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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Swayams's character is really Great ...

N so is the bond shared by KriYam...

Hmm..Rey's morning must be really wonderful...

Waking up beside ur son N most importantly getting 'Morning Kisses' 😉...

Rivaan saw his Mommy N his Dadda *Which was found last night* very close...He will be getting to see this more often now 😆...

Aww!!! Rivaan got his 'Real Dadda' N he is already comfortable with him...

He is Sweet..

Rey eating 'Kung Fu Panda Cereal' , Kria surly has two babies now 😆...

Along with a Dadda RV got Aunt Neha and Uncle Vicky as well , nicee...

Hmm...Kria deciding to go Mumbai along with RV , I hope their relationship works out 😊...

The part was Superb as always 😃..

Loving the story ❤️...

Will be waiting for the next part...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Awesome update
Its good that everything is fine now.
Kria decided to move mumbai.Hope its a good decision for them
Waiting for next part
Ps. aarav is perfect as Rivaan

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Awesome update
Its good that everything is fine now.
Kria decided to move mumbai.Hope its a good decision for them
Waiting for next part
Ps. aarav is perfect as Rivaan

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

amazing update pls continue soon

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

wow.. nice update.. loved it.. in love wit d update... d way u showed d rivaan askin ques relating to rey n his real dadda like his friends were cute n nice.. loved d bond of al in d ff beautifully.. finally KR going to mumbai with their son.. hoping everything s fine between them.. waiting for next part..

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

superb update...

amazingly written..

till nw everything is perfect...

thnx 4 de pm..

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Awesome updates :-)

Loved the Rivaan-KriYaansh moments :D they are so cute

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Hey ...

Fantastic part ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for more ...

Continue soon ..

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

amazinggg update👏

loovveedd ittt😊

rivaan-rey's bond s niceee😊

waiting for d nxt part😊

unresd my prev comment too😳

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Oh. Finally things come to a happy turn, and please, try to keep them there for a while.

:)

Perhaps, I am really enjoying reading this FF, and Mania, it is a completely beauty and a work flawless. You write exceedingly well, and of course, I am a certain proud reader of this one.

Also, I had this tweeny-meeny doubt. Is Swayam actually Kria's brother, or like "namesake" or what you say in Hindi "Mooh-Bola Bhai". I have been wondering that for a long time, now.

They all are childhood friends, so Swayam just calls her sometimes sis, lovingly.
He is not any mooh-bola-bhai.

Anyways. Girl you ROCKED it!

Love.

Oh, and yeah, Aarav is my choice, as well.