ArHi OS: Love Language

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know I shouldn't be posting anything. My one SS is on hold and than my FF is on hold too. I am still mad at my cousin for giving me a FF that is already posted. Anyways I saw this video on Facebook and I needed to write an OS based on Arnav and Khuhsi. Although I am getting the concept, the way actors act, and the dialogues from the video but I am putting the thoughts of our Arnav in the OS. I hope you enjoy it.

I would really appreciate if you put this song on first and than read the update. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvaGiLSmRNI
If you want to see the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lmq321zjkvs

Arnav's POV

Day 1

The cold breeze touched my face and gave me the calm feeling. The fresh air made my whole body come alive. The birds chirping noise was a music to my ear. Today was a beautiful day and like everyday I came here to study and enjoy my evening. I was walking towards my usual spot when I saw a girl sitting on my spot. I frowned seeing her sitting over there but let it go because there was still a lot of space and she was sitting at the corner of the bench. I walked towards my spot and I noticed the girl. Her black, silky hair blowing in air made my heart beat faster. Her milky skin made me have goosebumps.. Her smile made me smile too. She was listening to the songs and she had earphones in her ear. I had this urge to talk to her. I went and sat on the opposite side of the bench and looked at her. She was still engrossed in her notebook and she didn't noticed me. I was really nervous to talk to her. I don't know why but I was. I moved a little closer to her and tried to look at her from the corner of my eye but she still didn't notice me. I thought to talk to her and say something.

"Nice day today huh?" I said but she didn't listen to me. She was still engrossed in her notebook. I got nervous again. I thought she doesn't want to talk to me. I shifted a little uncomfortably and took a deep breath and asked "Can I borrow your pen?". She looked at me and gave me the confuse look and I said "pen" and I pointed at pen and she gave me the pen. I wrote something on the book and gave it to her. "I appreciate it" I smiled and she smiled back and took the pen. Her smile made my heart skip a beat. I really need to talk to this girl. I think I like her. I was lost in my thoughts and I thought to say something to her. I turned around to talk to her but she wasn't there. She left. A disappointment came through me but I ignored it. I thought to come tomorrow and see her again.

Day 2

I came 30 minutes early. I was waiting for her. I knew she will be here. My heart had the feeling that she will be here. I was waiting for her impatiently. I keep checking my time. I thought of working on my work and I got busy. After 30 minutes I saw her that she came and sat there on the same spot. I looked at her and she smiled at me. Her smile again made my heart skip a beat. I decided to talk to her today. I moved closer to her and asked "What are you listening to?" She pointed to her earphones indicating me that she can't hear me. I thought that she didn't wanted to talk so I thought of something.

The good thing was I bought the sticky notes with me. I took a bundle of sticky note and I wrote "What are you listening to?". I put that sticky note on the space that was between us and put the bundle of sticky note next to it so she could reply me and to my excitement she smiled at my sticky note and took one sticky note and wrote something. She put it on the top of the sticky note on which I wrote. I looked at her sticky note and it made me smile. It said "A special song". I took the sticky note and wrote "Can I listen to it?" I put the sticky note and she took a different sticky note and wrote something on it. I looked at her sticky note and it made me frowned. It said "I am embarrassed". Why would she be embarrassed? I ignored and wrote something to change the topic. We decided to talk or should I say communicate like that and we were easily communicating. Her messages were cute and funny. She laughed at my messages and her laugh was like a music to my ear. It was very addictive laugh.

I saw that there were piles of sticky notes in the middle of us and with different message. One said about her age, one said about her name, her name was Khushi. One said about her favorite foods that were jalebis, gol gappas, chaat, aaloo ke pakode and one said about her favorite memory when her dad gave her the red rose on her birthday.

I finally decided to ask her about her phone number. I was a little nervous about her reaction but I ignored that nervousness in me and I wrote "I'd love to meet you again. Can I have your number" and she wrote "No. I don't have one"
I smiled and wrote "Really? That's a terrible lie"
She smiled and shook her head and wrote something on a sticky note and I replied back to her. She read my sticky note, smiled at me, and left from there. Well want to know what the sticky note said. Well it said

"Haha. If you want, I'll be here again tomorrow." She wrote that.

"Sounds good! I'll see you then :)" I wrote.

Day 3

I was again early. I saw her coming, she again had earphones in her ear and she smiled at me and put a sticky note on it which said "It's nice to see you again" I smiled at her and she sat right next to me. Her skin was soft and she smelled like a rose. I figured it must be her perfume.

We start passing notes to each other and start goofing around and enjoying our time. I put a sticky note on her arm and she laughed and put a sticky note on my forehead and she laughed. Her laugh made me laugh. She again wrote something on the sticky note and she put it on my notebook. It said "Would you like to listen to my song".

"I'd like that" I wrote


She took her earphones out from her ear and gave it to me. I took it from her and put it in my ears. I frowned because there was nothing playing. I said to her "That's weird. I don't hear anything" and I turned towards her. I saw her doing a sign with her hands which said "I am deaf and I can't speak". This made my heart stopped. How could this happen to a poor girl but I ignored that thought. I don't care what disability she has. She is the normal human and I like her. So I took the sticky note and wrote "You're still beautiful". She read the note and smiled at me.

End of the OS

Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww... I LOVE THIS OS...

It is a bit sad but It is absolutely Beautiful.

A very Good Eye Opener towards the shortcomings of the Bad society.,,,

A Person's disability should not overpower their other talents...

Awesome One Shot... Worth Reading.👏

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome . .
Concept rocks . the way u wrote up :) oh my god you r awesome . . .
its just stayed in my heart :)
superb :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A L IPK ...WHAT A NICE TALE ...LOVED IT ALL THROUGH

THANKS FOR THE PM




KKKA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful Abdul its amazingly beautiful 👏 👍🏼 wow.
She can't speak or hear but her smile is magical and she is pretty beautiful and she looks like an angel...for him
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry sorry for being so late
but i simply loved it is truly a superb shot, actually mind blowing
and the concept i don't have words, hatts of for it ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️
i love the way at the end he said that she still is beautifull
loved it 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Abdul this was extremely cute

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