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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Just finished reading all the chapters n I must say ur an amazing writer! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: avni_barun

Khushi. tum theekh ho?????? ohhh god...u know after reading this line i just slip into Arshi world n dream abut them...then after some time i realize that m reading ur FF... 😆
u r just superb Di...thanku, thanku, thanku... 🤗 You are no less huggiiieee🤗
Arshi n IPK has given me new friend like u... 😃 me too Avni😊
wow that was interesting...
i hope Arnav has planned all this what ever happened at Khushi's place... 😕
Lekhraj is so cheap 😡 ...I wanna punch him on his nose n his eyes...
Hope Arnav beats him black, blue...
who is the person who held him from behind???cant be Arnav coz Lekhraj will not say such words for Arnav... 😕
then may be he is Neeraj, his son or Garima'a brother...
the family is still not aware of Neeraj's truth...
ohhh cant wait, still thinking what will happen next...
superbly awesome update... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️
plz update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: hetaldave

superb but short one s-ji...😔
hope we will get long one after your problem will be solved

I think it's Arnav in the last part of this update.😕


Next update will be short!😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ara_000

congrats for the new thread deary...
now cuming to d update...
i simply loved it...
loved where arnav pecked khushi on her lips nd said
"It was quick, isn't it? No one seen, we are safe".
hahaha they both r simply way too cute...
i hate dat lekhraj..arghhh😡 😡 😡 😡
good dat khushi finally spoke the truth dat she is not ready for d marriage nd she loves ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA...
aha dats d spirit...
minblowing update jiji...
simply awsum👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


Thank you so much yar! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: aquagal

Congrats for the new thread 😊

Two months have passed...
Khushi is back to Lucknow and Lekhraj is back with his lecherous eyes too...😡
He needs a crime master Gogo jo uski aankhon se gotiyaan khel le😡
Good that Garima answered him back, the way he deserves...
Owww.. So who is the one holding his hand at the end?? Arnav or someone else?


LOL Gogo hahahaha😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: KKKA

S F JI ...BADHAI HO BADHAI HO ... Thank youuu Ji!


FROM ONE FOOL TO ANOTHER HAPPY BUDDAY TO YOU TOO Aaahhh same to you😳

LEKHRAJ KI LIKHAYI MITANE AA GAYA AA GAYA [ECHO]

RUBBER MAN ARNAV rubber man bahahahha 🤣

KHUSHI IS BOLD N CARRYING

CHHOTA BHEEM[UPDATE] ACHCHAA HAI ACHHA HAI [UTPAL DUTT STYLE]

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME ALERT





KKKA

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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: avni_barun

Di, i was going thru all ur work n found that u dont have any banner for Love It Happens n Krishnaveni n Hamesha...
plz make one for each of them...
n the banner of Fanatic n Old Flames is just awesome specially Old Flames...
It goes with the story completely... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


I dont think i'll get to make one for Krishnaveni cuz they are teenagers in the story!
And have made one for Hamesha but think it' have to change cuz Hamesha is already an ongoing ff on IF!

Awe thank you so much dear, it took a loads of time to edit that banner of Old Flames
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: desirule123

Just finished reading all the chapters n I must say ur an amazing writer! 😃


Awe thank you so much dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Warning : Update is too short! Bear with me this time.

Dedicating this Update to "KKKA ji" A chotta bheem update again!


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Chapter 42


Strikes Back..?

"ENOUGH"

A loud yell from the living area startled Khushi and she ran to see the happenings , with pounding heart.

Lekhraj stood up with the help of Garima.

"How dare you?" He asked shoving his chest with his hands.

"I bloody dare DAD"

Neeraj said as his eyes clashed with his father's

Everyone present there were stunned at the declaration.

Khushi looked at Neeraj incredulously as he mouthed "DAD"

"Jiju?"

Khushi came infront of him, her eyes seeking answers. Payal was too much stunned to utter a word. Garima's condition was no different from her daughters.

Both the men glared at each other as Khushi pushed them both apart.

"Did you just called him Dad?"

Chutki asked as she stood holding a crying Aashna in her hands.

Aashna was sleeping peacefully and the loud grunt of her father had woke her up.

"He's my f**king Dad, whom I can never consider as ONE, never ever in my life"

He said as his eyes closed, fists clenched.

"He made me do all this, I didn't know that how you people were connected with Lekhraj Singh, he said me that he wanted to destroy Khushi and her family, for ruining his reputation in the society, and I had no other option to get into your house other than marrying Payal.."

Payals eyes brimmed with tears as she watched Neeraj speaking, she no longer heard anything he said. She kept looking at Aashna and then her father, who betrayed her?

"Then as I realized his evil deeds, it was too late to back out, I am so sorry that I had caused you all pain , nothing else.."

Neeraj said as his eyes met Payal's. payal tore his gaze and lifted Aashna in her arms and strode out of there.

"Payal, please, payal stop"

Neeraj ran behind her begging to stop.

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Lekhraj smoothed his dress and walked out of the Gupta mansion cooly.

Garima, Khushi and chutki watched him leaving, as if nothing had happened.

Garima almost stumbled upon the chair next to her. too weak to respond.

She couldn't believe that Neeraj was that bas***ds son.

She clutched onto her Mangal Sutra she wore still, in the rememberance of her beloved husband… seeking strenghth from him, as she wept broking down, thinking about her elder daughte'rs ill fate.

Khushi and Chutki sat alongside her consoling her. their mother wasn't a weak woman, just situations got worse and after all she's a human, it was too much for them to digest or handle.

Khushi called Arnav informing about the same and Arnav's reply startled her even.

When she found out that Neeraj was the one who switched the call details of Arnav's father that day.

She could not take it anymore as Arnav said there's more details about lekhraj that he dig out with the help of a private detective.

She kept the call, as she felt herself getting weak infront of that lekhraj and his god knows what plans.

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Its been two days since Neeraj admitted him being Lekhraj's son. And Payal had never gave him a chance to explain.

Garima and Khushi passed him a disgusting look every time he came infront of them.

Chutki ignored him completely, but a part of her yearned for her Jiju, but the truth startled her everytime as she realized him being her half brother.

She wept as she called Arnav and shared her grief. Being a bastar'ds daughter and now neeraj's half sister. She hated herself for being attached with such heartless monsters.

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Lekhraj was back to Delhi and he behaved with Arnav as nothing happened at all, during his visit to Lucknow.

Arnav too behaved with him as if was not aware of a thing that happened, in those two days.

Lekhraj was too busy weaving his daughter's marriage dreams, he didn't notice his daughter was busy elsewhere with someone else.

Too bad, Arnav thought as he saw him going through the websites of wedding planners.

His eyes twinkled as he saw NK and Kittu walking at the terrace holding hands. A cute smile playing both the lips.

Not bad NK, not at all bad!

Arnav thought as he watched the Love Struck couple flowing in their own lake of Love.

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A/N


Next will be Maha Update Sacchi wala Promise!


Love

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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
well I never thought that neeraj would ever admit...but good...better late than never...
oh ho poor lekhraj doesn't know what has striked him😈

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