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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

hii sweetu... sorry for the late reply [hiding myself under the table , i know my sweetu is glaring at me 😉😆ready to twist my ears for being late😉]

coming to the update this scene
rey was sitting in front of taani , holding her hand softly and gently so that it won't hurt her keeping his head near her reminiscing their beautiful special memories and looking at her through his tears when he suddenly remembers that what doc said that taani ka hosh main aana bahut zaruri hai
i would like to see this scene onscreen ., its so beautiful... although i dont want taani hurt , but ha this scene will be very beautiful onscreen i can visualize .. i so want to see something like this .. the whole rey's conv was so beautiful .. between my naughty sweetu , let me ask .. u used to see dil mil gaya also? how come u know all VMs my jaan .. arman -riddhima n gunjan -samrat VM was there in another chapter ryt?..
i loved this update it was so beautifully written baby, loved the way u used the correct words , they had the needed intensity .. muahh my sweetu


AWWW MERI SHONU DI
COME OUT FROM D TABLE AS MERI ITNI HIMMAT KAHAN KI MAIN MERI SHONU DI KE EARS TWIRL KARUN 😆 YA UNHE ANGRY GLARE DUN😆

AS YE RIGHT MERA NAHI MERI PYAARI SHONU DI KA HAI SIRF AS AAP MERI PYAARI SHONU DI JO HO
MUJHE TO SIRF AAPKO KHOOB SAARA PYAAR KARNE KA RIGHT HAI 😉😉

SO THIS HUG IS 4 U MY WORLD'S BEST DI 🤗

🤗


LOVE U DI 4 YOUR LOVELY HEARTY COMMENT

AS I ALWAYS SAY THAT MY INSPIRATION IS U MY SHONU DI
SO IF U WANT 2 PRAISE THEN PRAISE YOURSELF DI
😉😉
AND YES I USED 2 WATCH DMG AND MJHT 😊😊
I LOVED DMG A LOTT 😉😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

awesome yaar ... and your song selection is always awesome 👏


AWWW THANKS A LOTTT DEAR 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

di loved this part
emotional😭


HEY APRAJITA PLZ DON'T CRY MY DEAR
AND THANKS 4 LOVING MY UPDATE
😊 BUT SMILE NOW AND KEEP SMILING DEAR 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK U ALL 4 YOUR GREAT SUPPORT AND ALL YOUR PRECIOUS COMMENTS , THEY REALLY MEANS A LOT 2 ME , YOUR SUPPORT ENCOURAGE AND MOTIVATE ME 2 WRITE SO PLZ CONTINUE IT IN FUTURE ALSO
DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART PLZZ

WARNING - IT'S ALSO AN EMOTIONAL UPDATE
THIS UPDATE IS 4 MY DEAR FRIEND VIJI AND ROCKANYA AND ALL MY SWEET DI'S AND DEAR BUDDIES WHO REALLY WANT IT'S UPDATE
SORRY GUYS 4 BEING LATE , BUT I WAS OUT OF STATION 4 SOME DAYS IN BETWEEN

TUJHE BHULA DIYA

CHAPTER- 8

( play d above clickable link in other tab before reading further )

he just want 2 live only 4 his love now , he just want 2 live with her love
but get back 2 his position although he don't want to as she need 2 be checked by d doc now, so he just stand up 2 go and call d doc after kissing her again and again , but as he was about 2 go when taani held his hand but weakly and stop him and nods her head in no and asking him 2 not leave her alone ,
rey(caressing her cheeks )- sweetheart main sirf doc ko bulake la raha hun ,

( rey suddenly remember what she was asking before fainting but now taani is very weak 2 ask/speak anything so he says while crying )
rey ( crying holding her hand ) - and haan vo little boy bilkul thik hai jiski jaan bachaane ke liye tumne apni jaan daav par laga di thi sweetheart ,

( and he take her hand gently and keep it close 2 his heart and speaks further while crying ) - taani yeh jo meri dadhkane mehsoos kar rahi ho na tum ,ye sirf tab tak dadhkeingi jab tak tumhara dil dadhkega aur jab tak mera dil tumhe apne paas mehsoos karega , isiliye aage kabhi bhi apni jaan ko khatre (danger)mein daalne se pehle ye soch lena ki tum apne saath saath meri jaan bhi khatre mein daal rahi ho , kyunki main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta , rey taani ke bina kuch nahi hai ,
tum ho to main hun , agar tum nahi to main bhi nahi
so plz meri jaan aage kabhi aisa kuch mat karna , varna main marr
( d crying taani immediately keeps her hand on his mouth and not let him complete his line and
and cryingly say by her expressions -- plz aisa mat kahiye rey
and rey keeps his hand on taani's hand and kiss her hand cryingly ,
and crying rey bents towards crying taani and again starts kissing her tears and absorbing all her tears and all her pain ,
but then he realizes that taani needs 2 be checked by d doc now so he was about 2 move but again taani holds his hand weakly by her fingers
( she was having pain whenever her drips stretch but she was not showing her pain as at that time she just want 2 feel rey's love and also she don't want 2 upset rey , and moreover her power of love overcome her pain , she forgets her pain while feeling rey's love )

taani ( still nods in a refusal as somewhere she was still scared , ki kahin usse kuch ho gaya aur uska pyaar usse duur ho gaya to )and so a tear drop again fell from her eyes as she was still scared and frightened due 2 that worst incident that happened with her
but rey's eyes also get wet 2 see his love tear as now he just want 2 see smile and happiness on taani's face and so he immediately bent towards her face and again kiss her tears as if promising her that he will not let her cry anymore , and now her pain has 2 confront him before her

and he caress her cheeks and her silky hairs , feeling her and her aroma of love and they both were just staring at each other , they were again lost in each other
they both just want 2 feel each other and each other's love and care which sooth their inner souls , and makes them more pure by each other's love

and just then taani's breathing becomes a little fast as she was still weak and feeling pain inside her so rey come out of his trance and decides 2 call a doc 2 check her but he also don't want 2 leave her alone , and she was also not letting him go

so he take out his phone assuring taani that he is not going anywhere and caressing her cheeks at d same time and rubbing her hands and at d same time he call swayam who was sitting outside ICU
but he was lost in taayam memories , reminiscing their each and every moment so he didn't listen his phone first but a nurse was passing by him who asks him that someone is calling him
and then he pick up d phone
and rey immediately says- call d doc now fast,
swayam ( get worried ) - kyun kya hua taani thik to hai
rey -- taani ko hosh aa gaya hai lekin tu jaldi se doc ko bula
and he cut d phone
swayam just rush and call d doc as there was no time 2 think anything

in ICU rey was just rubbing her hands softly and caressing her cheeks
as taani was having a little problem while breathing ,
just then swayam enters with doc and nurse in d ICU

reyam eyes were wet seeing taani in this condition
then nurse come and again put oxygen mask 2 her and doc check her pulse rate , b.p etc but rey was still holding her hand gently in d whole process
and nurse change d glucose bottle and doc give her injection but she was scared of injection and since swayam knew about it so
swayam speaks cryingly - nahi doc usse injection mat do taani ko injection se bahut darr lagta hai , making rey and taani also cry
plz aap usse medicine de do but plz meri baby sis ko injection mat do usse bahut dard hoga

doc - dekhiye aap bahar jayiye aur hamein apna kaam karne dijiye ,

sw( crying ) - aap samjhiye meri little sis ko injection se bahut darr lagta hai
rey samjha na inhe

doc- aapko apni behan ki jaan pyaari hai to aap hamein apna kaam karne dijiye

sw( has 2 agree but when he looked at taani 's crying face , he went 2 her and stand near rey and says cryingly )- taani kuccchhh naahiii hoggaa , basss abhii sab thik ho jayega , tera bhai hai na sab thik karne ke liye ,
( and sw still crying sits on his knees near taani and starts caressing her cheeks gently 2 divert her from injection as taani ko injection se bahut darr lagta hai , but taani eyes filled with tears upto d brim and starts flowing down her face and refusing 4 injection ( and swayam and rey both were also crying seeing her like this )
( on one side of taani there were reyam and on d other side of taani doc and nurse injecting her injection on her arm )

rey( crying )- kuch nahi hoga taani , hum hai na tumhaare saath sweetheart , look at me , look into my eyes , kuch nahi hoga , trust me

( and then taani look into rey's eyes and get lost in it and lost in is love but achanak se she felt pain due 2 d injecting of injection in her arm and her hold on rey 's hand gets tight and she closed her eyes , and rey felt her pain in his heart )

and swayam also turned his face back as he also can't see his baby sis in pain

doc- ho gaya ,
swayam(still crying while caressing her cheeks ) -- bas gudiya ho gaya ,
(and then taani slowly open her wet eyes)
dekh ho bhi gaya , tera bhai hai na tere sath , ab tu jaldi se thik ho jaa , phir na main tujhe teri favorite ice cream , chocolate , aur naye cute teddy sab laake dunga
taani ( say weakly by her face expressions only )- pakkka bhai
sw - bilkul pakka meri gudiya , bas tu jaldi se thik ho jaa , ohir vahi hoga jo tu chahegi ,

doc - aap mein se ek mere saath aayiye , mujhe baat karni hai aapse
rey - main aata hun
sw- nahi rey tu taani ke paas ruk , main jaata hun ,
aur iska khayal rakh , thik hai , abhi isse teri zaroorat hai

( and then sw caress her forehead and assure her that he will just be back and goes with doc and nurse )

sorry isse aage abhi nahi likh paungi , my heart is very painful and emotional now by writing this 😭😭

PRECAP - SAME AS OF d LAST CHAPTER

SORRY IF I MADE U CRY AGAIN AS MY HEART IS ALSO CRYING NOW 😭😭😭

TAKE CARE AND KEEP SMILING 😊 MY SWEETU BUDDIES
U HAVE 2 COMMENT AS WELL AS LIKE FROM HEART IF U REALLY WANT NEXT UPDATE
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
VERY EMOTIONAL UPDATE... M SUPER GLAD THAT REYAM R THERE FOR HER... PLS UDATE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh gawd what a story yaar moni i wanna come nd hug u🤗 yaaa i am just left dumbstruck and speechlesss hun yaar main royi nai par haan mein taani ka pain feel kiya nd believe m yaar mere ronnte kahde ho hye the yaar nd i was shiviring yaar aisa laga ki bas mein taani ko jaakar hug kar lun yaar ...o gawdd itna emotinal tha yeh puri os ki poocho mat moni yaar just wanna give you my herat for this yaar...❤️❤️❤️ loved the whole story and read all the parts in one go yaar😳😳😳suberbb work yaar jitna bolun kam hai yaar😳😳😳😳


Chapter-1
Yaar i read it and bileve mein tabhi se taani ka pain feel karna shuru kar diya yaar nd washroom jis yarah vo royi ohh gawdd yaar...it was superbb emotional update yaar ⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏
Chapter-2
ohh gawdd iss chap mein ro nahi rahi thi lekin meri aankhion se khud aanshun nika aaye yaar phele toh taani ki personal diary yaar...ohh gawd and phir taani ko goli lag gayi sachi mein yaar meri jaan hi nikal gyi iss chap mein bahut mushkil se himmat ki aage padhne ki yaar...Loved the song yaar also very much yaar ...suberbb work again😭😭😭😭

Chapter-3
Iss chapter yaar mein itni buri tarah se royi hun ki bataun yaar i could feel all reyam's pain yaar sachi mein the way wrote it just won my heart yaar nd the vm yaar ohh gawdd it was right there yaar once again amazing work yaar...i was again left speechless yaar u are a fav writer yaar❤️


Chapter-4
ohh gawddd yaar kitna emotional likha yeh chapter yaar hey bhagwaan i was shedding tears rona nahi chahti phir bhi aakhein num thi yaar and rey ke saath pray karne lagi

mein bhi yaar and swayum ohh gawdd ..kya bolun mein u jusk ock moni yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️
and the kal ho na ho instrumental perfect song yaar ...
tu jahan vm ohh gawdd it was needed yaar loved the way how taani became consicous when doc left hope best part yaar iske liye yaar

and pata hai i chukled on with teray eyes while reading it yaar ...hehe rey's care was like awww nd taani dubara faint ho gyi made me sad yaar😭nd tera note yaar i loved it yar😳😳😳
iss update ke liye yeh yaar😳😭


Chapter-5
i guess taani loves him very much and he also loves her a lot , her health got better when he was with her , by his love as if inke pyaar ne usse jeene ki chaah de di ho , a new life di ho inke pyaar ne usse

Yaar yeh lines padke i felt just crying yaar it all becoz of taarey true love yaar ...loved reyam yaar very much yaar

yaar i loved the reyam convo very much it was heart-touching yaar nd aso the song yaar😳😳😳 yahan se i started smiling a little yaar😳😳😳 nd precap made happy yaar

Awww such a cute chpter i was just like aww crying and smiling together while reading it yaar believe it was the best chapter yaar...i loved taarey yaar😳😳😳😳
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Chapter-6
wow chapter yaar again seriously yaar rey ka pov jo tune likh omg i loved it to the core re and swayum i waana hug him yaar 😳😳😳 nd yaadein mera fav ssong jispe meine apni12 mein contemp kiya tha yaar jaise hi yeh gaana play kiya i started doing contemp yaar par vo meri taani aur tere liye tha yaar loved this chapter to the core yaar😳😳😳


Chapter-7

that ws awesome...

each n evry words of rey reflectd his love for her...
n at the end the way taani held him n stopd him frm going ws sm thng magical n serene...
n the song omg yaar it was touching loved taarey alot yaar nd awwsome chpter again yaar


FINALLY NOW CHAPTER-8 😳😳😳😳
Sabse phele to tu hi hakikat mera fav song hai yaar loved very much and taarey ohh gawdd just wanna hug rey yaar ...suberbb work yaar👏👏👏⭐️⭐️


omgg yaar again itna emotional chapter yaar reyam holding taani ko injection se daarr lagta i could feel her pain yaar loved it loved it amzing chap yaar THANXX FOR WRITING THIS WONDERFULL STORY MONI LOVE YA 😳😳😳 nd plzz updte soon okk i'll be eagerely waiting yaar😳😳😳








Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaww it's so emotional but I love it. Taarey love each other sooo much. Love how Reyam distract her while the doc give her injection. Amazing update and as always u did an excellent job
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ress!!!
Unres!..

Amazing fabulous and mindblowing!!
The way you write with so much emotions... And it comes out so beautifully... Just awesome!!
I just realized my mouth was left open as i was so engrossed in your update... Loved it... 🤗 🤗
Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update as usual dear... i loved d taarey part... taani didnt evn wanna leave rey a sec... awww! :)

Please continue soon n pm me!!! loved itt!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar tumne toh senti ker diya 😭😭 but update was fab👏

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