TR-TUJHE BHULA DIYA(updated CHAP-12-pg127)

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Nikki

@Nikki_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Amazing update
after tommorow episode your this part cherry on d cake..
Rey caring,loving side for taani his all sentence just wow u discribe it very well..
And precap intresting no clue about future update next part soon..

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Indu

@redroses123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Baby , now this is for 5th chapter.
This was so so so beautifully written, heart touching. Moni though i cry, u know what i love reading emotional stories than others.
My fav dialouge is the one rey replies to swayam when swayam tells a thanks , the one where he says meri pyar, meri mohabbat..(i am from phone so cant copy paste the dialg else i wud have ) that was so out of the world shona, u wrote it so beautifully and then the way u described the tears of reyam like kuch khushi se to kuch guilt se, kuch anger se to kuch pyar se .. That part u know What shona , i so so so loved reading that part .
Now gonna read next chapter

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Indu

@redroses123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Now this is for chapter6. This also a superb chapter. Loved it to the core. U know what moni when u write pain na the words u use get so strong that it melts the mind of a reader who reads, i lovd the way u wrote swayams helplessness n pain , reys pain, where he sits outside the ot , i had tears even without hearing the song , i know the song n i love it , if i read with the song i would have really cried hard. Then coming to the last part , the boys realization. Now that was needed .
On an overall an excellent chapter shona.

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

it was a really touching update...loved it =)

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Nikhita

@nuckts

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

awwe finally taani gained conscious

i loved rey when he spoke the lines in bold letters

it was a cute part

excited to see who these 3 people are

thanks 4 d pm!

do continue soon!😊

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Vinitha nair

@viniVDlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

wow awsm and emotional update ... heart touching ...:) u r amazing dear...n taani is back omg iam soo happy plz update soon and pm me and thanks alot dear for d pm

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raddhi

@raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

finally taani open her eye yaar

it was emotional infact i cry but

dis treas was in happiness u know

happiness treas haaye i luv tht song n rey yaar

i mean he show her luv n she open her eye haaye

dis luv is so powerful i luv it thanks for PM n do it again

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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

wow yaar!!! finally happy love taarey!!!

pls ab zyaada intezaar mat karaao...

pls update soon!!!

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priyal_TaaRey

@priyal_TaaRey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

Amezing update dear...

Superb...

Update soon...

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

Oh my,rey showering al hs lv to tani ws pure bliss to rd & tani gaining consciousness wit d hlp of hr true lv ws soothing...Thank god krishnaji,fr brngng bck tani to rey...Amazing dr...