~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ New thread link posted - Page 83

res... will be done by tomorrow for sure... unres...
the chapter was nice and great finally kriya reveal it up to them that
she is in love with rey... and rivaan his their son...
and finally kriya ask rey that she wont to go with alia back home...
but to deradaun and just to visit and look thing are good over there and
rey did wont them to go... still allowed with his son...
percap is quite scare... look forward to read more...
do continue soon and pm me

awesome...kria and rivaan back to dehradun...pls no mus between kriyansh...

Awesome update...

So this is basically buggie here... :D

coming to the update...

that as so amazing...

just loved the way you wrote it...

one can get how overwhelming it can get.. a person changes place... that is so overwhelming.. and here it is the thing that she is changing nearly her entire life...

i just loved the way you showed the ways how it asn't working out an everything..

just brilliant...

the way you handled it was amazing..

waiting for next... :D

Amazing update
loved it
thnx 4 pm

As usual superb update
Luvd it
Amazingly written

wow it was an amazing update..

amazing read all d parts in one go all i can say is WOW