Kriyaansh: love awaits- *Chapter 10: page 51* (updated) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
that bloody arjun ... 😡
aur humare bechare reyam ... 😭
update acha tha ... 😊
thanxx for the pm ...
and update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part that arjun such a cheapo😡.. waiting fr whole truth n swayam's reaction to it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shelly!!!!!!!
Tereko mein maru ki ni naru ye soch rahi hun!
Hehehe...😆
Bahot achcha update tha yaar.
But ye arjun ko lane ke liye mein tereko maarungi!
Hehehe...😆
Loved d ReYam here!
Awesome update dear!
Totally loved it!!!:)
Update nxt part soon!!!:)

Love,
Ayu...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
All part are amazing
I hope secret resolve and kriyansh or sharon ke beech sab theek ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shelly update kab karogi?
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys back with an update!
Special thanks to Ayu aka Ayushi Enjoy! 😊

swayam: us Arjun ki toh!

reys phones beeps, he reads out the message

'kuch intizaam hua? yaad rakhna.. kissi ko matt bataana warna..'

swayam: yeh konse intizaam ki baat kar reh??

Rey looks up at swayam with tears flowing down his eyes..
swayam gets worried and confused. They both Hug,while swayam consoles rey
and tries to find out the truth...


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Chapter 5:~
Swayam comforts rey and they both part

swayam: rey yeh intizaam??

rey: *sniffs* sw..swayam.. isey pehle mein tumhe yeh batao.. mujhe
tumhe sharon ki story batani paregi...

swayam becomes even more curious to know what happend..
rey gets up to turn his back to swayam

rey: uss dinn shaam ko.. jaise arjun ne promise kiya,
woh sharon k saath time spend karne waala tha.. usne sharon se
kehkar usse kissi hotel pe bhulaya


*Flashback*
hey babes.. aaj shaam ka plan yaad hai na?
arjun asked as he wrapped his arms around her waist and
rested his chin on her shoulder

Ofcourse yad hai! Aaj tum sirf mere saath time spend karoge.. aur koi nai!
Sharon said turning around, pulling him closer

Ok today 7:00, hotel pearl ok? now go get ready

ok 😳 sharon left blushing while arjun gave his crooked smile

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it was evening when sharon realised the time, she was excited,
as much as she was for their first date, she was expecting arjun to pick her up
but he had told her to reach there herself. She Sighed and then smiled at the thoughts of him and her together. She was dressed in a black knee length dress with a little makeup.. looking at the time, she left to reach the place told by him

After reaching Hotel Pearl, she noticed a crowd gathering near the rooms at a distance.
ignoring the people she went to the reception

Sharon: excuse me? Arjun Malhotra kis room mein hai?

Recetionist: Room 205 ma'am

Sharon: Thank You

Sharon walked towards the room, she tried to take a look at the crowd
but chucked her thoughts and entered inside her room.
She looked inside the room only to find it empty. After calling arjun several times,
she sighed sitting on the bed.

Sharon: Urgh!! yeh arjun kaha haii!! phone bhi nai uthara!

She heard the door knock

Sharon: ab aara hai yeh arjun.. bataati hoon mein usse
she went and opened the door but instead of arjun she saw 3 guys there.
They entered inside the room nudging past sharon

Sharon: K..kkon ho tum log?? Au..aur yahan kyun aye ho??

boys: woh sab jaan ke kya karogi.. humme bus apna kaam karne doh
The boy touched sharons cheek on which she flinched back,
the other grabbed her hand forcefully trying to kiss her..

Sharon: chr..choro mujhe.. Arjunn!!

Boys: arey arjun arjun kya chilla rahi ho.. ussi ne toh humme yahan bheja hai

Sharon was shocked, paying no heed to them; she tried to let herself free
Finally she hit her elbow in the boys stomach and ran from there..
She ran off to the crowd where she knew the boys won't be able to harm her,
but the scene inside the room caught her eyes.. she was shocked beyond limitss!!
Arjun was caught sleeping with another girl which is why the crowd was gathered..
Sharon went inside the room and slapped Arjun

Sharon: U.. u cheater!! Apni girlfriend ko yahan bhula k kisi aur k saath soh rey ho?
Aur unn larko ko mere paas tumne bheja?!
chee sharam aati hai mujhe tumhe apna boyfriend kehete hui!!

Arjun: oh plz Babes.. tumhe kya lagha mein tumse pyar karta hoon?
Naa.. yeh toh har uss na ka badla hai joh tumne mujhe kaha tha..

Sharon: you.. che..cheapter.. kitne ghir sakte ho!

tears led their way down through sharons eyes as she kneeled down on the floor..
she truly loved him and never expected him to do anything like that..
The crowd their had noticed it all and how arjun turned out to be a cheat..

*Flashback ends*


Rey: And thats when me and vicky reached there..

Both swayam and rey had tears trickling down their eyes,
Rey had always taken care of sharon as his sister, especially after what arjun did.
Then was Pin drop silence which was broken by swayam

swayam: dude.. tt..tum teekh toh ho na?

Rey: hmm

rey gave swayam a reassuring smile.
Swayam kept his hand on reys shoulder pulling him into a hug

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kriya was home alone getting bored. Sharon Had gone to the Shopping mall nearby. Kriya wasn't interested in going so she stayed home. Wondering what to do She reached her and sharons room

kriya: Sharon kab ayegii! College book tab tak dekh leti hoon

She walks towards the wardrobe and finds the college memories book. She remembers how she saw arjun and sharons pik and how sharon ripped it without reason. she skipped through the book, hoping she would find something more

kriya: kuch toh hoga yahan..

she finds a pik of them together where arjun is holding sharons hand sliding the ring on her finger. It was of their first date.. The caption below it said "Arjun&Sharon<3"
Kriya had guessed it was sharons ex boyfriend but she was unsure because she had never saw him

kriya: yeh sharon ka bf?? lekin kaise.. mein toh ussi college mein thi.. shayad usse pehle.. lekin sharon toh mujhe sab bataati hai.. phir yeh kyun nai?

kriya was so engrossed in her thoughts; she didn't realise when sharon came

sharon: hey kriyaa.. dekh mein kya layee (holding up shopping bags) .. kriyaa.. kiski photo hai yeh?

Kriya: sh..sharon.. arjun tera boyfriend tha??

The bags fall out of sharons hand, while sharons is shocked and doesn't respond

Kriya: sharonn.. kya hua.. sorry mein college book dekh rhi thi toh yeh photo

she shows sharon the pic of arjun and her.. tears again start forming in sharons eyes. Kriya notices this and hugs sharons..

Sharon hugged kria tightly n cried her heart out. Kria rubbed her back to soothe her.
She pulled sharon towards d bed n made her sit on it.
Kria kneeled on d floor in front of sharon n held her hand n said

"Sharon? is there anything u want to share?
Sharon wiped her tears n confessed d truth to her... she told her how Arjun turned out to be a cheat, how he dated her for revenge and how he sent those guys while he was in bed with someone else

kriya felt disgusted, she never thought her best friend had been through so much
She was full of life, always consoling kriya after rey had gone.. anyone would think she was free from pain

Sharon: k..kriya you know, i thought k mein kabhi move on nai kar paongi kabhi pyar nai karoongi and i'll never trust anyone again.. lekin thats when i met swayam. He thaught me how to smile, laugh, to trust and most of all to live life. kriya, not all guys are the same.. we just need to understand some,

kriya understood sharon was refering to rey, kriya got lost in her thought when sharon again spoke

sharon: im glad swayam came in my life and i learnt how to move on..

sharon said while ripping all the pictures of her and arjun

Kriya: and im glad u did..

kriya gave her a smile and they both hugged. Sharon felt her shoulder get wet and wiped kriyas tears.
"give him some time kriya" was all sharon whispered and continued to cuddle her


Thats it for now
PMS later :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
ReYam n KriSha- both parts were awesome...
Continue soon
Edited by --Shukti-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awieee!!!
Amazing chapter my sweet shelly! 😊
No thnx to me yaar, i already said dat...:)
I loved d Reyam n Krisha bonds!:)
It must be so wonderful to hv such frnds.
Yuck!
Dat cheapo Arjun is getting on my nerves..!!
I loved d last line said by Sharon to Kria,
"give him some time kriya"
It was amazing dear..!!

Lots of love,
Ayu...❤️
Edited by ayu_kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Nice bonding btwn reyam n krisha
Hey pls next time a big update than this
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Wah wah Shelly kya update tha
Bohot hi super tha loved it!! 😉
The bonding between reyam and Krisha is just awesome
Poor Sharon feel sorry for her but she found swayam now 👏
Next time bada update dena please
Thanks for the pm dear
😊
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago

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