||~Something About You~||#9 *COMPLETED* - Page 50

Hello Farah !

This is Shobhana here ! The intro is necessary cause, i just caught up with this FF of yours yesterday, and *phew* thankfully finished it before sleeping, kyunki bina uske to I couldnt have slept a second !

So the first thing I need to tell you is, Shyam Manohar Jha.. 52 chapters, and since you hadnt event mentioned him in the passing I wouldnt have never ever even in my dreams expected him to be there ! But arghh >< I hate this name, I know he might just turn out to be good, but this silent Shyam who walks in like a suitor and offers Khushi jalebis and is going around calling himself Khushi's friend, I find him the most irritating and dangerous ! Hopefully he is just a normal person, I mean doesnt have the streak of evilness ! Pwease ?

And now coming to the rest !
Arnav-Khushi ki prem kahaani ! Oh their love story has everything ! drama,action,shouting, crying and recently epiphanies from Arnav ! Im gonna be a bit biased here, but I liked Arnav's epiphany better than I liked Khushi, I dont know why but I just loved his epiphany of love, OK wait, no I even loved Khushi's let me make it neutral, I loved both their epiphanies !

And a special mention to some scenes I really loved !
The first one being Arnav seeing Khushi for the first time on the road, and realising that she was Baby Gupta, or Khushi Kumari Gupta better put ! That scene had this simplicity and the way Arnav was struggling between his thoughts of remembering her as Baby Gupta or referring to her as the bomb ! Soon followed by the incessant chatter that Khushi gives later on ... That was my first love here in this FF !

Then to the party at Arnav's guesthouse ! Khushi feeling jealous for the first time, Arnav getting pissed at her, their fight and yet the way Arnav was the first to realise and save her from Karan ! Love was already in the air ! And their first kiss.. I was gaga over it for hours It was just so descriptive and so dreamy !

The part where she avoids Arnav after the kiss, and their confrontation in the kitchen ! Khushi-paagal hain, par cute hai ! I love her ! And the way Khushi makes Payal makes confess to her about Aakash , the sister bond was amazingly explored !

The scene where Khushi finally realises her love for Arnav, the fact that she is ready to be with him, even if it means no string ! And the rain, the whole effect was just amazing farah. You really wrote that part so well, the whole scene came up to life and I really felt like watching a movie ! And the soon followed first date was as amazing as ever !

The scene at the terrace where Arnav gives her the ring and the fight soon after( call me a bit of a sadist, but that was amaing) ! And inspite of all that, he comes back to her with bandage ! Also a special mention to the fact, the way they both fight and go away, and as soon as they part ways, the itchy feeling they have ! True to the tagline "Mohabbat Door Jaane na de, Nafrat paas aane na de " I love all those moments here !

And finally finally, when khushi gave herself fully to Arnav, and the way Arnav has slowly and now finally realised his love, the scenes were fantastic ! Also a special mention yet again to Arnav and Khushi's fighter spirits ! The way Khushi actually asks Dadi about beating Arnav around with a stick, and the way Arnav stood by her during the Mehendi ! These two are amazing fighters, and I love and respect them ! And individually tooo, fighting the demons of their past, and accepting it is never easy, oh simply put it is hell ! But the way you show them coming to terms with it is totally amazing !

Thanks a lot for writing this FF Farah ! Really a beautiful splendid, amazing, fantastic, superb (Im running short of words here ) FF ! And I love it very much, makes it to my list of favorites ! Thank you for wriitng ! Love you loads !

Love n Cheers
Shobi

PS: I guess i forgot to mention ! I love Rohan-Khushi bonding too, and almost every other bond you've tried and explored here with near perfection !
PPS: The scenes i mentioned, are just some, I actually loved all of them !
PPPS: Sorry for making you read my blabber ! and thank you tooo !
PPPS: The next update pweasseee *innocent*

Loved the update..
Arnav wants two brothers for the girls..
He wants to have a family with her..
Arnav trying to propose to Khushi, poor guy
whenever he tries to do something nice for her
some bad happens, I have a feeling ...

Omg...
He actually opened up to her
And really gow could he not???
Khushi asked in such a cute way...
And wow... Is he really gonna propose???
But i bet summats bound to go wrong..:(
Well done farah

i have been reading your FF since it started and i have been loving it...im excited for the next chapter...you are an awesome writer...thanks for sharing with us your piece of work

Mindblowing extraordinary update... Arnav is sneaking into his girlfriends room in the night, without being noticed by any one..so he feels Khushi being tagged as his girlfriend is an insult to her, so he clearly understands that she is special to him...

"Waise, why are you so happy about the condoms?" Arnav looked up at her at that & asked sarcastically before pressing kisses to her jaw, "Do you wanna get pregnant?" But Khushi's instant reply froze him in his actions, "Of course, I do!"
"Someday, I meant! Maybe.. In distant future.. Who knows?! I had always wanted a little girl. Maybe two little girls.. But that's from when I was 10, so forget it!"
She accidently blurted out to Arnav that she wants to become pregnant and that too wishes to have two girls... Is it that Khushi is okay to become pregnant out of the pre-martial relationship with Arnav, she wants to have a baby from him. I feel that knowing Arnav, she had no expectations that he would marry her, and also she had entered into this "no string attached " relationship, probably she would love to make baby with him. Only Arnav has rights on her, she probably feels that he touched her and it is enough for the rest of her life, and conceiving a baby with him has become her wish, because they have become one now in all senses .. body,mind and soul...

Arnav's thoughts were still lingering on to Khushi wanting kids...Two girls. Girls who would probably look like her.. red plump cheeks, big golden eyes & bright sunny smile. & just before Arnav himself drifted off to sleep, his last drowsy, sleepy thought was, they'd need a couple of brothers for each of the girls. If they looked anything like Khushi, they'd each need a couple of brothers to save themselves from the wolves of the world like Arnav.
Everytime Arnav makes love to Khushi and they become one, looks like his realization power shoots up. The first intimacy made him to realize that he is in love with her and this time, he is already thinking of having a family with her. He wants to create half a dozen kids..boys and girls.. Brothers to protect their sisters from bad guys like him... The thought of him being father to beautiful daughters like Khushi put him into thinking what he is doing with Khushi is wrong, probably when he thought about his daughters being lusted by guys...

Precap is interesting...Can't wait for the next update... He is planning to propose to her.. He has realized want he wants ....Khushi forever....She is his happiness and he can't let her go off..He wants to share his feeling with Khushi first, as she is the one who deserves to know this first...Wow, he planning to propose her by giving the same ring which he had initially gifted to her and put on her finger; same one which Khushi had been asking him after they patched up...Looking forward to see how he would propose Khushi, as words are not his cup of tea...

I just hope she want guff up this time saying something nonsensical to him ..
Aaawww yes yes six kids .. sounds too good two girls n four boys.

lovely update...aww he opens up to her...

I read d whole SAY till dis thread all ib one go...so dis wil be first tym i wil commenting ON the update!!
i jusyt love love love arshi sooo much!!they are there fr each odr ...he let her in...in his lil world...can they get anymore cuter???
hevwants sons to protect his daughters...hayeee...how adorable...
precap...is he gonna propose..like seriously???
i m sooo happy l...i was waiting fr dis day...i just wanna see hew he does dat!!
AMZInG UpDATE!!!