepped in and found that the it was very dark in there and she was scared of darkness.
"S..si..sir" she called out.
On getting no response she again called out.
"Re..rey..where are you??" She heard the door being closed. As soon as the door closed the lights were on. She was surprised to see the view in front of her. On seeing it all her worries, flew away and a sweet smile crept on her lips. The room was decorated with her favorite combination of pink and purple roses. On the wall were hanged many photos of her. A heart was made on the bed and in the middle of it was written "Happy Birthday Baatcutter"
"Liked it??" asked rey from behind
"Loved it" she replied but then came back to her senses.
"You...you didn't forget my birthday??" She questioned him
"I can never forget anything related to you" he answered back.
"Happy birthday!!" He wished her and handed her a small box wrapped in gift cover. Without any further enquiry she opened it and found a beautiful necklace. She couldn't help but smile giving him butterflies in his stomach.
"Thank you for this but I can't.." before she could complete he spoke "please don't say no". Unable to refuse him, she accepted the gift.
"Wh..what about this file?" She asked.
"Oh it was just a means to get you here...like I said before I know you more than you kbow yourself, you would never agree to come here if I'd call you without any reason."
Gosh!! He knew her so well she thought.

The bell rang and a waiter came in and placed a chocolate cake on the table. On it was written "Happy Birthday Love"
A crimson hue spread across her cheeks. Rey was behind her. He placed his hand on top of hers and made her cut the cake. Taking a piece he fed her. Her hands automatically reached that piece and fed him from the side she ate. Rey gently carassed her cheek. She retaliated by closing her eyes. They stayed in that position for a while. Rey inched forward to minimize the distance between their lips. He was about to place his lips on hers but then suddenly she opened her eyes and jerked back.
"This is wrong...its just wrong" she kept chanting when ever he tried to speak. More than him she was trying to make herself believe it. She was about to leave but he caught her wrist making her stop.
"Please don't leave me, kriya" he said. She knew these words didn't mean for the present situation rather they indicated his life forever. Seeing her stop he spoke
"You very well know that I love you and even you do love me...then whats the problem??"
"I...I don't love you" she lied.
"Oh really?? Who are you trying to fool me or yourself??"
She sighed in defeat.
"I love you rey" these words made him go only on the 9th cloud but also to the infinte one.

"But.."
This 'but' vanished his smile away. He asked her to proceed with his eyes.
"But you're married rey and I really don't want to be the other woman in you life"
"Kriya" he made her sit and continued "you are and you will always be the single woman in my life ever" his eyes conveyed the honesty of his words.
"What about taani??? She would be having her own dreams about her family with you"
"Yes, taani does have her own set of dreams but none of them is related to me. We both were forced to marry only because our grand parents were best of friends...but trust me neither of us happy. We don't even know a single pie about each other and spending whole life together is next to impossible...and we're getting divorced next week"
Kriya felt a little relieved when he spoke about divorce. She smiled weakly, but again started her questionare.
"But...what would the society think about us...about me...??"
"Are you kidding me?? You seriously care about the society. As far as I know..you're a free bird who lives her life according to her and doesn't follow the rules of society...so today all of a sudden what made you think about it??" He paused for a moment and then continued "as long as you're with me and we're together nothing wrong can taje place...let people think what they want because after sometime when they find a new hot topic to gossip about they'll eventually forget us"
In an instant kriya hugged him and spoke while continuing to snuggle against him.
"I'm sorry...I'm really sorry..I know I'm a fool, a dumb person and a confused soul...mom always says correct that I'm a jhalli"
He couldn't help but smile at these childish antics of her. He could feel her pouting while engulfing him tightly. She pulled back and whispered in his ears "I love you" and pecked his cheeks. His happiness semmed to be boundless. It was beyond all the limits.
"I love you too" they smiled at each other.
"Err...can we complete the unfinished work of ours" he spoke. Understanding what he meant she pulled him closer pressing their bodies against the other. Her hands circled his neck and she embraced him into a passionate smooch. They kissed till eternity.

So hows it??? I myself am not satisfied with this part, it didn't turn out the way I wanted🤔. Sorry if you guys felt the same..


anyways do hit the like tab and leave your reviews...feel free to criticise it ..


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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
u ended it?? :O

badi jaldi ho gaya... :'(

mereko toh alag tha ki abhi pura drama hoga..

par koi nhi..

it was sweet..

loved the way u showed the bond b/w them...

awesome... :D
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
NYCCC diii finally awsummm end...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Lvd ths os.. Its jst awsm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome update...loved it very very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
AWESOME

LOVED IT

short bt amazing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Cute update :-) loved the surprise
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
aww wooww ... super awsome os yaar kya stry likhi hai i jus hope this is nt the endd... because if it is i its nt a proper one do cntinue with this atleast ek aur part with a proper endinngf
such a cute updte loved it bought a smile on me face and hayyee rey is so romntic bought a smile on me face///
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Res aa gaya mera ! 🤣

Unres ! 🤣
Me finally unresing... *Scared because of your order* 🤣
Sorry, kal nahi kiya... Thodi si busy thi ! 🤔 😛
This part was fab Mannu :D loved it ;)
Kriya's birthday.. And she spent it with orphanage kids, Aww... How sweet ! :D
But Rey didn't wished her purposely ! Hehe.. And she was giving him indirect hints.. But he still didn't... 🤣 And she was shooting draggers at him and he was still teasing her... Kamina hai pura Rey 😛
"The far you go away...the closer I'll pull you towards me" Aww.. I loved this line..
He then called her juth bolke :P and then their cute scenes... Finally they are together :D
But itna jaldi khatam? 🤔 I expected thoda Drama.. 😛 But nevermind as far as KriYaansh are together... 😃
Mast tha :D Muahhss :*
Edited by hetalt29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
It was nice and sweet..
But jaldi tha end..

Well! It was so cute...d covo btwn Kriyaansh...
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