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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Mannu teri aisi ki taisi... 😡

what the hell was the tagline...????? 😡

bhaag yahan se tu... 🤬

but i think this sudden twist was certainly required... lol... maybe... 😆

coming to the part.. it was nice... i loved it... 😃

mann... kria toh kuch zyada he open types nahi ho gayi hai... 🤣

and Cheevam.. as usual galat tym pe entry... hey bhaggu... kya hoga uska... 🤣

in all loved it...

lets see wat u gonna do in next update... 😛

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

awsome update
lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

it was so lovely...

Just lov how you showed it...

Everything was so beautifully written...

i just loved how u showed everything slowly and sweetly...

amazingly written...

and then shivam ko daant padi..

mere ji ko thandak mili...

i just loved how u show their relation... preety amazing... :D

check ur scraps..

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

again simply awesome..!

loved d story line..bt wht did d tag line mean???

anyways update soon..! 😊

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

it was ahmazing...

beautifully written...

i so loved it...

the way rey was making her feel...just beautiful...

and shivam ese khi bhi ghus aata hai...😆

matlab rey ki to koi personal life hi nhi hai...😆

rey ne daant lagayi m soo happy...

earlier i was thinking k ab isme kya twist hoga...

and after your tagline m shocked...

i just can't wait to read further...

its gonna be more interesting...

plz update soon... (:

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

osm update...and whats with the tagline???

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Woah!! Kria surely has turned Bold and very much confident...

Can't believe that she was actually saying all that to Rey 😉...

But when she is 'This' close to Rey - sari boldness gayab ho jati hai 😳...

Both of them can't leave each other ,'every night romance karna zaroori hota hai ☺️...

Ah!! N here returns the great 'Haddi' N an 'Idiot' - Shivam...

KR ka Morning Romance kharab hogaya 😆...

Wah!! Kya jhar pari Shivam ko , very well done 👍🏼...

The part was Great 😃...

Me loving the story ❤️...

About the tagline , Mujhe sachi mein jhatka laga ...

Honestly!! In the start i did think about this , about Rey pretending to be so caring But maybe then i went with the flow N forgot about that...

Ab toh i'll have read each each word bohat carefully ...

N i completely trust u , i know u won't give us a serious wala Jhatka 😛 😳...

Will be waiting for the next part...

N thanks for the pm 😊

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Jily

@Jily

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

☺️☺️☺️

did i mention kr romance makes me blush and this one made me red...

i was waiting for the day kriya turned bold towards rey...

FINALLY

shivam...always has to disturb two early love birds...

precap...

i am dying of suspense...what is rey upto...

but whatever it is...I LOVE TWISTS IN A STORY...they cannot romance their whole lives...there has to be a twist and i am glad that is coming up soon...