PYGMALION:- Part Six up. pg 31 (On Hold)

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

This is a really nice story! I like the way you've portrayed Khushi.. a lot more spunkier and full of confidence than in the show.

Poor Arnav.. guy doesn't seem to have a clue what hit him!

Keep updating!

And PM me if you do, I'm adding you to ze buddy list. :)

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Poor Khushi...Shashi Gupta is just abhorrent and disgusting!

I hope she takes up ASR's offer: egotistical he may be but he was upfront. Maybe once he finds out about Shashi he can give what for! 😡

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Sisbamboo1
Nice update. We see where Khushi is vulnerable now. Her dear bhua is sick and needs to be taken care of.

I find it funny that you've made two of the most adorable and innocent characters so completely nasty. Shashi as a drunk and Happyji as a lecher?! I had to go back and read it once against just to make sure that I'd read the name right lol.

I'm guessing that the next update will show Khushi looking for a job, failing, and then ultimately going to AR to accept Arnav's propos- oh sorry- offer 😉.

One question, why did Shashi adopt Khushi when he hates her so much?

I'll probably clear your doubts regarding Shashi adopting Khushi in the next update.😊

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: hmtxyz
This is a really nice story! I like the way you've portrayed Khushi.. a lot more spunkier and full of confidence than in the show.
Poor Arnav.. guy doesn't seem to have a clue what hit him!

Keep updating!
And PM me if you do, I'm adding you to ze buddy list. :)

Thank you so much for the kind words.

Trust me, they mean a lot.😊

Glad to have you on board.