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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
That was a good try to welcome the new character.
Good one !!!
waiting to know whether ACP ll track down or not.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
arre waah its fabulous 👏
interesting concept😊👏
wrong no. ahaan
hot shot criminal😆 par arjun se hot nahi hoga😆😉
continue soon di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
A very, very nice one shot Vidya.
Well done.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Hello Arjunians...back with a new part...pls read and reply

thanks for liking and commenting on it!

Part 2:

He immediately called Rathod and let him know about it...They verify the credibility of the information and find that there could be a truth in it...So they plan an operation to nail down the hidden criminal!

Amidst all the planning, Arjun had already set Shree with the task of tracking down the number from which he received the call and also dig out all possible information about the mail sent!!

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The operation was planned quickly and it was a full proof plan...The details in her mail was so accurate and to the dot that there were no chances of a failure...

ETF's brilliance was a cherry on the cake...and nothing could falter!

The criminal who was giving a tough time to the entire police department and who was also a suspect in a few bomb blasts was nabbed by ETF and few of his people from the same gang were also nailed!

After the tiring mission, the team retired back to the office...Though Arjun was quite satisfied and happy that a few dangerous criminals were caught by the operation, his mind was still confused about Miss wrong number...the anonymous caller had left him in a puzzled mind state...her identity being unknown to them wasn't surely a good sign...there could be so many possibilities...

He had to track her...

As if reading his mind, Shree came into his cabin...

"sir, uss ladki bohat chaalaak hai...abi bhi uss phone switched off hai aur isiliye track nahi ho raha...aur number fake identity pe liya hai...koyi Mr Dixit ke naam pe hai aur address bhi galath hai..."

Arjun thought for a second and enquired "aur woh mail??"

Shree: thats more interesting sir...private network hai...I am not able to crack it either..."

Arjun: iss ka matlab woh khaafi planning ke saat operate kar rahi hai Shree...par ETF se identity chupaakar help kyun kar rahi hai?

Shree: [mindlessly fumbles out playfully] zaroor aapko pattaane keliye hi kar rahi hogi!

Arjun's ears had caught it rightly...he shot back "KYA??? Kya kaha tumne?"

Shree snaps out and corrects himself "mera matlab Sir, shaayad woh bhi koyi badaa gang ka hissa hai...aise chote chote information dekhar humerin help karne ke peeche uss gang ka koyi badaa maksath ho..."

Arjun thinks and replies "ho saktha hai...aur nahi bhi...ETF se itna badaa khel aur itni badi risk??aur woh bhi ek ladki...[When Shree starts to say something, Arjun snaps and adds] haan mujhe patha hai ke aurat ke khabiliyat pe shaq nahi karna chahiye...phir bhi thodi mushkil lag rahi hai..."

Shree: [nodding] aapko usski baaton se kya laga Sir??? Kya woh genuine lagi??ya phir...

Arjun: obviously genuine hi lagi... warna main ek anonymous phone call aur mail ke basis par itna bada step nahi letha...she sounded so right...

Shree: ek hi call pe impression jamaa gayi...Interesting...very interesting...

Shree had unknowingly voiced it out as he plays around with Chotu, Aisha and Liza...He forgot for a second that he was talking to Arjun...Arjun glared at him for that and Shree would have burned down to ashes if he hadn't muttered a feeble sorry "Sorry sir...maine aise hi..."

Arjun cut him short "uss number ko continuously tracking pe rakhna..."

Shree: aapko lagtha hai ke woh dobaara call karegi?

Arjun: iss sheher mein criminals ya crime rate mein koyi kami nahi...toh woh zaroor agle information dene keliye call karegi...humein kuch bhi karke yeh wrong number ko dhoondna hai!

Shree nods and at that same instant Arjun's phone rings...

Arjun picks up in 2 rings "hello"

"Congratulations ACP sir... aapke team ne bohat kamaal ka kaam kiya hai... "

It was a new number and Arjun didn't want to show off to her that he recognized her voice "hello...aap kaun?"

Voice: oh come on...dont tell me that you didn't recognize me...abi aap mere baare mein hi soch rahe teh na? Aur lijiye main haazir...

Arjun: miss wrong number?

Voice: arre waah...aapne toh yeh bhi guess kar liya ke main Miss hoom, mrs nahi...aapke intuitions ka jawaab nahi...haan main hi hoom...Miss Wrong Number!

Arjun was a bit annoyed "Fisool ki baatein karna shaayad tumhe bhi pasand nahi...so come to the point!"

Voice: kaam ke baat yeh hai ke agli baar yeh arrest warrest ke chakkar mein matth padiye...aise cold blooded criminals aur terrorists ko direct encounter kar dhaaliye...atleast case, court mein time waste nahi hoga!

Arjun: [angrily] tum humein humaare duty math sikhaavo...tumne humaara help kiya, isska matlab yeh nahi ke tum ab ETF ke uphar ho...samjhi ya samjhaavum?

Voice: [casually] ok...maine toh bas ek advice...

Arjun: apni advice apni paas rakho...mujhe unki koyi zaroorat nahi hai...

Voice: ufff itna ghussa...chalo teek hai...humein bhi kisi ko advice dene mein koyi khaas interest nahi hai...par ek baat zaroor kehna chahthi hoom...aapke technical expert se zyaadha kaam karwaane ki zaroorat nahi...bechaara...mujhe dhoondte dhooondte thak jaayega...kyun ki mujhe dhoondna mushkil hi nahi naa mumkin hai...samjhe ya samjhaavum ACP sir?

Arjun: What the hell!

Voice: jaathe jaathe...ek special mail bhej rahi hoom...check it out...

The line goes dead before Arjun could reply...

Shree had judged that it was her and was already on his futile attempt to track the call...

Arjun furiously puts the phone down and mutters to himself "kaun ho tum?" as he clicks open his inbox to receive the new mail...

[To be continued]

so how was it? pls do reply!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Vidya Di,it was superb and interesting.
Loved it.
Miss wrong number aur Arjun ka connection...
Hmmm...
Kuch toh chut raha hai...
Bt,loved it a lot
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome
hope we have such dhamakedar entry on screen too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
"interesting very interesting" update di..uff i can imagine..agar koi arjun ki help kare aur wo uske bare me janta nai ho toh bechare shree ki bari aagayi samjh lena chahiye😆 LOVED her convo with arjun..naak dam kardiya uske aur upar se arjun ko advice😆 lagta hai sacha impression pada hai uska arjun par new mail?matlab ek aur help arjun ki😎 hayee i wish miss wrong number ryt ho arjun ke liye😉 di you are making me fall for ds "miss wrong number"😳
chalo di main chali hu,mail check karne arjun se saat😉
superb interesting..update di..love you for this..hugs🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
trigger, tumhe bubbly girl and Arjun ki story chahiye thi na?? isilye miss wrong number ko bubbly banaa dhi...
ab agle weekend ke baadh isska naam rakhenge...vaani ya jo bhi ho...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
hi vidya di🤗... new os🥳🥳🥳...awesome idea... miss wrong number😉😉😉😉😉😉...badi smart n intelligent hai...acp rawte ko bhi nacha rahi apni ungliyon par😆😆😆😆😆...not bad...kya plaaning hai 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...nw tell me whay she is helping etf...that too why only arjun...huh...😉😉😉😉...hope hummari new entry bhi aisi hi ho... congrats on ur new os...hello my dear wrong number...and iss miss wrong number ka naam kya hai????...poor shree😆😆😆...sach hi to kaha tha kya impression choda hai...arjun ko pataane ke liye🤣... updtae soon di...mujhe zmd chahiye aaj...mlega kya...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...ek short update plz kal xams hai isliye bol rahi hu plz di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
yeah, trying to write a small ZMD update...will post it by tonight...

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