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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Firstly Congratulations on the new thread!

I don't mind getting precaps because your each update makes me forget about that like this one...

Arnav was actually thinking about telling her and he just didn't let go that he does love her now

& ofc instead of doing the right thing he went on to some crap about the mehndi guy 😆 and ruining Khushi's mehndi awww

Sooo that's why Khushi was enjoying everything to the fullest because she knows she won't get it

Arnav standing up for Khushi like that was soo GREAT and then both feeling the pain for each other

Can't wait to read about how Khushi breaks down Arnav's walls, because i think that'd be the day where they can even be heading towards becoming something to each other in front of the world

Edited by LyssaPie - 12 years ago

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

First things first, if its not a problem, could you like, maybe, you know, smear mehndi all over that aunty's face? and arms and legs and her whole wardrobe. Bloody annoying b****.

Coming to the most endearing thing in this chapter, the fact that they were both. taunted by the pathetic woman, yet, all they could think of was each other. That was beautifully written.

Also, the pony tail wearing pony scene, absolutely adorable.

love
sonia

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

It's beautiful farah, I loved their little fight abt the mehndi and I like the way u said arnav left a live beating part of his body before he went away, that was too cute. I love the banner. It was amazing, thanks for the pm. Looking fwd to the next chapter.

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Loved it..
The last sentence was so good..
Its time to be Arnav's Khushi..

Lol Arnav jealous of pony tail man..
He ruined her hands but still i love this possessive side of Mr Raizada

the most beautiful thing was they were thinking about each other's pain ..

Awesome update and congo on new thread

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

HAW! he ruined her hands just becoz he was jealous of a pony tail!!!!!???

Bechari Khushi

The enough reminded me of IPK days. and hehehehe. confess kartey kartey ruk gaya :(

But seriously humarey haan aurtoon ko siwaye dosroon ki zindagi mein dakhaal dyeney key ilawa aur koi kaam nahin hai. rang mein bhang daal key chali gai!!!!!

ab dekhna hai how do they make up ...😳

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sskaug25

@sskaug25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

That was a nice update. I miss the precap. Thanks for the pm

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nsipkknd

@nsipkknd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

thanks for the PM

you bring out a wide smile everytime i get a update pm for this story

keep up the good work...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

That was great! Is Arnav putting on mehendi for her have some hidden symbolism?!? Regardless loved how he stood up for her.. And khushi's resolution at the end! But it seemed like he wasn't affected by the lady's words as much as khushi was!!

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Loved the update!!! Loved the way your Khushi thinks inspite of all that happened ... Any other girl wd hv been totally miffed with Arnav... But not Khushi... She realised that he too is a deeply pained soul... N wanted to take away his pain!!! To become his Khushi, his happiness!

Beautifully portrayed emotions !!! Loved it !!!!!!