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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it

concrete and gripping plot 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 1 was mind blowing 👏 I loved it😊

Well done Kuts😊

I loved the last part if the story so much. The way Khushi helps the soul of the lady to save her daughter. And the way Khushi says that Meera's mom didn't leave her, but her mother was the star next to the bright star, was really emotional.

Awesome update😳

Now I'm feeling more nervous😊

Waiting for chapter 2😉

Update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khushiiXOXO

freak !gave me goosebumps!


khushi talking to dead since such a young age..wow,scary!brave girl!.. i wud have most probably died of fear!..(sh**! something just fell & startled me!...sorry m so jumpy...all thanks to d writer who made it seem so real👏 ...

arnav dsnt remember his past?hmm ..khushi?
wat made him go to India?wat was d message?y cant anyone tell khushi abt her past?..question..questions...seems it is going to be an interesting ride with d Dead as Co-Passengers..hhmm..r they gonna help Arnav & khushi get together? ...there i go dreaming again...

"Kehte hain ki agar kisi chiz ko dil se chaho to puri kaynath usko tumse milane ki koshish main lag jaati hai" - reminded me of dis dialogue ..i feel as if d forces r out to help them get together...


looking forward to the next talented writer's update...hhmm.. expectations are gonna be high coz of this chapter 😉 ...which m sure will exceeded by all d 35 equally talented writers..have read quite a few of their works so this is gonna be an Awesome experience!👍🏼

ps:Is d word" Raaz" synonymous wid spirits/ghosts/supernatural beings? ...serious question..my Hindi isnt upto d mark 😃.. the above dialogue?thank god for mr.google & whoever wrote it in Hindi! ..i had someone translate it for me 😊

raaz means a secret a mystry.

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Posted: 12 years ago



will u unress it😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Hridey! I will Unres mine soon! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such an Awesome chap that was👏👏
Loved it...the way u wrote abt bth and their problems...👏👏
Superb one...thanks for the pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
god i am late but
i really like it
its a bit horror
i was scared
but love it
if i was in khushis place i would screem and screem and screem
and would never sleep alone
haahahha
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was freaking awesome dear...loved it so so much...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 1
nice part...
touching one...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb...undoubtedly one of the best plots i've read till date...
gr8 work...👏👏👏👏

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